Welcome to "Look We Have Coming to Dover!"
In this chapter, we explore Daljit Nagra’s vibrant and energetic poem, "Look We Have Coming to Dover!". This poem is a core part of your Unit 1 Section A: Post-2000 Poetry study. It is a powerful exploration of the immigrant experience, showing the journey of people coming to Britain in search of a better life. Don’t worry if the language seems a bit unusual at first—that is actually part of the poem's clever design!
1. Understanding the Title and the "Big Idea"
The title is the first thing you notice. It sounds slightly "incorrect" or "broken," doesn't it? This is intentional. Nagra is using a mix of English and Punjabi influences (sometimes called "Punglish") to show the voice of someone whose first language might not be English.
The Allusion: The title also references two famous pieces of older English literature: "Dover Beach" by Matthew Arnold and "Look! We Have Come Through!" by D.H. Lawrence. By echoing these famous "classic" titles, Nagra is claiming a space for modern immigrants in the long history of English poetry.
The Setting: Dover is a famous port in Kent, known for its iconic White Cliffs. To many, these cliffs represent the "wall" or "gateway" of Britain. For an immigrant, they can represent both a welcome and a barrier.
Key Takeaway:
The poem is about the struggle, excitement, and transformation of immigrants as they arrive in the UK and eventually become part of its culture.
2. Form and Structure (AO2)
When you look at the poem on the page, you will notice it has a very specific shape. Nagra uses five stanzas, each with five lines.
The "Wave" Shape
Notice how the lines in each stanza get longer and then shorter?
- The first line is short.
- The middle lines grow longer.
- The final line of the stanza is often very short.
This mimics the movement of waves hitting the shore at Dover. It also suggests the instability of a boat journey and the uncertainty of the immigrants' lives as they arrive.
Enjambment (Running over lines)
The poem uses a lot of enjambment (where one line flows into the next without a comma or full stop). This creates a sense of momentum and speed, reflecting the frantic or hurried nature of trying to enter a country unnoticed.
3. Language and Tone (AO2)
Nagra’s language is one of the most exciting parts of the poem. He blends "high" poetic language with "low" slang or colloquialisms.
A "Mash-up" of Voices
You will find sophisticated words like "invade" or "phlegm" alongside informal words like "cushy" or "yobish."
- Why do this? It shows the collision of cultures. It represents the way an immigrant’s language evolves as they settle into a new country.
- It also challenges the idea of what "proper" English should sound like.
Metaphors of Nature
The poem describes the newcomers using imagery that makes them seem like part of the natural world. They are linked to the sea and the wind. This suggests that their arrival is as inevitable and powerful as the weather.
The Shift in Tone
The poem starts with a sense of secrecy and fear (hiding from the authorities, the cold, the "stowed" away feeling). However, by the end, the tone becomes more triumphant and settled. The speaker imagines a future where they are sipping gin and tonic and "blanching" in the British sun—becoming "British" themselves.
4. Key Themes
To do well in your exam, you should be able to discuss these three main themes:
- Identity and Belonging: How does someone become "British"? The poem suggests it is a process of changing language and status.
- The Immigrant Experience: The poem doesn't hide the hardships—the cold, the "un-clocked" hours of work, and the feeling of being an outsider.
- Language as Power: By using "Punglish," Nagra turns a "broken" version of English into a beautiful, rhythmic, and powerful poetic tool.
5. Making Connections (AO4)
In your Unit 1 exam, you will need to compare this poem to another from the Poems of the Decade anthology. Here are some quick ideas for links:
Compare with "The Deliverer" (Tishani Doshi): Both poems deal with moving between different cultures and the difficulty of finding a home.
Compare with "The Map Woman" (Carol Ann Duffy): Both poems explore how our identity is tied to the places we come from and the places we go.
Compare with "Out of the Bag" (Seamus Heaney): Both use complex, layered language to explore personal and cultural history.
Quick Review: Check Your Understanding
Common Mistake to Avoid: Don't assume the poem is only about being sad or a "victim." While it mentions the "hard-un-clocked" work, the poem ends with a sense of pride and success. It is a poem of survival!
Memory Trick: Think of the poem as a staircase. The immigrants start at the bottom (hiding, cold, at the shore) and climb up until they are at the top (drinking G&Ts, looking at the view, belonging).
Key Summary Points:
1. Title: References classic English literature but uses an immigrant "voice."
2. Structure: Five quintains (5-line stanzas) shaped like waves.
3. Language: A vibrant mix of "Punglish," slang, and high-level vocabulary.
4. Journey: Moves from the physical struggle of arrival to the cultural success of belonging.
5. Purpose: To celebrate the energy and contribution of immigrants to British life.