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25 PastPaper.marksRead the following passage from Act IV, Scene ii of The Duchess of Malfi and then answer the question.
[Enter BOSOLA, disguised as an Old Man]
DUCHESS: ...Am I not Duchess?
BOSOLA: I am Duchess of Malfi still.
DUCHESS: That makes thy sleeps so broken:
Glories, like glow-worms, afar off shine bright,
But look'd to near, have neither heat nor light.
DUCHESS: Thou art very plain.
BOSOLA: My trade is to flatter the dead, not the living;
I am a tomb-maker.
DUCHESS: And thou com'st to make my tomb?
BOSOLA: Yes.
DUCHESS: Let me be a little merry:—of what stuff wilt thou make it?
BOSOLA: Nay, resolve me first, of what fashion?
DUCHESS: Why, do we grow fantastical in our death-bed? do we affect fashion in the grave?
BOSOLA: Most ambitiously. Princes' images on their tombs do not lie, as they were wont, seeming to pray up to heaven, but with their hands under their cheeks, as if they died of the tooth-ache; they are not carved with their eyes open, and in their wild disorders, as if they would scape out of the scaffold, but as if they had gone to sleep.
Explore the significance of the aspects of dramatic tragedy in this passage in relation to the play as a whole.
In your answer you must:
* Analyse the tragic aspects shown in the passage.
* Show how these aspects are significant in the wider play.
* Evaluate the dramatic impact of Webster's staging and language in this scene.
[Enter BOSOLA, disguised as an Old Man]
DUCHESS: ...Am I not Duchess?
BOSOLA: I am Duchess of Malfi still.
DUCHESS: That makes thy sleeps so broken:
Glories, like glow-worms, afar off shine bright,
But look'd to near, have neither heat nor light.
DUCHESS: Thou art very plain.
BOSOLA: My trade is to flatter the dead, not the living;
I am a tomb-maker.
DUCHESS: And thou com'st to make my tomb?
BOSOLA: Yes.
DUCHESS: Let me be a little merry:—of what stuff wilt thou make it?
BOSOLA: Nay, resolve me first, of what fashion?
DUCHESS: Why, do we grow fantastical in our death-bed? do we affect fashion in the grave?
BOSOLA: Most ambitiously. Princes' images on their tombs do not lie, as they were wont, seeming to pray up to heaven, but with their hands under their cheeks, as if they died of the tooth-ache; they are not carved with their eyes open, and in their wild disorders, as if they would scape out of the scaffold, but as if they had gone to sleep.
Explore the significance of the aspects of dramatic tragedy in this passage in relation to the play as a whole.
In your answer you must:
* Analyse the tragic aspects shown in the passage.
* Show how these aspects are significant in the wider play.
* Evaluate the dramatic impact of Webster's staging and language in this scene.
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This passage is a pivotal moment of high tragic intensity in Act IV of John Webster's 'The Duchess of Malfi'. It dramatises the absolute confrontation between human dignity and mortal inevitability, a core theme of Elizabethan and Jacobean tragedy.
1. The Duchess's Defiance and Stoic Dignity:
The central tragic assertion is her famous statement: 'I am Duchess of Malfi still.' Even when stripped of her family, her freedom, and her political power, she clings to her identity and sovereignty. In the tragic tradition, this represents the ultimate defiance of the human spirit against external torment. Her readiness to 'be a little merry' and converse about her own tomb demonstrates her stoicism, a courage that elevates her status from victim to a classic tragic protagonist. This assertion of identity contrasts sharply with her brother Ferdinand's subsequent descent into lycanthropy, where he loses all human reason and identity.
2. Bosola as the Tragic Messenger and Commentator:
Bosola acts as a complex instrument of tragedy. Disguised as an Old Man/tomb-maker, he brings the grim reality of death directly to the Duchess. His philosophical reflections—such as the metaphor of worldly glories being like 'glow-worms' that offer no heat or light up close—reinforce the vanitas motif typical of Jacobean tragedy. Bosola is both executioner and spiritual guide; he strips away her earthly illusions to prepare her soul for death. His bitter observation of princes' tombs ('with their hands under their cheeks, as if they died of the tooth-ache') satirizes the vanity of the ruling class and their desperate attempts to control their image even in death.
3. Staging and Dramatic Methods:
Webster utilizes the macabre, gothic elements of Jacobean drama to create an atmosphere of dread and philosophical reflection. The physical presence of Bosola in disguise, presenting the tools of death, externalises the psychological pressure placed upon the Duchess. The dialogue shifts between grim prose and haunting poetic images, highlighting the collision of the mundane ('tooth-ache', 'tomb-maker') with the cosmic and eternal ('heaven', 'grave').
4. Significance to the Wider Play:
This scene acts as the climax of the Duchess's personal tragedy, setting the standard of noble endurance against which all other characters are measured. Her calm acceptance of death contrasts with the panic, guilt, and ignoble ends of the Cardinal, Ferdinand, and even Bosola himself in Act V. The play transitions after this scene from the tragedy of the Duchess to a tragedy of retribution and moral decay, demonstrating how her stoic light continues to cast a long shadow over her murderers, driving them to madness and self-destruction.
1. The Duchess's Defiance and Stoic Dignity:
The central tragic assertion is her famous statement: 'I am Duchess of Malfi still.' Even when stripped of her family, her freedom, and her political power, she clings to her identity and sovereignty. In the tragic tradition, this represents the ultimate defiance of the human spirit against external torment. Her readiness to 'be a little merry' and converse about her own tomb demonstrates her stoicism, a courage that elevates her status from victim to a classic tragic protagonist. This assertion of identity contrasts sharply with her brother Ferdinand's subsequent descent into lycanthropy, where he loses all human reason and identity.
2. Bosola as the Tragic Messenger and Commentator:
Bosola acts as a complex instrument of tragedy. Disguised as an Old Man/tomb-maker, he brings the grim reality of death directly to the Duchess. His philosophical reflections—such as the metaphor of worldly glories being like 'glow-worms' that offer no heat or light up close—reinforce the vanitas motif typical of Jacobean tragedy. Bosola is both executioner and spiritual guide; he strips away her earthly illusions to prepare her soul for death. His bitter observation of princes' tombs ('with their hands under their cheeks, as if they died of the tooth-ache') satirizes the vanity of the ruling class and their desperate attempts to control their image even in death.
3. Staging and Dramatic Methods:
Webster utilizes the macabre, gothic elements of Jacobean drama to create an atmosphere of dread and philosophical reflection. The physical presence of Bosola in disguise, presenting the tools of death, externalises the psychological pressure placed upon the Duchess. The dialogue shifts between grim prose and haunting poetic images, highlighting the collision of the mundane ('tooth-ache', 'tomb-maker') with the cosmic and eternal ('heaven', 'grave').
4. Significance to the Wider Play:
This scene acts as the climax of the Duchess's personal tragedy, setting the standard of noble endurance against which all other characters are measured. Her calm acceptance of death contrasts with the panic, guilt, and ignoble ends of the Cardinal, Ferdinand, and even Bosola himself in Act V. The play transitions after this scene from the tragedy of the Duchess to a tragedy of retribution and moral decay, demonstrating how her stoic light continues to cast a long shadow over her murderers, driving them to madness and self-destruction.
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The assessment of this essay should be structured around standard criteria for Oxford AQA International A-level English Literature (LT01 Section A: 25 Marks total).
Level 5 (21–25 marks):
- Excellent and highly structured argument demonstrating a sophisticated understanding of Jacobean tragedy and Webster's dramatic techniques.
- Perceptive analysis of the Duchess's stoicism, Bosola's complex characterization, and the symbolism of the tomb/glow-worms.
- Fluent, precise literary terminology, seamlessly integrating textual evidence and critical perspectives.
- Excellent evaluation of how this passage connects to the wider play's thematic progression (e.g., contrasting the Duchess's death with those in Act V).
Level 4 (16–20 marks):
- Purposeful and coherent essay with a clear focus on the aspects of tragedy.
- Detailed analysis of language, structure, and staging in the passage.
- Consistent exploration of the passage's significance within the wider context of the play.
- Clear, well-structured written expression with appropriate terminology.
- Balanced attention to the bullet points in the prompt.
Level 3 (11–15 marks):
- Straightforward and relevant response discussing tragedy and the Duchess's dignity.
- Explains the meaning of key lines like 'I am Duchess of Malfi still' and the 'glow-worm' metaphor with some analytical success.
- Broad understanding of the rest of the play, though connections may be generalized.
- Competent writing, though it may occasionally rely on plot summary.
Level 2 (6–10 marks):
- Descriptive or narrative-based response with limited analytical focus on dramatic methods.
- Mentions aspects of tragedy (death, misery) but lacks depth in explaining their dramatic or theatrical impact.
- Weak or fragmented structure; limited use of literary terminology.
Level 1 (1–5 marks):
- Minimal awareness of the play or the tragic genre.
- High level of inaccuracy, plot-focused summary with little to no analysis of the passage.
- Unstructured or unclear written communication.
Level 5 (21–25 marks):
- Excellent and highly structured argument demonstrating a sophisticated understanding of Jacobean tragedy and Webster's dramatic techniques.
- Perceptive analysis of the Duchess's stoicism, Bosola's complex characterization, and the symbolism of the tomb/glow-worms.
- Fluent, precise literary terminology, seamlessly integrating textual evidence and critical perspectives.
- Excellent evaluation of how this passage connects to the wider play's thematic progression (e.g., contrasting the Duchess's death with those in Act V).
Level 4 (16–20 marks):
- Purposeful and coherent essay with a clear focus on the aspects of tragedy.
- Detailed analysis of language, structure, and staging in the passage.
- Consistent exploration of the passage's significance within the wider context of the play.
- Clear, well-structured written expression with appropriate terminology.
- Balanced attention to the bullet points in the prompt.
Level 3 (11–15 marks):
- Straightforward and relevant response discussing tragedy and the Duchess's dignity.
- Explains the meaning of key lines like 'I am Duchess of Malfi still' and the 'glow-worm' metaphor with some analytical success.
- Broad understanding of the rest of the play, though connections may be generalized.
- Competent writing, though it may occasionally rely on plot summary.
Level 2 (6–10 marks):
- Descriptive or narrative-based response with limited analytical focus on dramatic methods.
- Mentions aspects of tragedy (death, misery) but lacks depth in explaining their dramatic or theatrical impact.
- Weak or fragmented structure; limited use of literary terminology.
Level 1 (1–5 marks):
- Minimal awareness of the play or the tragic genre.
- High level of inaccuracy, plot-focused summary with little to no analysis of the passage.
- Unstructured or unclear written communication.