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Thinka Jan 2023 Cambridge International A Level-Style Mock — English Literature (9675)

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An original Thinka practice paper modelled on the structure and difficulty of the Jan 2023 Cambridge International A Level English Literature (9675) paper. Not affiliated with or reproduced from Cambridge.

LT01 Section A: Elizabethan and Jacobean tragedy

Answer one question from this section. Explore the significance of the aspects of dramatic tragedy in the given passage in relation to the play as a whole.
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Read the following passage from Act IV, Scene ii of The Duchess of Malfi and then answer the question.

[Enter BOSOLA, disguised as an Old Man]
DUCHESS: ...Am I not Duchess?
BOSOLA: I am Duchess of Malfi still.
DUCHESS: That makes thy sleeps so broken:
Glories, like glow-worms, afar off shine bright,
But look'd to near, have neither heat nor light.
DUCHESS: Thou art very plain.
BOSOLA: My trade is to flatter the dead, not the living;
I am a tomb-maker.
DUCHESS: And thou com'st to make my tomb?
BOSOLA: Yes.
DUCHESS: Let me be a little merry:—of what stuff wilt thou make it?
BOSOLA: Nay, resolve me first, of what fashion?
DUCHESS: Why, do we grow fantastical in our death-bed? do we affect fashion in the grave?
BOSOLA: Most ambitiously. Princes' images on their tombs do not lie, as they were wont, seeming to pray up to heaven, but with their hands under their cheeks, as if they died of the tooth-ache; they are not carved with their eyes open, and in their wild disorders, as if they would scape out of the scaffold, but as if they had gone to sleep.

Explore the significance of the aspects of dramatic tragedy in this passage in relation to the play as a whole.

In your answer you must:
* Analyse the tragic aspects shown in the passage.
* Show how these aspects are significant in the wider play.
* Evaluate the dramatic impact of Webster's staging and language in this scene.
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This passage is a pivotal moment of high tragic intensity in Act IV of John Webster's 'The Duchess of Malfi'. It dramatises the absolute confrontation between human dignity and mortal inevitability, a core theme of Elizabethan and Jacobean tragedy.

1. The Duchess's Defiance and Stoic Dignity:
The central tragic assertion is her famous statement: 'I am Duchess of Malfi still.' Even when stripped of her family, her freedom, and her political power, she clings to her identity and sovereignty. In the tragic tradition, this represents the ultimate defiance of the human spirit against external torment. Her readiness to 'be a little merry' and converse about her own tomb demonstrates her stoicism, a courage that elevates her status from victim to a classic tragic protagonist. This assertion of identity contrasts sharply with her brother Ferdinand's subsequent descent into lycanthropy, where he loses all human reason and identity.

2. Bosola as the Tragic Messenger and Commentator:
Bosola acts as a complex instrument of tragedy. Disguised as an Old Man/tomb-maker, he brings the grim reality of death directly to the Duchess. His philosophical reflections—such as the metaphor of worldly glories being like 'glow-worms' that offer no heat or light up close—reinforce the vanitas motif typical of Jacobean tragedy. Bosola is both executioner and spiritual guide; he strips away her earthly illusions to prepare her soul for death. His bitter observation of princes' tombs ('with their hands under their cheeks, as if they died of the tooth-ache') satirizes the vanity of the ruling class and their desperate attempts to control their image even in death.

3. Staging and Dramatic Methods:
Webster utilizes the macabre, gothic elements of Jacobean drama to create an atmosphere of dread and philosophical reflection. The physical presence of Bosola in disguise, presenting the tools of death, externalises the psychological pressure placed upon the Duchess. The dialogue shifts between grim prose and haunting poetic images, highlighting the collision of the mundane ('tooth-ache', 'tomb-maker') with the cosmic and eternal ('heaven', 'grave').

4. Significance to the Wider Play:
This scene acts as the climax of the Duchess's personal tragedy, setting the standard of noble endurance against which all other characters are measured. Her calm acceptance of death contrasts with the panic, guilt, and ignoble ends of the Cardinal, Ferdinand, and even Bosola himself in Act V. The play transitions after this scene from the tragedy of the Duchess to a tragedy of retribution and moral decay, demonstrating how her stoic light continues to cast a long shadow over her murderers, driving them to madness and self-destruction.

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The assessment of this essay should be structured around standard criteria for Oxford AQA International A-level English Literature (LT01 Section A: 25 Marks total).

Level 5 (21–25 marks):
- Excellent and highly structured argument demonstrating a sophisticated understanding of Jacobean tragedy and Webster's dramatic techniques.
- Perceptive analysis of the Duchess's stoicism, Bosola's complex characterization, and the symbolism of the tomb/glow-worms.
- Fluent, precise literary terminology, seamlessly integrating textual evidence and critical perspectives.
- Excellent evaluation of how this passage connects to the wider play's thematic progression (e.g., contrasting the Duchess's death with those in Act V).

Level 4 (16–20 marks):
- Purposeful and coherent essay with a clear focus on the aspects of tragedy.
- Detailed analysis of language, structure, and staging in the passage.
- Consistent exploration of the passage's significance within the wider context of the play.
- Clear, well-structured written expression with appropriate terminology.
- Balanced attention to the bullet points in the prompt.

Level 3 (11–15 marks):
- Straightforward and relevant response discussing tragedy and the Duchess's dignity.
- Explains the meaning of key lines like 'I am Duchess of Malfi still' and the 'glow-worm' metaphor with some analytical success.
- Broad understanding of the rest of the play, though connections may be generalized.
- Competent writing, though it may occasionally rely on plot summary.

Level 2 (6–10 marks):
- Descriptive or narrative-based response with limited analytical focus on dramatic methods.
- Mentions aspects of tragedy (death, misery) but lacks depth in explaining their dramatic or theatrical impact.
- Weak or fragmented structure; limited use of literary terminology.

Level 1 (1–5 marks):
- Minimal awareness of the play or the tragic genre.
- High level of inaccuracy, plot-focused summary with little to no analysis of the passage.
- Unstructured or unclear written communication.

LT01 Section B: Later dramatic tragedies

Answer one question from this section. Write an analytical essay responding to a given critical view of a set play.
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**Tennessee Williams: *A Streetcar Named Desire***

'Stella’s decision to stand by Stanley at the end of the play is not a sign of moral or emotional weakness, but rather a tragic and pragmatic strategy for survival in the post-war world.'

To what extent do you agree with this view of Stella?

In your answer you should:
* explore Williams's presentation of Stella’s choices and actions
* consider the dramatic and tragic methods used to depict her relationship with Stanley and Blanche
* evaluate the play in the light of this critical comment.
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### Focus of the Question
Students should explore the character of Stella Kowalski, specifically her ultimate decision to remain with Stanley and send Blanche to an institution. The response must address the tension between viewing this choice as "moral or emotional weakness" (betrayal, self-delusion, submissiveness) versus a "tragic and pragmatic strategy for survival" (protection of her newborn child, economic necessity, adaptation to the modern New World).

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### Key Ideas for Discussion

#### Arguments in Agreement (Stella as a pragmatic survivor):
* **Socio-Economic Context:** In the late 1940s, a woman with a newborn baby had very limited options for economic independence. Rejecting Stanley would mean destitution, especially since Belle Reve is lost and Blanche is incapable of providing financial support.
* **The Tragic Sacrifice:** Stella’s grief in the final scene ("What have I let happen to my sister?") shows that her choice is not made lightly or callously; it is a painful, tragic compromise. She sacrifices Blanche to preserve her child's future.
* **Adaptation to the New World:** Unlike Blanche, who is stuck in the dead past of the Old South, Stella represents the transition to the vibrant, multicultural, and industrialized post-war America. Her survival requires alignment with Stanley, the symbol of this new era.
* **The Reality of her Desire:** Stella’s connection to Stanley is rooted in genuine sexual and emotional fulfillment (the "coloured lights"), which she values as a foundational aspect of her life, rather than mere passivity.

#### Arguments in Disagreement / Alternative Perspectives (Stella as weak or complicit):
* **Self-Delusion and Denial:** Stella admits, "I couldn't believe her story and go on living with Stanley." This indicates that her choice is based on a deliberate refusal of the truth (the rape) to protect her own comfort, mirroring Blanche’s own flight from reality.
* **Betrayal of Sisterhood:** By choosing Stanley, Stella validates patriarchal violence and becomes complicit in the destruction of her own sister, effectively trading Blanche's sanity for her domestic security.
* **Submission to Toxic Masculinity:** Stella’s toleration of domestic abuse (such as the violence at the poker night) is seen by some critics not as pragmatism, but as a regression into subjugation under Stanley's animalistic dominance.

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### Analysis of Dramatic and Tragic Methods
* **Plastic Theatre:** The use of the "blue piano" and the "Varsouviana" to heighten the emotional undercurrents of Stella's choice; the physical presence of the baby wrapped in pale blue blankets emphasizing the new life she must protect.
* **Structure:** The contrast between the opening, where Stella is caught between two worlds, and the ending, where the physical departure of Blanche and the enclosing presence of Stanley solidify her entrapment/choice.
* **Dialogue and Spatial Dynamics:** The cramped nature of the Kowalski apartment forces domestic intimacy and makes Stella’s split loyalties physically manifest on stage.

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### Marking Scheme (25 Marks total)

#### **Band 5 (21–25 marks) - Excellent/Outstanding**
* **AO1:** Formulates a highly cogent, sharp, and sophisticated argument responding to the prompt. Exceptional written expression, precise terminology, and flawless essay structure.
* **AO2:** Offers insightful, detailed analysis of Williams's dramatic methods (e.g., plastic theatre, staging, structure) and how they shape the audience's response to Stella.
* **AO5:** Demonstrates a sophisticated understanding of alternative critical interpretations, seamlessly integrating the debate between Stella's pragmatism and her complicity.

#### **Band 4 (16–20 marks) - Very Good/Good**
* **AO1:** Clear, coherent, and well-structured argument. Uses relevant literary terminology accurately and maintains focus on the question.
* **AO2:** Competently analyzes dramatic methods, linking Williams's theatrical techniques directly to the presentation of Stella and Stanley.
* **AO5:** Clear engagement with the critical view, presenting balanced arguments both for and against the idea of Stella's actions as a survival strategy.

#### **Band 3 (11–15 marks) - Satisfactory/Competent**
* **AO1:** Straightforward and relevant argument. Structure is clear, though there may be occasional lapses in fluency or focus.
* **AO2:** Described dramatic techniques with some explanation of their effects, though analysis may occasionally rely on plot description rather than dramatic analysis.
* **AO5:** Shows awareness of different interpretations of Stella's final choice, though the discussion may feel somewhat separate from the main argument.

#### **Band 2 (6–10 marks) - Weak/Limited**
* **AO1:** Attempts to construct an argument but lacks cohesive structure or clarity. Limited use of appropriate literary terminology.
* **AO2:** Focuses heavily on plot and character summaries with very little mention of dramatic methods or staging.
* **AO5:** Weak or superficial engagement with the critical quotation; struggles to move beyond a basic character study of Stella.

#### **Band 1 (1–5 marks) - Very Weak**
* Minimal, fragmented response with little or no relevance to the prompt or the dramatic features of the play.

LT02 Section A: Prose

Answer one question from this section. Consider the narrative and thematic significance of place in the chosen prose text.
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‘In *The Great Gatsby*, the geographical divisions do not merely separate social classes; they reflect a deeper, irreconcilable division in the moral and spiritual life of America.’

In light of this comment, explore the significance of setting in *The Great Gatsby*.
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### Key Areas of Discussion:

* **East Egg vs. West Egg:**
* **East Egg** represents established, inherited wealth ('old money'), characterized by social exclusivity, superficial grace, and a deep-seated lack of moral responsibility (embodied by Tom and Daisy Buchanan).
* **West Egg** represents 'new money' and the raw, unrefined pursuit of the American Dream (embodied by Gatsby). It symbolizes aspiration, vulgar ostentatiousness, and the tragic belief that the past can be recreated through material wealth.
* The physical barrier of the **Long Island Sound** between the two Eggs represents the insurmountable social and class divides that Gatsby seeks to cross.

* **The Valley of Ashes:**
* Located between West Egg and New York City, it is a barren wasteland created by industrial dumping, symbolizing the moral and social decay that results from the unbridled pursuit of wealth.
* It represents the marginalized lower-class victims (like George and Myrtle Wilson) who are crushed by the indifference of the rich.
* The setting is dominated by the faded billboard of **Doctor T. J. Eckleburg**, whose giant, empty eyes look out over the wasteland, symbolizing a godless universe or the loss of spiritual values in a highly materialistic society.

* **New York City:**
* A place of anonymity, wild excess, and moral transgression (e.g., Tom's apartment in Harlem, Wolfsheim's shady dealings, the drunken party at the Plaza Hotel).
* It acts as a pressure cooker where the latent tensions between characters erupt, showing that despite its promise of freedom, it ultimately breeds chaos and destruction.

* **The Midwest:**
* Nick Carraway contrasts the corrupt East with his idealized memories of the Midwest, associated with traditional values, stability, and moral order. This contrast frames the entire narrative, suggesting that the 'East' has corrupted the original pioneers' dream of America.

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### Marking Scheme & Assessment Objectives (AO)

* **AO1: Articulate creative and informed responses to literary texts, using appropriate terminology and coherent, accurate written expression.** (Max 10 marks)
* **Band 5 (9-10 marks):** Excellent structure, highly sophisticated argument, fluent use of literary terminology (e.g., *macrocosm*, *topography*, *leitmotif*, *symbolism*).
* **Band 4 (7-8 marks):** Clear and logical structure, coherent argument, consistent use of critical terminology.
* **Band 3 (5-6 marks):** Straightforward and relevant argument, generally clear but may rely on narrative description rather than analytical structure.
* **Band 2-1 (1-4 marks):** Weak structure, limited focus on the prompt, or basic comprehension issues.

* **AO2: Analyse how meanings are shaped by language, structure, form, and setting.** (Max 10 marks)
* **Band 5 (9-10 marks):** Exceptionally detailed analysis of Fitzgerald's prose style, including the sensory imagery of the Valley of Ashes, the metaphorical weight of geographical boundaries, and the structural juxtaposition of different locales.
* **Band 4 (7-8 marks):** Strong analysis of setting and symbolism (e.g., the green light, Eckleburg's eyes) and how they reinforce characterization and thematic concerns.
* **Band 3 (5-6 marks):** Satisfactory exploration of setting, though analysis of language or structure may be superficial or descriptive.
* **Band 2-1 (1-4 marks):** General identification of settings without analyzing how they shape meaning or contribute to Fitzgerald's craft.

* **AO3: Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which literary texts are written and received.** (Max 5 marks)
* **Band 5 (5 marks):** Sophisticated integration of the 1920s socio-historical context (the Jazz Age, the economic boom, the corruption of the American Dream, the rise of consumer culture).
* **Band 4 (4 marks):** Clear links between historical context and the settings depicted in the novel.
* **Band 3 (3 marks):** Broad contextual knowledge is present but may feel disconnected from the literary analysis.
* **Band 2-1 (1-2 marks):** Anecdotal or highly limited reference to historical context.

LT02 Section B: Poetry

Answer one question from this section. Consider the significance of landscape, bleakness, or place names in the chosen poetry selection, with detailed reference to at least two poems.
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‘In Frost’s poetry, the natural landscape is rarely a source of comfort; instead, it serves to highlight human isolation and bleakness.’

To what extent do you agree with this view?

In your answer you must write about at least two poems from your selection.
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### Analytical Essay Guide

**Introduction**
* **Thesis Statement**: While Frost’s landscapes are frequently marked by coldness, physical decay, and spatial emptiness, they do not function merely as backdrops of unyielding despair. Instead, they serve as psychological mirrors where external bleakness intensifies human isolation, though some poems also reveal a profound, if melancholic, sense of human resilience or aesthetic allure within these spaces.

**Key Points of Comparison and Analysis**

1. **The Bleakness of the External and Internal Landscape in 'Desert Places'**
* **Analysis**: In 'Desert Places', the snow-covered landscape represents an existential void. The physical setting ("Snow falling and night falling fast, oh, fast") mirrors the speaker's internal loneliness.
* **Technique**: Frost uses repetition ("falling", "fast") and visual imagery of a blank canvas ("A blanker whiteness of benighted snow / With no expression, nothing to express") to depict a nature that is indifferent, rather than actively hostile.
* **Isolation**: The speaker declares that the vast, empty interstellar spaces do not scare him because his own "desert places" are closer and more barren, demonstrating how the landscape catalyses a deep personal confrontation with isolation.

2. **The Abandoned Effort in the Wilderness of 'The Wood-Pile'**
* **Analysis**: 'The Wood-Pile' presents a protagonist walking through a desolate, featureless winter swamp ("The view was all in lines / Straight up and down of tall slim trees").
* **Technique**: The landscape is described in monochrome tones, lacking distinct landmarks, which induces a feeling of disorientation and isolation. The discovery of the decaying, abandoned wood-pile serves as a symbol of forgotten human labor.
* **Meaning**: The landscape slowly reclaims human effort, highlighting the ultimate insignificance of human endeavors against the quiet, indifferent passage of time and nature's slow decay.

3. **The Allure of Bleakness in 'Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening'**
* **Analysis (Counter-argument/Nuance)**: In 'Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening', the snowy woods are described as "lovely, dark and deep." Here, the bleak, cold setting is not purely a source of discomfort; it holds a seductive, peaceful beauty that tempts the speaker to escape his social obligations ("promises to keep").
* **Technique**: The auditory imagery of the "easy wind and downy flake" contrasts with the harshness of winter, suggesting that isolation in nature can offer a quiet, meditative space, even if that space is associated with the ultimate bleakness of death.

**Conclusion**
* Frost’s landscapes are rarely comforting in a traditional Romantic sense; they do not offer spiritual benevolence. Instead, they emphasize human vulnerability. However, the bleakness is often a catalyst for self-awareness, showing that while isolation is inevitable, the human mind's capacity to recognize and articulate this bleakness provides its own form of resilience.

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### Marking Scheme (Total: 25 Marks)

**AO1: Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts (5 Marks)**
* **Level 5 (5 marks)**: Excellent, cohesive structure; mature, academic register; precise use of literary terminology; fluent and persuasive argument.
* **Level 3 (3 marks)**: Clear, coherent response with a logical structure; relevant terminology used correctly most of the time.
* **Level 1 (1 mark)**: Descriptive or narrative focus; limited structure or critical vocabulary.

**AO2: Analyse how meanings are shaped in literary texts (10 Marks)**
* **Level 5 (9-10 marks)**: Sharp, perceptive analysis of Frost's poetic forms, meter (e.g., blank verse, iambic tetrameter), imagery, and structural choices. Explores how linguistic features construct themes of isolation.
* **Level 3 (5-6 marks)**: Competent analysis of poetic devices and imagery, though sometimes more focused on explanation than critical effect.
* **Level 1 (1-2 marks)**: Basic identification of poetic devices (e.g., rhyme, metaphor) with little link to the overall theme or question.

**AO3: Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which literary texts are written and received (5 Marks)**
* **Level 5 (5 marks)**: Sophisticated exploration of context (e.g., Frost's New England settings, early 20th-century existential anxieties, or modernism). Relates these seamlessly to the poems' presentation of nature.
* **Level 3 (3 marks)**: Clear understanding of historical, geographical, or philosophical context, though links to the text can feel slightly mechanical.
* **Level 1 (1 mark)**: Minimal or inaccurate contextual references.

**AO4: Explore connections across literary texts (5 Marks)**
* **Level 5 (5 marks)**: Insightful and sustained comparisons between at least two poems, evaluating how different landscapes reflect varied aspects of human isolation or bleakness.
* **Level 3 (3 marks)**: Identifies clear similarities and differences between the chosen poems, with structured comparative paragraphs.
* **Level 1 (1 mark)**: Superficial or separate accounts of the poems with little integration or comparison.

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