Question 1 · Transactional Writing (Content & Organisation: 57 marks; Technical Accuracy: 30 marks)
87 marksYour school's Sixth Form Council is debating the following statement, which will be put to a vote at the next Student Council meeting:
'School uniform should be abolished for all Sixth Form students.'
Write a speech to be delivered at a Sixth Form assembly, giving your own point of view on this statement. You should try to persuade your audience to agree with you.
(Content, Organisation and Purpose/Audience: 57 marks. Technical Accuracy — sentence structure, punctuation, grammar and spelling: 30 marks, assessed on this same speech.)
15 minutes thinking and planning. 30 minutes writing. 10 minutes checking.
'School uniform should be abolished for all Sixth Form students.'
Write a speech to be delivered at a Sixth Form assembly, giving your own point of view on this statement. You should try to persuade your audience to agree with you.
(Content, Organisation and Purpose/Audience: 57 marks. Technical Accuracy — sentence structure, punctuation, grammar and spelling: 30 marks, assessed on this same speech.)
15 minutes thinking and planning. 30 minutes writing. 10 minutes checking.
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Worked solution
Good morning. I want to start with a question. How many of you got dressed this morning and, at some point, felt a flicker of dread about a shirt that doesn't quite fit, or a jumper that makes you feel about twelve years old? Now — how many of you are in Year 8?
Exactly. None of you. And yet every one of us in this hall is still required to wear the same uniform as someone half our age, with none of our responsibilities and none of our freedoms. I think it's time that changed.
Let me be clear about what I'm not proposing. I am not suggesting Sixth Formers turn up in pyjamas, or that 'business casual' becomes a euphemism for whatever was on the bedroom floor that morning. What I am proposing is a smart dress code — the kind every one of us will be expected to manage the moment we start a job, an internship, or a university placement — instead of a uniform designed, quite reasonably, for children twelve years younger than us.
Think about what the Sixth Form is meant to be preparing us for. We are given free periods and trusted to plan our own study time. We are trusted to represent this school on work placements, at open evenings, in university interviews. And yet, apparently, we cannot be trusted to choose a shirt. That is not consistency. That is a school that has updated our timetables for adulthood but forgotten to update our wardrobes.
Some of you are already thinking about the counter-argument, and it's a fair one: won't a dress code just become a new source of stress and competition, a chance for uniform snobbery to turn into fashion snobbery? I understand the worry. But look at the schools that have already made this change. A simple, published dress code — smart, plain, appropriate for a professional environment — does exactly the opposite. It removes the daily uniform inspection at the school gate and replaces it with one clear standard that any of us can meet without needing an expensive blazer replaced every September because we've grown two inches again.
There is also, I'll admit, a financial argument, and it matters more than we sometimes say out loud in a room like this. A single specialist Sixth Form blazer can cost more than an entire smart-casual wardrobe assembled from things a family already owns. For some of us, that difference is significant. Abolishing the uniform requirement doesn't create a financial burden — it removes one.
So here is what I am asking you to vote for: not chaos, not pyjamas, not a return to Year 8 arguments about skirt length — but a dress code that treats us the way the rest of this Sixth Form experience already claims to treat us. As nearly-adults. Trusted to make one small, sensible decision each morning, so that we can get on with proving ourselves ready for every larger decision waiting for us after this hall empties for the last time. Thank you.
Exactly. None of you. And yet every one of us in this hall is still required to wear the same uniform as someone half our age, with none of our responsibilities and none of our freedoms. I think it's time that changed.
Let me be clear about what I'm not proposing. I am not suggesting Sixth Formers turn up in pyjamas, or that 'business casual' becomes a euphemism for whatever was on the bedroom floor that morning. What I am proposing is a smart dress code — the kind every one of us will be expected to manage the moment we start a job, an internship, or a university placement — instead of a uniform designed, quite reasonably, for children twelve years younger than us.
Think about what the Sixth Form is meant to be preparing us for. We are given free periods and trusted to plan our own study time. We are trusted to represent this school on work placements, at open evenings, in university interviews. And yet, apparently, we cannot be trusted to choose a shirt. That is not consistency. That is a school that has updated our timetables for adulthood but forgotten to update our wardrobes.
Some of you are already thinking about the counter-argument, and it's a fair one: won't a dress code just become a new source of stress and competition, a chance for uniform snobbery to turn into fashion snobbery? I understand the worry. But look at the schools that have already made this change. A simple, published dress code — smart, plain, appropriate for a professional environment — does exactly the opposite. It removes the daily uniform inspection at the school gate and replaces it with one clear standard that any of us can meet without needing an expensive blazer replaced every September because we've grown two inches again.
There is also, I'll admit, a financial argument, and it matters more than we sometimes say out loud in a room like this. A single specialist Sixth Form blazer can cost more than an entire smart-casual wardrobe assembled from things a family already owns. For some of us, that difference is significant. Abolishing the uniform requirement doesn't create a financial burden — it removes one.
So here is what I am asking you to vote for: not chaos, not pyjamas, not a return to Year 8 arguments about skirt length — but a dress code that treats us the way the rest of this Sixth Form experience already claims to treat us. As nearly-adults. Trusted to make one small, sensible decision each morning, so that we can get on with proving ourselves ready for every larger decision waiting for us after this hall empties for the last time. Thank you.
Marking scheme
Two strands assessed on the same speech. STRAND 1 — Content, Organisation and Purpose/Audience (57 marks), marked using Competence Levels (CL1–CL5): CL1 (1–11): a basic, undeveloped viewpoint with little persuasive technique; register not adapted to a spoken/audience context. CL2 (12–22): a viewpoint given with some supporting reasons in a recognisable speech form; limited organisation or persuasive technique; direct address used inconsistently. CL3 (23–34): a clear, sustained viewpoint supported by relevant, developed reasons; appropriately organised into a spoken structure (greeting, argument, conclusion); some effective persuasive techniques (e.g. rhetorical question, direct address, rule of three) with a register broadly suited to a school-assembly audience. CL4 (35–46): a well-developed, convincing argument that engages with at least one opposing view before countering it; assured structure with clear signposting between points; a good range of persuasive techniques used purposefully; register confidently adapted to a mixed student/staff audience. CL5 (47–57): a sophisticated, tightly organised speech (e.g. rhetorical question opening, concession-then-rebuttal structure, callback to the opening in the conclusion) that anticipates and directly answers listener concerns; a wide range of persuasive techniques integrated fluently; assured, consistent control of a spoken register; a genuinely memorable closing appeal. Max 57. STRAND 2 — Technical Accuracy (30 marks), marked using Competence Levels (CL1–CL5) across sentence structure and punctuation/grammar and spelling: CL1 (1–6): frequent basic errors that impede meaning; little sentence variety. CL2 (7–12): mostly simple/compound sentences; punctuation limited to full stops and commas; regular spelling errors, including common words. CL3 (13–18): a mix of simple, compound and some complex sentences; generally accurate punctuation (commas, question marks, apostrophes) with occasional lapses; spelling generally accurate. CL4 (19–24): a wide, deliberate range of sentence structures (e.g. short sentences for emphasis, such as 'Exactly. None of you.'; a semicolon joining related clauses) used for effect; consistently accurate punctuation and grammar; spelling accurate, including ambitious vocabulary. CL5 (25–30): sophisticated, purposeful control of a wide range of sentence forms integrated fluently into the spoken register; punctuation and grammar accurate throughout with no lapses; spelling accurate throughout, including subject-specific and ambitious vocabulary. Max 30. Combined maximum: 87.