Question 1 · Extended Response Evaluative Essay (AO1 + AO2)
40 marksOF MICE AND MEN
(a) With reference to the ways Steinbeck presents the friendship between George and Lennie, show how far you agree that George's final act is one of loyalty rather than betrayal. [40]
(a) With reference to the ways Steinbeck presents the friendship between George and Lennie, show how far you agree that George's final act is one of loyalty rather than betrayal. [40]
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Worked solution
A strong response will construct a sustained argument ranging across the novel, broadly along these lines:
Case for loyalty: Steinbeck establishes the George–Lennie friendship from the opening chapter as unusual and precious within a world of isolated, transient migrant workers — Slim remarks that 'ain't many guys travel around together', framing their bond as something worth protecting; George's repeated recitation of their shared dream of owning 'a little piece of land' functions throughout the novel as an anchor of hope and identity for Lennie, and George's decision to describe that dream one final time, calmly and gently, in the moments before he shoots Lennie by the river shows a deliberate act of care, ensuring Lennie's last experience is one of comfort and hope rather than fear; by taking responsibility himself, using Carlson's gun and shooting Lennie in the same manner Candy's dog was shot (but with tenderness rather than the casual cruelty of that earlier scene), George controls the manner of Lennie's death and spares him the mob violence and terror that Curley's lynch party would certainly have inflicted; George's own devastation afterwards — his silence, his refusal to celebrate with Slim and Carlson — signals that this is a profound sacrifice made for Lennie's sake, not a callous or self-serving act.
Case for betrayal/complication: candidates should also weigh the reading that George's act, whatever its motive, permanently ends Lennie's only source of protection and companionship, and that Lennie, who trusts George completely and has no understanding of what is coming, is denied any choice in his own fate — Lennie dies believing they are about to realise their dream together, which could be read as a final deception rather than an honest ending; some critics note that George's act also frees him from the burden of caring for Lennie, raising the uncomfortable possibility of some self-interest mixed with compassion, even if the text discourages a cynical reading through Slim's final, sympathetic line to George ('You hadda, George. I swear you hadda').
Structural and contextual reinforcement: Steinbeck foreshadows the ending through the earlier killing of Candy's dog, inviting direct comparison between the two 'mercy killings' and highlighting how George's version is more compassionate (closeness, a beloved memory, no pain) than Carlson's careless dispatch of Candy's dog; the Depression-era context of loneliness and vulnerability among itinerant workers reinforces that no other viable future existed for Lennie once Curley's mob was mobilised, strengthening the case that George's act, however devastating, was the least cruel option available.
Justified conclusion: the strongest answers weigh both readings and reach a supported judgement — typically that Steinbeck constructs the killing as an act of profound, self-sacrificing loyalty and love, using structural parallels, gentle language and Slim's authoritative final verdict to guide the reader towards sympathy for George rather than condemnation, while acknowledging the moral complexity Steinbeck deliberately leaves unresolved.
Case for loyalty: Steinbeck establishes the George–Lennie friendship from the opening chapter as unusual and precious within a world of isolated, transient migrant workers — Slim remarks that 'ain't many guys travel around together', framing their bond as something worth protecting; George's repeated recitation of their shared dream of owning 'a little piece of land' functions throughout the novel as an anchor of hope and identity for Lennie, and George's decision to describe that dream one final time, calmly and gently, in the moments before he shoots Lennie by the river shows a deliberate act of care, ensuring Lennie's last experience is one of comfort and hope rather than fear; by taking responsibility himself, using Carlson's gun and shooting Lennie in the same manner Candy's dog was shot (but with tenderness rather than the casual cruelty of that earlier scene), George controls the manner of Lennie's death and spares him the mob violence and terror that Curley's lynch party would certainly have inflicted; George's own devastation afterwards — his silence, his refusal to celebrate with Slim and Carlson — signals that this is a profound sacrifice made for Lennie's sake, not a callous or self-serving act.
Case for betrayal/complication: candidates should also weigh the reading that George's act, whatever its motive, permanently ends Lennie's only source of protection and companionship, and that Lennie, who trusts George completely and has no understanding of what is coming, is denied any choice in his own fate — Lennie dies believing they are about to realise their dream together, which could be read as a final deception rather than an honest ending; some critics note that George's act also frees him from the burden of caring for Lennie, raising the uncomfortable possibility of some self-interest mixed with compassion, even if the text discourages a cynical reading through Slim's final, sympathetic line to George ('You hadda, George. I swear you hadda').
Structural and contextual reinforcement: Steinbeck foreshadows the ending through the earlier killing of Candy's dog, inviting direct comparison between the two 'mercy killings' and highlighting how George's version is more compassionate (closeness, a beloved memory, no pain) than Carlson's careless dispatch of Candy's dog; the Depression-era context of loneliness and vulnerability among itinerant workers reinforces that no other viable future existed for Lennie once Curley's mob was mobilised, strengthening the case that George's act, however devastating, was the least cruel option available.
Justified conclusion: the strongest answers weigh both readings and reach a supported judgement — typically that Steinbeck constructs the killing as an act of profound, self-sacrificing loyalty and love, using structural parallels, gentle language and Slim's authoritative final verdict to guide the reader towards sympathy for George rather than condemnation, while acknowledging the moral complexity Steinbeck deliberately leaves unresolved.
Marking scheme
[40 marks, AO1 & AO2] Marked in levels via a five-band grid: Band 1 (1–10): basic, largely narrative response with minimal reference to the question; Band 2 (11–18): emerging, some relevant comment but underdeveloped, limited textual evidence; Band 3 (19–26): competent, straightforward argument with relevant reference and some understanding of Steinbeck's craft; Band 4 (27–34): good, sustained focus on the question, reasoned argument supported by well-selected evidence, discussion of structural parallels and language; Band 5 (35–40): excellent, persuasive and evaluative response, assured interpretation weighing loyalty against complication, precise and fluent use of critical terminology and textual evidence, sensitive discussion of context. Accept any well-supported line of argument, whether the candidate ultimately agrees, disagrees or offers a qualified view.