Question 1 · Extended Essay (40 marks, AO1 & AO2)
40 marksLORD OF THE FLIES
(a) With reference to the ways Golding presents the conch, show how far you agree that its destruction represents the complete collapse of civilised order on the island. [40]
(a) With reference to the ways Golding presents the conch, show how far you agree that its destruction represents the complete collapse of civilised order on the island. [40]
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Worked solution
A strong response will construct a sustained argument ranging across the novel, broadly along these lines:
Establishment of the conch's authority: Golding introduces the conch in Chapter 1 as the instrument by which Ralph first summons the scattered boys together, and its discovery by Piggy, followed by Piggy's explanation of how it can be blown, immediately links the shell to reasoned, rule-governed organisation rather than raw physical power; the boys quickly establish the rule that whoever holds the conch has the right to speak uninterrupted, explicitly modelling adult democratic procedure, and Ralph's election as leader is directly tied to his possession and use of the conch, cementing it from the outset as a symbol of legitimate, agreed authority rather than dominance by strength.
Gradual erosion of its power: as the novel progresses, Golding charts a steady decline in respect for the conch that mirrors the boys' descent into savagery — Jack's early complaint that 'the conch doesn't count on top of the mountain' reveals his growing willingness to selectively disregard the rules when inconvenient; meetings become increasingly chaotic despite the conch's presence, with boys speaking out of turn and Piggy struggling to be heard even while holding it; Jack's eventual, formal rejection of the conch's authority when he storms out to form his own tribe ('I'm not going to play any longer. Not with you') marks a decisive structural turning point, after which the conch retains symbolic meaning largely only for Ralph, Piggy and their diminishing group of loyal followers.
Destruction and its significance: the conch is explicitly and violently destroyed in Chapter 11 at the same moment Roger releases the boulder that kills Piggy — Golding's narration states plainly that the conch 'exploded into a thousand white fragments and ceased to exist', a deliberate simultaneity that fuses the shell's physical destruction with the death of the character most associated with reason and rules, making the symbolism explicit rather than merely implicit; this moment removes the last physical vestige of the democratic order established in Chapter 1, and immediately afterwards Ralph is hunted as prey rather than treated as a fellow survivor, confirming that whatever remained of civilised structure has been violently swept away.
Complicating evidence: candidates might note that Ralph continues, briefly, to resist and to appeal to rules and rescue even after the conch's destruction, suggesting that some individual commitment to civilised values survives its physical loss, at least until the arrival of the naval officer; a nuanced answer might argue the conch's destruction is better read as the final, symbolic confirmation of a collapse that had already substantially occurred, rather than its sole cause.
Justified conclusion: the strongest answers weigh both readings and reach a supported judgement — typically that Golding constructs the conch's destruction as the decisive symbolic marker of civilisation's collapse on the island, using its careful establishment, gradual erosion and violent, simultaneous destruction alongside Piggy's death to dramatise his central thesis about the fragility of civilised order and the ease with which it gives way to savagery.
Establishment of the conch's authority: Golding introduces the conch in Chapter 1 as the instrument by which Ralph first summons the scattered boys together, and its discovery by Piggy, followed by Piggy's explanation of how it can be blown, immediately links the shell to reasoned, rule-governed organisation rather than raw physical power; the boys quickly establish the rule that whoever holds the conch has the right to speak uninterrupted, explicitly modelling adult democratic procedure, and Ralph's election as leader is directly tied to his possession and use of the conch, cementing it from the outset as a symbol of legitimate, agreed authority rather than dominance by strength.
Gradual erosion of its power: as the novel progresses, Golding charts a steady decline in respect for the conch that mirrors the boys' descent into savagery — Jack's early complaint that 'the conch doesn't count on top of the mountain' reveals his growing willingness to selectively disregard the rules when inconvenient; meetings become increasingly chaotic despite the conch's presence, with boys speaking out of turn and Piggy struggling to be heard even while holding it; Jack's eventual, formal rejection of the conch's authority when he storms out to form his own tribe ('I'm not going to play any longer. Not with you') marks a decisive structural turning point, after which the conch retains symbolic meaning largely only for Ralph, Piggy and their diminishing group of loyal followers.
Destruction and its significance: the conch is explicitly and violently destroyed in Chapter 11 at the same moment Roger releases the boulder that kills Piggy — Golding's narration states plainly that the conch 'exploded into a thousand white fragments and ceased to exist', a deliberate simultaneity that fuses the shell's physical destruction with the death of the character most associated with reason and rules, making the symbolism explicit rather than merely implicit; this moment removes the last physical vestige of the democratic order established in Chapter 1, and immediately afterwards Ralph is hunted as prey rather than treated as a fellow survivor, confirming that whatever remained of civilised structure has been violently swept away.
Complicating evidence: candidates might note that Ralph continues, briefly, to resist and to appeal to rules and rescue even after the conch's destruction, suggesting that some individual commitment to civilised values survives its physical loss, at least until the arrival of the naval officer; a nuanced answer might argue the conch's destruction is better read as the final, symbolic confirmation of a collapse that had already substantially occurred, rather than its sole cause.
Justified conclusion: the strongest answers weigh both readings and reach a supported judgement — typically that Golding constructs the conch's destruction as the decisive symbolic marker of civilisation's collapse on the island, using its careful establishment, gradual erosion and violent, simultaneous destruction alongside Piggy's death to dramatise his central thesis about the fragility of civilised order and the ease with which it gives way to savagery.
Marking scheme
[40 marks, AO1 & AO2] Marked in levels via a five-band grid: Band 1 (1–10): basic, largely narrative response with minimal reference to the question; Band 2 (11–18): emerging, some relevant comment but underdeveloped, limited textual evidence; Band 3 (19–26): competent, straightforward argument with relevant reference and some understanding of Golding's use of symbolism; Band 4 (27–34): good, sustained focus on the question, reasoned argument supported by well-selected evidence, discussion of structural and symbolic effects; Band 5 (35–40): excellent, persuasive and evaluative response, assured interpretation of the conch's symbolic arc, precise and fluent use of critical terminology and textual evidence, sensitive discussion of Golding's thematic purpose. Accept any well-supported line of argument, whether the candidate ultimately agrees, disagrees or offers a qualified view.