Question 1 · Comparative Analysis of Source/Extract Materials
25 marksWith reference to these extracts and your understanding of the historical context, which of these two extracts provides the more convincing interpretation of the reasons for the success of the First Crusade? EXTRACT A: The triumph of the First Crusade can only be understood through the prism of religious devotion. The crusaders were motivated by an intense, collective spiritual zeal, sparked by Pope Urban II's sermon at Clermont and sustained through years of unimaginable hardship. It was this shared religious conviction, reinforced by reports of visions and the discovery of holy relics like the Holy Lance at Antioch, that welded a diverse force of knights, clerics, and peasants into an unstoppable army. Without this profound belief that they were performing God's work, the crusaders would have fractured and succumbed to starvation, disease, and military setbacks long before they ever reached the walls of Jerusalem. (Adapted from a modern historian's analysis of the crusader mindset, 2012) EXTRACT B: The success of the Latin forces in capturing Jerusalem was less a product of their own military or religious cohesion and more a consequence of the profound political and sectarian divisions within the Islamic world. The bitter rivalry between the Sunni Seljuk Turks and the Shi'ite Fatimids of Egypt left the Near East highly fragmented and incapable of presenting a unified front. Local Muslim emirs, more concerned with regional power struggles than defending against the Frankish invasion, frequently refused to cooperate or actively negotiated separate truces. This systemic disunity allowed a relatively small, disease-ridden, and poorly supplied crusader force to exploit local divisions and achieve an unexpected victory. (Adapted from a modern historian's analysis of medieval Near Eastern politics, 2015)
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Worked solution
To answer this question, candidates must evaluate both extracts in relation to the historical context of the First Crusade (c1071–1149). EXTRACT A ANALYSIS: 1. Argument: Focuses on internal ideological factors, arguing that religious zeal, papal promotion, and miraculous events (like the Holy Lance) bound the diverse crusader army together and prevented it from fracturing. 2. Contextual Support: Candidates can support this with evidence of the immense impact of Urban II's 1099 call, the widespread adoption of the pilgrim vow, the desperate defense of Antioch after the discovery of the Holy Lance by Peter Bartholomew, and the barefoot procession around Jerusalem. 3. Limitations: It downplays the significant military skill of leaders like Bohemond of Taranto and Raymond of Toulouse, as well as the critical help received from the Byzantine Empire and Genoese fleets. EXTRACT B ANALYSIS: 1. Argument: Argues that the crusade succeeded due to external factors, specifically the deep Sunni-Shia divide and regional rivalries among local emirs. 2. Contextual Support: Candidates can support this by referencing the death of Malik-Shah I in 1092, which fractured the Seljuk Empire; the fierce rivalry between Ridwan of Aleppo and Duqaq of Damascus; and the Shi'ite Fatimid capture of Jerusalem from the Sunni Seljuks just before the crusaders arrived, which meant the crusaders fought a newly installed garrison rather than a united empire. 3. Limitations: It ignores the crusaders' own adaptability and the genuine, binding force of their religious conviction, which did indeed keep them together during times of extreme stress. COMPARATIVE JUDGEMENT: Candidates may argue that Extract B is more convincing because without Muslim disunity, even a highly motivated crusader force would have been easily overwhelmed by the superior manpower of a united Islamic empire. Alternatively, they may argue Extract A is more convincing as religious motivation was the indispensable prerequisite that launched and sustained the enterprise.
Marking scheme
Target: Assessment Objectives 1 and 3 (AQA AS Level). LEVEL 5 (21–25 marks): Shows a detailed, sustained, and analytical evaluation of both extracts. Accurately deploys a wide range of relevant contextual knowledge to test the arguments. Formulates a balanced, clear, and well-substantiated judgement. LEVEL 4 (16–20 marks): Provides a strong evaluation of both extracts with good contextual knowledge. Evaluates convincingness of both, though one may be handled in more depth than the other. LEVEL 3 (11–15 marks): Understands the main interpretations. Links them to some relevant historical context, but evaluation may be uneven or contain some narrative passages. LEVEL 2 (6–10 marks): Identifies arguments in the extracts but has limited or superficial contextual knowledge. Limited attempts at comparison or evaluation. LEVEL 1 (1–5 marks): Shows basic understanding of the extracts with little or no historical context. No effective judgement.