Question 1 · Poetic Analysis Essay
25 marksHow does Heaney powerfully convey the relationship between the father and the son in 'Follower'?
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To achieve a high mark in this essay, candidates should structure their response to address both the thematic and stylistic elements of Heaney's poem:
1. **The Presentation of the Father's Mastery**: Focus on how the father is depicted as a figure of immense strength, precision, and authority. Heaney uses specialized, technical agricultural vocabulary ('wing', 'sock', 'headland') alongside powerful, nautical-inflected imagery ('globed like a full sail strung') to paint the father as a natural force in absolute control of his craft. The word 'expert' stands alone as a single-word sentence, emphasizing absolute certainty.
2. **The Son's Childhood Perspective**: Examine how the young speaker is presented as a clumsy, inadequate observer in comparison to his father. The contrast is drawn through active, heavy verbs associated with the father ('set', 'fit', 'plucked') versus the passive or struggling verbs associated with the son ('stumbled', 'tripped', 'fell', 'yapping'). The son is literally and metaphorically in his father's shadow, wishing only to emulate him ('To close one eye, stiffen my arm').
3. **The Pivot and Role-Reversal**: Analyze the structural shift in the final stanza, where Heaney transitions from the past tense to the present ('But today...'). The power dynamic completely reverses: the father, once the epitome of stability and strength, is now the one who 'keeps stumbling / Behind me'. The phrase 'will not go away' introduces a complex emotional tone—suggesting frustration, guilt, or the inescapable nature of family ties and aging.
4. **Form and Craft**: Discuss how the regular ABAB rhyme scheme and steady iambic tetrameter mirror the rhythmic, disciplined movement of the ploughing, emphasizing the structured world the father created and the speaker's attempt to find his own artistic rhythm.
1. **The Presentation of the Father's Mastery**: Focus on how the father is depicted as a figure of immense strength, precision, and authority. Heaney uses specialized, technical agricultural vocabulary ('wing', 'sock', 'headland') alongside powerful, nautical-inflected imagery ('globed like a full sail strung') to paint the father as a natural force in absolute control of his craft. The word 'expert' stands alone as a single-word sentence, emphasizing absolute certainty.
2. **The Son's Childhood Perspective**: Examine how the young speaker is presented as a clumsy, inadequate observer in comparison to his father. The contrast is drawn through active, heavy verbs associated with the father ('set', 'fit', 'plucked') versus the passive or struggling verbs associated with the son ('stumbled', 'tripped', 'fell', 'yapping'). The son is literally and metaphorically in his father's shadow, wishing only to emulate him ('To close one eye, stiffen my arm').
3. **The Pivot and Role-Reversal**: Analyze the structural shift in the final stanza, where Heaney transitions from the past tense to the present ('But today...'). The power dynamic completely reverses: the father, once the epitome of stability and strength, is now the one who 'keeps stumbling / Behind me'. The phrase 'will not go away' introduces a complex emotional tone—suggesting frustration, guilt, or the inescapable nature of family ties and aging.
4. **Form and Craft**: Discuss how the regular ABAB rhyme scheme and steady iambic tetrameter mirror the rhythmic, disciplined movement of the ploughing, emphasizing the structured world the father created and the speaker's attempt to find his own artistic rhythm.
Marking scheme
**Assessment Criteria (25 Marks Total):**
* **Band 1 (1–4 marks):** Response is very limited, offering only a few general comments about fathers and sons or farming. Minimal reference to the text.
* **Band 2 (5–8 marks):** Offers basic narrative points about the poem. There is limited understanding of the poetic techniques, focusing mainly on the 'story' of the poem.
* **Band 3 (9–12 marks):** Shows a straightforward understanding of the father's strength and the son's admiration. Some relevant quotes are used, though analysis of language is simple.
* **Band 4 (13–16 marks):** Demonstrates a clear and competent understanding of the changing relationship. Good attention to key details, such as the son's stumbling and the final stanza's shift in tense.
* **Band 5 (17–20 marks):** Shows a developed and analytical understanding of Heaney's craft. Explores the effects of specific language choices (e.g., 'expert', 'globed', 'wake') and analyzes how the structure shifts in the final stanza. Thorough textual support is integrated smoothly.
* **Band 6 (21–25 marks):** Provides an insightful, sensitive, and sustained critical interpretation. Offers a sophisticated reading of the emotional complexity in the final lines and evaluates the thematic significance of the role-reversal. Demonstrates excellent appreciation of poetic form, rhythm, and tone.
* **Band 1 (1–4 marks):** Response is very limited, offering only a few general comments about fathers and sons or farming. Minimal reference to the text.
* **Band 2 (5–8 marks):** Offers basic narrative points about the poem. There is limited understanding of the poetic techniques, focusing mainly on the 'story' of the poem.
* **Band 3 (9–12 marks):** Shows a straightforward understanding of the father's strength and the son's admiration. Some relevant quotes are used, though analysis of language is simple.
* **Band 4 (13–16 marks):** Demonstrates a clear and competent understanding of the changing relationship. Good attention to key details, such as the son's stumbling and the final stanza's shift in tense.
* **Band 5 (17–20 marks):** Shows a developed and analytical understanding of Heaney's craft. Explores the effects of specific language choices (e.g., 'expert', 'globed', 'wake') and analyzes how the structure shifts in the final stanza. Thorough textual support is integrated smoothly.
* **Band 6 (21–25 marks):** Provides an insightful, sensitive, and sustained critical interpretation. Offers a sophisticated reading of the emotional complexity in the final lines and evaluates the thematic significance of the role-reversal. Demonstrates excellent appreciation of poetic form, rhythm, and tone.