Question 1 · Passage-based
25 marksRead the poem below, and then answer the question that follows:
**Children of Wealth**
Children of wealth, oh slaves of uncared-for ease,
Reared in the shelter of your locked-up park,
That music-shadowed garden, where the trees
Are keep-gates to the sunset, and the lark
Is but a song of morning, not a care,
Oh, let some danger touch your paradise,
Some frost of trouble chill the summer air,
Some storm of sorrow make your tears to rise;
Else will your hearts, like those of long-tamed beasts,
Forget their wildness, and in safe despair
Be content only with the easy feasts
Your masters throw them; you will never dare
To leave the cage, to brave the winter wind,
And seek the path your fathers died to find.
*(Elizabeth Daryush)*
**Question:**
Explore how Daryush powerfully conveys her feelings about the lives of the wealthy in this poem.
**Children of Wealth**
Children of wealth, oh slaves of uncared-for ease,
Reared in the shelter of your locked-up park,
That music-shadowed garden, where the trees
Are keep-gates to the sunset, and the lark
Is but a song of morning, not a care,
Oh, let some danger touch your paradise,
Some frost of trouble chill the summer air,
Some storm of sorrow make your tears to rise;
Else will your hearts, like those of long-tamed beasts,
Forget their wildness, and in safe despair
Be content only with the easy feasts
Your masters throw them; you will never dare
To leave the cage, to brave the winter wind,
And seek the path your fathers died to find.
*(Elizabeth Daryush)*
**Question:**
Explore how Daryush powerfully conveys her feelings about the lives of the wealthy in this poem.
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Worked solution
To achieve a high mark (Band 7 or 8, 20-25 marks), candidates must demonstrate a sensitive, detailed, and analytical understanding of how Daryush conveys her feelings about wealth.
### Critical Areas to Address:
* **Thematic Understanding:** The core idea that extreme wealth and security act as a psychological cage, domesticating the human spirit and robbing it of vitality and true purpose.
* **Analysis of Language:**
* The oxymoronic opening "slaves of uncared-for ease."
* The restrictive, castle-like connotations of "locked-up," "keep-gates," and "cage."
* The contrast between soft/sheltered imagery ("music-shadowed garden," "summer air") and harsh/vital imagery ("frost," "storm," "winter wind").
* The zoomorphism in comparing the wealthy to "long-tamed beasts" living in "safe despair."
* **Structure and Tone:** How the sonnet form builds a persuasive argument, moving from a description of the stifling environment, to an invocation of restorative suffering, and finally to a melancholy warning about the loss of ancestral courage.
### Critical Areas to Address:
* **Thematic Understanding:** The core idea that extreme wealth and security act as a psychological cage, domesticating the human spirit and robbing it of vitality and true purpose.
* **Analysis of Language:**
* The oxymoronic opening "slaves of uncared-for ease."
* The restrictive, castle-like connotations of "locked-up," "keep-gates," and "cage."
* The contrast between soft/sheltered imagery ("music-shadowed garden," "summer air") and harsh/vital imagery ("frost," "storm," "winter wind").
* The zoomorphism in comparing the wealthy to "long-tamed beasts" living in "safe despair."
* **Structure and Tone:** How the sonnet form builds a persuasive argument, moving from a description of the stifling environment, to an invocation of restorative suffering, and finally to a melancholy warning about the loss of ancestral courage.
Marking scheme
**Assessment Criteria for GCE/IGCSE Literature in English (0475) - 25 Marks**
* **Band 8 (23–25 marks):**
* Shows a highly perceptive, assured, and sensitive response to the poem.
* Consistently offers a sharp, critical evaluation of the poet's techniques (imagery, structure, tone).
* Integrates precise, well-selected textual references seamlessly.
* Expresses a deeply felt personal response with clarity and sophistication.
* **Band 7 (20–22 marks):**
* Demonstrates a secure critical understanding of the poem and its themes.
* Analyzes Daryush's use of language, imagery, and form with detail and sensitivity.
* Deploys a range of relevant textual evidence to support arguments.
* Maintains a clear, well-structured line of reasoning.
* **Band 6 (17–19 marks):**
* Shows a clear understanding of the poem's themes (the danger of comfortable isolation).
* Makes sensible comments on the effects of Daryush's language choices (e.g., the cage metaphor).
* Supports points with regular, appropriate quotations.
* **Band 5 (14–16 marks):**
* Shows a solid grasp of the poem's main arguments but may rely more on explanation than close poetic analysis.
* Identifies basic literary devices (like metaphors) but does not fully explore their deeper implications.
* Provides a structured response with some relevant references.
* **Band 4 and Below (0–13 marks):**
* Offers a superficial or predominantly narrative summary of the poem.
* Limited focus on the writer's craft or specific language choices.
* Relies on assertion rather than textual evidence.
* **Band 8 (23–25 marks):**
* Shows a highly perceptive, assured, and sensitive response to the poem.
* Consistently offers a sharp, critical evaluation of the poet's techniques (imagery, structure, tone).
* Integrates precise, well-selected textual references seamlessly.
* Expresses a deeply felt personal response with clarity and sophistication.
* **Band 7 (20–22 marks):**
* Demonstrates a secure critical understanding of the poem and its themes.
* Analyzes Daryush's use of language, imagery, and form with detail and sensitivity.
* Deploys a range of relevant textual evidence to support arguments.
* Maintains a clear, well-structured line of reasoning.
* **Band 6 (17–19 marks):**
* Shows a clear understanding of the poem's themes (the danger of comfortable isolation).
* Makes sensible comments on the effects of Daryush's language choices (e.g., the cage metaphor).
* Supports points with regular, appropriate quotations.
* **Band 5 (14–16 marks):**
* Shows a solid grasp of the poem's main arguments but may rely more on explanation than close poetic analysis.
* Identifies basic literary devices (like metaphors) but does not fully explore their deeper implications.
* Provides a structured response with some relevant references.
* **Band 4 and Below (0–13 marks):**
* Offers a superficial or predominantly narrative summary of the poem.
* Limited focus on the writer's craft or specific language choices.
* Relies on assertion rather than textual evidence.