Question 1 · Extended Response
15 marksYou recently visited a new traditional restaurant in your town with your family and want to share your experience.
Write a text of 70 to 150 words in which you:
- Describe the restaurant and what you ate and drank.
- Explain what you liked or disliked about the food and the atmosphere.
- Recommend (or do not recommend) this restaurant to others.
Choose the most appropriate text type from the following options:
- Blog post
- Email to a friend
- Review
Write a text of 70 to 150 words in which you:
- Describe the restaurant and what you ate and drank.
- Explain what you liked or disliked about the food and the atmosphere.
- Recommend (or do not recommend) this restaurant to others.
Choose the most appropriate text type from the following options:
- Blog post
- Email to a friend
- Review
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Worked solution
The student response should choose one of the three suggested text types. In this case, a 'Review' is selected.
Sample Response Analysis:
- **Text Type (Review)**: Features a clear title, a rating/evaluation tone, and direct recommendations suitable for a public audience.
- **Word Count**: 116 words, which falls perfectly within the 70-150 word limit.
- **Bullet 1 (Describe restaurant and food/drink)**: Addressed ('The Old Oak', 'wooden furniture', 'roast chicken with vegetables', 'fresh lemonade').
- **Bullet 2 (Like/dislike about food and atmosphere)**: Addressed (liked the juicy chicken, disliked the sour lemonade, liked the warm atmosphere and music).
- **Bullet 3 (Recommendation)**: Addressed ('I highly recommend... to anyone who loves traditional home-cooked meals').
Sample Response Analysis:
- **Text Type (Review)**: Features a clear title, a rating/evaluation tone, and direct recommendations suitable for a public audience.
- **Word Count**: 116 words, which falls perfectly within the 70-150 word limit.
- **Bullet 1 (Describe restaurant and food/drink)**: Addressed ('The Old Oak', 'wooden furniture', 'roast chicken with vegetables', 'fresh lemonade').
- **Bullet 2 (Like/dislike about food and atmosphere)**: Addressed (liked the juicy chicken, disliked the sour lemonade, liked the warm atmosphere and music).
- **Bullet 3 (Recommendation)**: Addressed ('I highly recommend... to anyone who loves traditional home-cooked meals').
Marking scheme
Assessment Criteria (Total: 15 marks):
**Criterion A: Language (6 marks)**
- **5-6 marks**: Command of vocabulary and grammatical structures is very good. Accuracy is high, with only minor errors that do not impede communication.
- **3-4 marks**: Vocabulary and grammar are generally appropriate, though some repetitive phrasing and minor errors occur.
- **1-2 marks**: Very limited vocabulary and grammar range; frequent errors impede communication.
**Criterion B: Message (6 marks)**
- **5-6 marks**: All three bullet points are fully and clearly developed with appropriate details.
- **3-4 marks**: Most bullet points are addressed, but some are lack detail or are partially unclear.
- **1-2 marks**: Minimal response to the prompt; ideas are not developed.
**Criterion C: Conceptual understanding / Text type (3 marks)**
- **3 marks**: Register, tone, and format are highly appropriate to the chosen text type (e.g., title and subjective evaluation for a review; greeting and informal tone for an email; interactive tone for a blog).
- **2 marks**: Register and format are mostly consistent and appropriate.
- **1 mark**: Little awareness of register and format appropriate to the chosen text type.
**Criterion A: Language (6 marks)**
- **5-6 marks**: Command of vocabulary and grammatical structures is very good. Accuracy is high, with only minor errors that do not impede communication.
- **3-4 marks**: Vocabulary and grammar are generally appropriate, though some repetitive phrasing and minor errors occur.
- **1-2 marks**: Very limited vocabulary and grammar range; frequent errors impede communication.
**Criterion B: Message (6 marks)**
- **5-6 marks**: All three bullet points are fully and clearly developed with appropriate details.
- **3-4 marks**: Most bullet points are addressed, but some are lack detail or are partially unclear.
- **1-2 marks**: Minimal response to the prompt; ideas are not developed.
**Criterion C: Conceptual understanding / Text type (3 marks)**
- **3 marks**: Register, tone, and format are highly appropriate to the chosen text type (e.g., title and subjective evaluation for a review; greeting and informal tone for an email; interactive tone for a blog).
- **2 marks**: Register and format are mostly consistent and appropriate.
- **1 mark**: Little awareness of register and format appropriate to the chosen text type.