Question 1 · essay
25 marksWrite a philosophical response to the following stimulus, in which you identify and discuss the philosophical issue(s) it raises about what it means to be human: 'I often feel like an actor who has walked onto a stage without a script, surrounded by props I did not choose and co-actors I do not know. Yet, the audience expects a coherent performance, and I must invent my character with every step I take.'
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An excellent response should be structured as follows: 1. Introduction: Clearly identify the central philosophical problem presented by the stimulus—the conflict between free self-creation and the physical/social constraints of existence (facticity and the social 'Other'). State a clear thesis on how these elements interact to define human identity. 2. Existential Freedom and Self-Creation: Discuss Jean-Paul Sartre's concept of 'existence precedes essence.' Analyze the metaphor of 'inventing my character' as an expression of radical freedom and the responsibility to define oneself. Explore the concept of bad faith (mauvaise foi) in relation to playing a role for an audience. 3. Facticity and Thrownness: Address the 'stage' and 'props I did not choose' using Martin Heidegger's concept of Geworfenheit (thrownness) and Sartre's facticity. Discuss how human freedom is not absolute but always situated within concrete limits (e.g., historical epoch, biology, social class). 4. The Social Dimension and the 'Other': Analyze the 'audience' and 'co-actors.' Discuss how human identity is dialogical, referencing Charles Taylor or G.W.F. Hegel's master-slave dialectic. Contrast Sartre's view of the Other as a threat to freedom ('Hell is other people') with more collaborative views of social identity (e.g., Maurice Merleau-Ponty or Martin Buber). 5. Conclusion: Synthesize the arguments, proposing a nuanced view of what it means to be human—namely, that humans are self-interpreting animals who must navigate the tension between their given circumstances and their freedom to act.
Marking scheme
The essay is evaluated out of 25 marks using the official IB Philosophy assessment criteria: Criterion A: Focus and Specification (5 marks) - To what extent does the student identify and analyze the philosophical issues in the stimulus? Does the response maintain a direct focus on the core theme 'Being Human'? Criterion B: Knowledge and Understanding (5 marks) - Does the response demonstrate a deep understanding of relevant philosophical concepts, theories, and traditions (e.g., Existentialism, Facticity, Phenomenological accounts of the Self)? Criterion C: Critical Analysis (5 marks) - How well are arguments analyzed and evaluated? Is there a balanced debate between different perspectives (e.g., radical freedom vs. determinism or social constructivism)? Criterion D: Personal Response and Argument (5 marks) - Does the student formulate a clear, consistent, and well-justified personal perspective on the issue? Criterion E: Structure and Language (5 marks) - Is the essay well-structured, coherent, and written in appropriate philosophical terminology?