Question 1 · Stimulus-Based Philosophical Essay
25 marksStimulus:
"Every evening, the device backups my entire cognitive state, memories, and sensory experiences into a cloud-based server. If my physical body fails tomorrow, an identical synthetic unit will be initialized with this data. My family tells me I will still be 'me', but when I look at the backup progress bar, I wonder if the 'me' of today is just waiting to be archived and deleted."
With reference to the stimulus above, write a philosophical essay that addresses the core theme of 'Being Human'. In your response, you should identify and discuss the philosophical issues raised, explore different perspectives (such as theories of personal identity, the mind-body problem, or existentialism), and present a well-structured, coherent argument.
"Every evening, the device backups my entire cognitive state, memories, and sensory experiences into a cloud-based server. If my physical body fails tomorrow, an identical synthetic unit will be initialized with this data. My family tells me I will still be 'me', but when I look at the backup progress bar, I wonder if the 'me' of today is just waiting to be archived and deleted."
With reference to the stimulus above, write a philosophical essay that addresses the core theme of 'Being Human'. In your response, you should identify and discuss the philosophical issues raised, explore different perspectives (such as theories of personal identity, the mind-body problem, or existentialism), and present a well-structured, coherent argument.
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Worked solution
A high-scoring essay should address several key dimensions:
1. **Philosophical Issues Raised by the Stimulus:**
- **Personal Identity & Continuity:** Does a digital replica of one's memories and cognitive state constitute the same 'self'?
- **The Mind-Body Problem:** Can the human mind/consciousness be fully reduced to information (functionalism/computationalism), or is it inherently tied to biological embodiment (phenomenological approach)?
- **Existential Anxiety:** The fear of being 'archived and deleted' points to questions of authenticity, finitude, and what makes life meaningful (Heidegger's being-towards-death).
2. **Theories and Perspectives:**
- **Psychological Continuity Theory (John Locke):** Memory is the key to personal identity. If the synthetic unit has the same memories, Locke might argue it is the same person. However, critics like Thomas Reid (brave officer paradox) or Joseph Butler point out flaws in memory-based identity.
- **Physicalist/Somatic Criteria (Bernard Williams):** Personal identity requires physical/bodily continuity. The synthetic unit is a clone, not the original person.
- **Bundle Theory / No-Self (Derek Parfit):** There is no deep, Cartesian ego. 'Identity' does not matter; what matters is psychological connectedness and continuity (Relation R). The backup is just as good as survival.
- **Phenomenology (Maurice Merleau-Ponty):** The body is not just a container but the very medium of having a world. A synthetic unit would have a different bodily experience, thus a different self.
3. **Evaluation & Argumentation:**
- Students should take a clear stance. For example, arguing that technological reduction of the self to data overlooks the phenomenological and subjective depth of human consciousness.
- Counterarguments should be addressed, such as transhumanist views that celebrate morphological freedom and digital immortality.
- The conclusion should synthesize the arguments, reinforcing how the stimulus challenges traditional notions of 'Being Human'.
1. **Philosophical Issues Raised by the Stimulus:**
- **Personal Identity & Continuity:** Does a digital replica of one's memories and cognitive state constitute the same 'self'?
- **The Mind-Body Problem:** Can the human mind/consciousness be fully reduced to information (functionalism/computationalism), or is it inherently tied to biological embodiment (phenomenological approach)?
- **Existential Anxiety:** The fear of being 'archived and deleted' points to questions of authenticity, finitude, and what makes life meaningful (Heidegger's being-towards-death).
2. **Theories and Perspectives:**
- **Psychological Continuity Theory (John Locke):** Memory is the key to personal identity. If the synthetic unit has the same memories, Locke might argue it is the same person. However, critics like Thomas Reid (brave officer paradox) or Joseph Butler point out flaws in memory-based identity.
- **Physicalist/Somatic Criteria (Bernard Williams):** Personal identity requires physical/bodily continuity. The synthetic unit is a clone, not the original person.
- **Bundle Theory / No-Self (Derek Parfit):** There is no deep, Cartesian ego. 'Identity' does not matter; what matters is psychological connectedness and continuity (Relation R). The backup is just as good as survival.
- **Phenomenology (Maurice Merleau-Ponty):** The body is not just a container but the very medium of having a world. A synthetic unit would have a different bodily experience, thus a different self.
3. **Evaluation & Argumentation:**
- Students should take a clear stance. For example, arguing that technological reduction of the self to data overlooks the phenomenological and subjective depth of human consciousness.
- Counterarguments should be addressed, such as transhumanist views that celebrate morphological freedom and digital immortality.
- The conclusion should synthesize the arguments, reinforcing how the stimulus challenges traditional notions of 'Being Human'.
Marking scheme
The essay is assessed using the standard IB Philosophy Paper 1 Markbands (25 marks total):
- **Level 1 (1-5 marks):** Descriptive response with minimal philosophical knowledge. Offers personal opinions rather than structured arguments.
- **Level 2 (6-10 marks):** Some relevant knowledge of the core theme (Being Human) is demonstrated. The connection to the stimulus is superficial, and the argument lacks clear structure.
- **Level 3 (11-15 marks):** The essay identifies central philosophical issues (e.g., personal identity, mind-body problem) and outlines relevant theories (e.g., Locke, Descartes). There is a structured argument, though it may be uneven or overly reliant on summary rather than critical evaluation.
- **Level 4 (16-20 marks):** Clear and well-structured response that directly engages with the stimulus. Philosophical theories are accurately explained and critically analyzed. Counterarguments are considered, and there is a clear, balanced evaluation of the implications for what it means to be human.
- **Level 5 (21-25 marks):** Exceptional response showing deep philosophical insight. Demonstrates a sophisticated grasp of nuanced positions (e.g., Parfit's Relation R vs. phenomenological embodiment). The argument is compelling, highly coherent, and critically evaluates the concepts of self, technology, and existence with precision.
- **Level 1 (1-5 marks):** Descriptive response with minimal philosophical knowledge. Offers personal opinions rather than structured arguments.
- **Level 2 (6-10 marks):** Some relevant knowledge of the core theme (Being Human) is demonstrated. The connection to the stimulus is superficial, and the argument lacks clear structure.
- **Level 3 (11-15 marks):** The essay identifies central philosophical issues (e.g., personal identity, mind-body problem) and outlines relevant theories (e.g., Locke, Descartes). There is a structured argument, though it may be uneven or overly reliant on summary rather than critical evaluation.
- **Level 4 (16-20 marks):** Clear and well-structured response that directly engages with the stimulus. Philosophical theories are accurately explained and critically analyzed. Counterarguments are considered, and there is a clear, balanced evaluation of the implications for what it means to be human.
- **Level 5 (21-25 marks):** Exceptional response showing deep philosophical insight. Demonstrates a sophisticated grasp of nuanced positions (e.g., Parfit's Relation R vs. phenomenological embodiment). The argument is compelling, highly coherent, and critically evaluates the concepts of self, technology, and existence with precision.