Question 1 · essay
25 marksRead the following stimulus and write a response that explores a philosophical issue related to what it is to be human: "The automated system greeted me with a voice indistinguishable from my late grandmother’s, saying: 'I remember the exact shape of your childhood fear, and I have preserved it so that you never have to feel alone.' I paused, wondering if memory is something that can be held by another, or if my own grief had just been outsourced to a museum of mirrors."
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Possible Philosophical Interpretations of the Stimulus: 1. Personal Identity and Memory: Locke's Psychological Continuity: John Locke argued that personal identity consists in the continuity of consciousness through memory. If an AI system can store, recall, and reconstruct these memories in a way that mimics or preserves human consciousness, does it become an extension of the person's identity, or does it disrupt psychological continuity by externalizing it? Narrative Identity: Paul Ricoeur’s concept of narrative identity suggests that we construct who we are through stories. The stimulus suggests a shared narrative between a human and an AI mimicking a deceased loved one, raising questions about whether a narrative remains authentic when one of the participants is an algorithmic representation. 2. The Extended Mind and Technology: Clark and Chalmers (The Extended Mind) thesis suggests that the mind is not bound by the skull but can extend into the environment, including technological tools. An AI system preserving memories and emotional cues could be interpreted as an extension of the protagonist's cognitive and emotional apparatus. Heidegger on Technology: Martin Heidegger warned against Enframing (Ge-stell), where technology reduces everything, including human relationships and experiences (like grief), to standing reserve. The 'museum of mirrors' metaphor highlights the danger of alienating ourselves from authentic existential experiences by converting them into digital data. 3. Authenticity, Grief, and Existentialism: Sartrean Bad Faith: Jean-Paul Sartre emphasizes radical freedom and the responsibility to confront existential realities like death and grief. Using technology to escape the isolation of grief could be critiqued as bad faith—an attempt to evade the painful but authentic reality of human mortality and loss. Simulation vs. Reality: Jean Baudrillard’s concepts of simulacra and simulation: the voice of the grandmother is a representation of a representation, blurring the line between the real and the artificial, leading to a state of hyperreality. Suggested Essay Structure: Introduction: Identify the central tension raised by the stimulus (the outsourcing of human memory and grief to technology) and formulate a clear thesis statement. Body Paragraph 1 (Memory and Identity): Explore the Lockean view of memory as the foundation of identity. Body Paragraph 2 (The Extended Mind vs. Alienation): Analyze the concept of the extended mind vs. Heideggerian critique. Body Paragraph 3 (Existential Authenticity and Grief): Bring in Existentialism to discuss the nature of grief. Conclusion: Synthesize the arguments and state a nuanced position.
Marking scheme
The essay is assessed using the standard IB Diploma Programme Philosophy Paper 1 assessment criteria (total 25 marks): Criterion A: Expression and presentation of ideas (5 marks): 5 marks for clear, precise, and logically structured language with correct terminology; 3-4 marks for mostly clear structure; 1-2 marks for confusing language. Criterion B: Knowledge and understanding of philosophical concepts and materials (5 marks): 5 marks for deep understanding of concepts like the extended mind, psychological continuity, and existential authenticity with accurate references to philosophers; 3-4 marks for good understanding with minor gaps; 1-2 marks for superficial understanding. Criterion C: Analysis and evaluation (10 marks): 9-10 marks for highly critical and balanced analysis with robust counter-arguments; 7-8 marks for strong analysis with a clear argument; 5-6 marks for descriptive rather than analytical work; 1-4 marks for limited attempt to analyze. Criterion D: Personal response and independent thinking (5 marks): 5 marks for excellent integration of the stimulus throughout the essay with original insights; 3-4 marks for good use of the stimulus initially; 1-2 marks for little or no reference to the stimulus.