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H072/01 Section 1: Shakespeare

Answer one question from six set plays (each with an Either/Or choice of whole-play view or character role). About 45 minutes. 30 marks.
10 Question · 300 marks
Question 1 · Essay: evaluate a quoted view of the whole play
30 marks
'Othello is a tragedy about the fragility of trust rather than the power of jealousy.'

To what extent, and in what ways, do you agree with this opinion of Othello?
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Indicative approach (closed text, quotation from memory):

1. Agreement: trust is the play's fault line. Othello places unexamined trust in Iago ('honest Iago') while Desdemona's trust in her husband is absolute; the handkerchief shows how a small token can bear the weight of belief. Iago's method depends on exploiting trust: he works through insinuation, pauses and repeated questions (the temptation scene, Act 3 Scene 3), so that Othello's certainty collapses quickly. Dramatic irony makes the audience watch trust being dismantled. Othello's early confidence ('My life upon her faith') contrasts with his later fragmented, broken syntax.

2. Challenge: jealousy is the force that drives the action once trust fails. Iago's warning about the 'green-eyed monster', Othello's imagery of poison, beasts and filth, the shift from measured verse to prose and exclamation, and Emilia's description of jealousy as self-generating ('begot upon itself') all suggest it is a power with its own logic. Some may argue that the play shows jealousy and racial insecurity as feeding on each other, so that trust fails because Othello is an outsider in Venetian society.

3. Other views: Iago's motiveless malignity and manipulation as the true engine; the tragedy of misreading ('ocular proof'); gender and honour in Jacobean and Renaissance contexts; differing interpretations over time, from Romantic sympathy for Othello to modern readings that foreground race and misogyny; the structural movement from Venice to Cyprus.

4. Judgement: the strongest answers argue how far the two ideas are separable, e.g. fragility of trust is the precondition and jealousy the consequence, and support with close analysis of language, imagery, structure and stagecraft up to the final scene.

Marking scheme

Marked holistically out of 30 using levels of response, best-fit, marking positively. AO2 (analysis of how meanings are shaped) 40%; AO1 (informed, personal response, terminology, accurate expression) 30%; AO5 (different interpretations) 15%; AO3 (contexts) 15%.

Level 6 (26-30): consistently perceptive, sustained evaluation of the proposition; detailed, confident analysis of Shakespeare's language, imagery, structure and dramatic methods; assured use of terminology; consistently relevant interpretations and contexts integrated.
Level 5 (21-25): good, well-developed argument; good analysis of ways meanings are shaped; good use of terminology; good awareness of interpretations and contexts.
Level 4 (16-20): competent argument; competent analysis; some terminology; some relevant interpretations and contexts.
Level 3 (11-15): some relevant response; some identification of methods; generalised or partial argument; limited interpretations and contexts.
Level 2 (6-10): limited response, mainly narrative or descriptive; limited analysis; very little terminology.
Level 1 (0-5): very little relevant response; very little knowledge of the play.
0: no creditworthy response.

Placement within a level (bottom, middle, top) by best fit. Indicative content (trust and jealousy, Iago's manipulation, language shifts, handkerchief, race and gender contexts, differing critical views) is not prescriptive, nor exclusive; original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. No per-point marks. Rubric infringement: mark all answers and award the highest mark.
Question 2 · Essay: evaluate a quoted view of the whole play
30 marks
'The Tempest presents forgiveness as a weaker choice than control.'

Consider the ways in which you agree or disagree with this view of The Tempest.
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Indicative approach (closed text, quotation from memory):

1. Agreement: control dominates the play. Prospero directs the tempest, Ariel's service, Caliban's enslavement, Ferdinand's log-carrying and the staging of the masque; his commands and imperatives shape the verse. Forgiveness is offered only after his enemies are in his power, and some may read it as conditional, a political settlement that restores his dukedom. Antonio's silence at the end leaves forgiveness incomplete, and Caliban is acknowledged ('this thing of darkness I acknowledge mine') rather than freed in any full sense.

2. Challenge: Prospero chooses mercy over revenge, prompted by Ariel's observation about feeling for the shipwrecked; he abjures his 'rough magic', breaks his staff and drowns his book. The movement from anger to reconciliation, marriage of Miranda and Ferdinand, and the romance form's emphasis on restoration suggest forgiveness is the moral achievement and control is what he gives up. The Epilogue makes him dependent on the audience's indulgence.

3. Other views: colonial and postcolonial interpretations questioning whether Prospero's authority is ever relinquished; theatre-as-control readings linking Prospero to the dramatist; Jacobean ideas of kingship, providence and Christian mercy; the late-romance genre conventions; changing stage interpretations over time.

4. Judgement: strongest answers weigh whether control and forgiveness are opposed or whether forgiveness is itself an exercise of power, supported by analysis of language, structure and dramatic effects across the whole play.

Marking scheme

Marked holistically out of 30 using levels of response, best-fit, marking positively. AO2 (analysis of how meanings are shaped) 40%; AO1 (informed, personal response, terminology, accurate expression) 30%; AO5 (different interpretations) 15%; AO3 (contexts) 15%.

Level 6 (26-30): consistently perceptive, sustained evaluation of the proposition; detailed, confident analysis of Shakespeare's language, form and dramatic methods; assured terminology; consistently relevant interpretations and contexts integrated.
Level 5 (21-25): good, well-developed argument; good analysis; good terminology; good awareness of interpretations and contexts.
Level 4 (16-20): competent argument; competent analysis; some terminology; some relevant interpretations and contexts.
Level 3 (11-15): some relevant response; some identification of methods; partial argument; limited interpretations and contexts.
Level 2 (6-10): limited response, mainly narrative; limited analysis; very little terminology.
Level 1 (0-5): very little relevant response; very little knowledge of the play.
0: no creditworthy response.

Placement within a level (bottom, middle, top) by best fit. Indicative content (Prospero's control, mercy and renunciation, the Epilogue, colonial readings, romance genre, Jacobean contexts) is not prescriptive, nor exclusive; original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. No per-point marks. Rubric infringement: mark all answers and award the highest mark.
Question 3 · Essay: evaluate a quoted view of the whole play
30 marks
'Prospero's island is a place where nothing is ever freely given.'

In the light of this comment, explore the ways in which Shakespeare presents power and obligation in The Tempest. [30]
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Indicative approach. Agreement: Prospero's rule rests on debt. He reminds Ariel of rescue from Sycorax and demands further service before release; Caliban is bound by the exchange of language and shelter for labour, and the relationship collapses into accusation; Miranda's and Ferdinand's courtship is shaped by Prospero's tests and 'trials'; the shipwreck and the magic are instruments of a political plan to regain Milan. Shakespeare uses imperatives, repeated reckoning language, and spectacle (masque, tempest, the banquet that vanishes) to show control. Challenge: Prospero's decision to forgive ('the rarer action is in virtue than in vengeance'), his promise of freedom to Ariel, the abjuring of his magic, his acknowledgement of Caliban, and Gonzalo's idealised commonwealth offer alternative views; the epilogue turns obligation onto the audience, asking for release through applause. Contexts (AO3, light touch): Jacobean colonial voyages and ideas of rule; patronage and masque conventions. Interpretations (AO5): colonial and postcolonial readings of Caliban and Prospero; readings that see Prospero as benevolent magus or as authoritarian; changing stage treatments over time. A top response sustains an argued judgement, perhaps that generosity is repeatedly framed within, and limited by, power.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30 by levels of response, best-fit: Level 6 (26-30), Level 5 (21-25), Level 4 (16-20), Level 3 (11-15), Level 2 (6-10), Level 1 (0-5); 0 for no creditworthy response. AO2 (40%) is dominant: analysis of how Shakespeare shapes meanings through language, structure, dramatic effects and staging. AO1 (30%): informed, personal response with accurate terminology and coherent written expression. AO5 (15%): different interpretations, including across time. AO3 (15%): significance of contexts of production and reception. Descriptors progress: consistently / good / competent / some / limited / very little. Mark positively; place marks within a level by bottom, middle, top. Indicative content: many will discuss Prospero's relationships with Ariel and Caliban as debts enforced by command; some may consider Miranda and Ferdinand, or Alonso's and Antonio's treatment; others may argue that forgiveness, release and the epilogue qualify the view; some may use colonial or other critical readings. Indicative content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive: original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. Closed text: no penalty for paraphrased quotation. Rubric infringement: mark all answers and award the highest mark.
Question 4 · Essay: evaluate a quoted view of the whole play
30 marks
'Othello is a tragedy of a society's prejudices, not of one man's weakness.'

Discuss ways in which you find this a convincing reading of the play as a whole. [30]
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Indicative approach. Agreement: Brabantio's reaction to the marriage, the Duke's mixed acceptance, Roderigo's and Iago's racist and misogynist vocabulary, Othello's status as outsider whose position depends on military usefulness, and the treatment of Desdemona and Emilia as possessions or suspects show a society whose values enable the catastrophe. Iago exploits these assumptions, so that his 'evidence' is believed. Shakespeare's shift from Venice to Cyprus, the animalistic and diseased imagery, and the collapse of Othello's verse into fragments present the damage. Challenge: Othello chooses to believe without proof, demands 'ocular proof' then acts without it, and his final speech reveals self-image and self-judgement; Iago's motiveless malignity and individual agency; Cassio's and Desdemona's loyalty show other values available. Interpretations (AO5): Romantic and modern readings of Othello's flaw; postcolonial and feminist readings; changing casting and performance over time. Contexts (AO3, light touch): Jacobean attitudes to race, the Venetian setting, ideas of honour and female chastity. A top response judges how far social and personal causes are intertwined.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30 by levels of response, best-fit: Level 6 (26-30), Level 5 (21-25), Level 4 (16-20), Level 3 (11-15), Level 2 (6-10), Level 1 (0-5); 0 for no creditworthy response. AO2 (40%) is dominant: how Shakespeare shapes meanings through language, imagery, structure and dramatic effects. AO1 (30%): informed, personal response with accurate terminology and expression. AO5 (15%): different interpretations, including over time. AO3 (15%): contexts of production and reception. Descriptors progress: consistently / good / competent / some / limited / very little. Mark positively; place marks by bottom, middle, top of level. Indicative content: many will explore Brabantio, the Senate and Iago's use of racial and gendered stereotypes; some may consider Othello's outsider status and the Venice/Cyprus contrast; others may argue for Othello's jealousy and Iago's agency as the primary causes; some may draw on critical or performance interpretations. Indicative content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive: original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. Closed text: paraphrase acceptable. Rubric infringement: mark all answers and award the highest mark.
Question 5 · Essay: evaluate a quoted view of the whole play
30 marks
Othello

'Othello is a tragedy about how easily trust is destroyed rather than about the destructive power of one man's malice.'

In the light of this comment, discuss Shakespeare's presentation of trust and suspicion in the play as a whole. [30]
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Indicative approach: (1) Take a position, e.g. that the play shows both: Iago exploits a fragility already present in the Venetian and military world, so the claim is persuasive but incomplete. (2) AO2: Iago's insinuating soliloquies and asides, which share his method with the audience; fragmented, animalistic and fevered syntax in Othello's language after the temptation scenes; the repeated motif of sight and proof; the handkerchief as a stage property that carries meaning; dramatic irony as Othello calls Iago honest; the structural shift from Venice to Cyprus, from ordered public speech to private poisoned conversation. (3) Counter-argument: Iago's improvisation, manipulation of Roderigo, Cassio and Othello, and his motives left deliberately uncertain; Emilia's late decision to speak shows trust can also be restored through truth. (4) AO3: early modern attitudes to jealousy, honour, marriage, female obedience, race and outsiders in Venetian society; Othello's position as a valued but marginal general. (5) AO5: different readings over time, e.g. Othello as noble victim, as self-deceiver responsible for his own fall, or Iago as a figure of motiveless malignity; feminist and postcolonial readings that place Desdemona's and Emilia's fates, and racial prejudice, at the centre. (6) Conclusion: a judgement on how far the tragedy depends on fragile trust versus a single malicious agent.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30 by levels of response, placed by best fit (bottom, middle, top within a level); mark positively.
AO weightings for this component: AO2 40%, AO1 30%, AO5 15%, AO3 15% (as reflected in the Section 1 descriptors).
Level 6 (26-30): consistently perceptive analysis of Shakespeare's methods; a convincing, sustained argument on the proposition; fluent use of terminology; well-integrated interpretations and contexts.
Level 5 (21-25): good, detailed analysis; a clear argued response; good use of terminology; good awareness of interpretations and contexts.
Level 4 (16-20): competent analysis; a generally relevant argument; competent terminology; some interpretations and contexts.
Level 3 (11-15): some analysis, partly descriptive; some relevance to the proposition; some terminology; limited contexts or interpretations.
Level 2 (6-10): limited analysis; mostly narrative; limited relevance and expression.
Level 1 (0-5): very little analysis or relevance; very little control of expression.
0: no creditworthy response.
Guidance: AO2 is the dominant objective. Many candidates will argue that trust is shown as fragile in a society built on reputation and outward honesty, citing the temptation scene, the handkerchief and Othello's fractured language. Some may argue that Iago's malice is the driver, citing his soliloquies and manipulation. Others may weigh the two, or consider Desdemona's and Emilia's trust and loyalty. Credit interpretations from different periods and relevant contexts such as ideas of honour, jealousy and race.
The indicative content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive. Original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. Closed text: do not penalise paraphrase or imperfect recall of quotation. Rubric infringement: mark all answers given and award the highest mark in the section.
Question 6 · Essay: evaluate a quoted view of the whole play
30 marks
The Tempest

'The play suggests that power is only ever justified when it is exercised with mercy.'

To what extent does this reflect your understanding of the presentation of power in The Tempest as a whole? In your answer, consider Shakespeare's use of language and dramatic effects. [30]
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Worked solution

Indicative approach: (1) Take a position, e.g. that the play moves Prospero towards mercy but leaves the justification of his power troubled. (2) AO2: Prospero's controlling, imperative address to Ariel and Caliban; the storm and the masque as theatrical displays of authority; magic as a metaphor for stagecraft; the contrast of verse and prose among the court party and the lower-status characters; Caliban's lyrical speech about the island, which complicates his portrayal as a brute; the epilogue, where Prospero asks the audience for release and so acknowledges dependence. (3) Support for the view: Prospero's choice of forgiveness over vengeance towards Alonso, Antonio and Sebastian; the pardoning of the shipwrecked; the release of Ariel; the staging of repentance. (4) Challenge: Prospero's prolonged control, the threat of punishment, Antonio's unclear repentance, Caliban's dispossession, the conspiracy plots showing that power is also sought through violence and drink; mercy may serve Prospero's own return to Milan rather than serve justice. (5) AO3: Jacobean interest in kingship and the divine right of rulers, early voyages and colonial encounters with indigenous peoples, and the status of learning and magic. (6) AO5: interpretations over time, e.g. a benevolent patriarch and artist-figure, or a colonial master; postcolonial readings giving Caliban a central role; modern stagings that stress the cost of forgiveness. (7) Conclusion with a sustained judgement.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30 by levels of response, placed by best fit (bottom, middle, top within a level); mark positively.
AO weightings for this component: AO2 40%, AO1 30%, AO5 15%, AO3 15% (as reflected in the Section 1 descriptors).
Level 6 (26-30): consistently perceptive analysis of Shakespeare's methods; a convincing, sustained argument on the proposition; fluent use of terminology; well-integrated interpretations and contexts.
Level 5 (21-25): good, detailed analysis; a clear argued response; good use of terminology; good awareness of interpretations and contexts.
Level 4 (16-20): competent analysis; a generally relevant argument; competent terminology; some interpretations and contexts.
Level 3 (11-15): some analysis, partly descriptive; some relevance to the proposition; some terminology; limited contexts or interpretations.
Level 2 (6-10): limited analysis; mostly narrative; limited relevance and expression.
Level 1 (0-5): very little analysis or relevance; very little control of expression.
0: no creditworthy response.
Guidance: AO2 is the dominant objective. Many candidates will explore Prospero's movement from vengeance to forgiveness and the role of theatrical effects in showing authority. Some may question whether his power is ever fully justified, given Caliban and Ariel. Others may consider the usurping and conspiring characters and what they show about power without mercy. Credit relevant contexts (kingship, colonial encounter) and interpretations from different periods.
The indicative content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive. Original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. Closed text: do not penalise paraphrase or imperfect recall of quotation. Rubric infringement: mark all answers given and award the highest mark in the section.
Question 7 · Essay: evaluate a quoted view of a character or characters
30 marks
'Richard's greatest talent is not violence but performance: he makes others complicit in their own destruction.'

In the light of this comment, discuss the role of Richard in Richard III. [30]
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Indicative approach: Many candidates will agree in part, exploring Richard's soliloquies and asides, which create intimacy and make the audience complicit; his wooing of Anne, where flattery, irony and stichomythia overturn her grief; his stage-managed reluctance before the citizens and Buckingham (the prayer-book and bishops scene), which shows him acting piety. Candidates may note Buckingham, Hastings and Clarence as victims who misread him or trust him, supporting 'complicit in their own destruction'. Challenge: violence is nonetheless essential (the murder of Clarence by hired killers, the princes in the Tower, Hastings's sudden execution), and Richard increasingly relies on command rather than persuasion after he is crowned, when his performance fails (Elizabeth's resistance, the women's curses, the ghosts, loss of control on Bosworth field). Others may consider his role as Vice figure and theatrical villain, or as a vehicle for the Tudor providential view of history, with Richmond as God's agent. AO3: Tudor historiography, More and the Tudor myth, morality-play tradition, and how audiences over time have responded to Richard's charisma. AO5: critics who see him as seductive entertainer versus those who see a figure of political tyranny; modern productions that emphasise his disability or his modern-dictator style. Strong answers keep judgement focused on the proposition, with close language analysis (puns, imagery of animals and deformity, shifts from verse wit to fragmentation in the final act).

Marking scheme

AO2 (dominant, 20%), AO1 (15%), AO5 (5%), AO3 (5%) across the Component 01 Shakespeare question. Single holistic mark by levels: Level 6 (26-30) consistently well-developed analysis of Shakespeare's shaping of meaning, a sustained argued judgement on the proposition, confident critical terminology and secure whole-play knowledge, integrated interpretations and contexts; Level 5 (21-25) good analysis and argument, good knowledge; Level 4 (16-20) competent, some analysis, some interpretations and context; Level 3 (11-15) some relevant response, partly descriptive; Level 2 (6-10) limited, narrative or assertion; Level 1 (0-5) very little relevant; 0 no creditworthy response. Place marks within a level by best fit (bottom, middle, top) and mark positively. The indicative content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive: original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. No per-point marks. Closed text: do not penalise paraphrased quotation.
Question 8 · Essay: evaluate a quoted view of a character or characters
30 marks
'Katherina is silenced not by love but by an exhausting campaign of control.'

To what extent does this comment match your understanding of the role of Katherina in The Taming of the Shrew? [30]
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Worked solution

Indicative approach: Many will agree that Petruccio's methods (deprivation of food and sleep, the ruined wedding clothes, the hat and gown, contradicting her about sun and moon) are coercive, and that her final speech on obedience follows this regime. Some may argue her early speech and the 'shrew' label show a woman penalised for wit in a market-driven marriage plot where Baptista treats Bianca and Katherina as goods; her isolation by family reinforces the idea of control. Others will resist the claim: the sun and moon scene may show her learning to play his game, with irony and shared wit; the closing speech may be read as sincere, as strategic performance, or as ironic, depending on staging; the Induction and Sly frame distances the action and questions its seriousness. Candidates may discuss kiss-in-the-street as a moment of mutual playfulness. AO3: Elizabethan attitudes to marriage, obedience and the shrew-taming tradition, and changing responses across time, including feminist and modern productions. AO5: critics and directors who play the ending as tragic, comic or subversive. AO2: verse versus prose, wordplay and puns on 'kate/cate', animal and hawking imagery, soliloquy of Petruccio on taming 'my falcon', and the tonal shift in Katherina's final long speech. Reward a sustained judgement on 'not by love' as well as 'exhausting campaign'.

Marking scheme

AO2 (dominant, 20%), AO1 (15%), AO5 (5%), AO3 (5%). Single holistic mark by levels: Level 6 (26-30) consistently well-developed analysis of how Shakespeare shapes meaning, sustained argument about the proposition, confident terminology, secure whole-play knowledge and integrated interpretations/context; Level 5 (21-25) good; Level 4 (16-20) competent; Level 3 (11-15) some; Level 2 (6-10) limited; Level 1 (0-5) very little; 0 no creditworthy response. Best-fit placement (bottom, middle, top); mark positively. Indicative content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive; original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. No per-point marks. Closed text: accept accurate paraphrase.
Question 9 · Essay: evaluate a quoted view of a character
30 marks
'Caliban is more victim than villain.'

In the light of this comment, discuss the role of Caliban in The Tempest. [30]
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Indicative approach (AO2 dominant, with AO1, AO5, AO3). Victim: Caliban claims the island by inheritance from Sycorax and says Prospero's kindness turned to confinement; Prospero's control through threats of physical pain and the language of master and servant; his language is a gift that becomes a curse, yet he uses it to speak poetically about the island's music and dreams, which humanises him; the 'Ban, 'Ban' song shows a desire for freedom. Villain: his admitted attempt on Miranda's honour, with no remorse; the conspiracy with the drunken Stephano and Trinculo to murder Prospero, which parodies the main plot's usurpations; the descriptions of him by Prospero as 'savage' and 'a devil'. Nuance: his misplaced worship of Stephano, treating a drunk as a god, shows him both exploited and foolish; his final recognition ('I'll be wise hereafter') and Prospero's acknowledgement ('this thing of darkness I acknowledge mine') complicate any single reading. Interpretations and contexts: Jacobean voyages and early colonial encounters; post-colonial readings of Caliban as a figure of the oppressed native, versus earlier readings of him as a figure of unregenerate nature; the idea of the 'wild man' in Renaissance thought. Dramatic effect: the contrast with Ariel, the comic subplot, shifts between verse and prose and the contrast of lyricism with brutality. Credit any well-argued, text-supported judgement.

Marking scheme

Holistic levels of response, best-fit, mark positively. AO2 40%, AO1 30%, AO5 15%, AO3 15% (weightings as component guidance for Section 1).
Level 6 (26-30): consistently perceptive analysis of Shakespeare's methods; sustained evaluative argument engaging the proposition; confident, integrated use of different interpretations; contextual understanding relevant and integrated; fluent, precise terminology.
Level 5 (21-25): good, detailed analysis; clear argument; good use of interpretations and context; accurate expression.
Level 4 (16-20): competent analysis; some argument; relevant interpretations or context; generally accurate expression.
Level 3 (11-15): some analysis, mostly descriptive; some awareness of other views or context; some lapses in clarity.
Level 2 (6-10): limited analysis; limited focus on the question; narrative approach.
Level 1 (0-5): very little analysis or relevant knowledge. 0: no creditworthy response.
Placement within a level: bottom, middle or top by best fit. Indicative content: many will argue that Caliban is dispossessed and controlled by Prospero and speaks with lyrical power; some may emphasise the attempted assault and the conspiracy; others may consider colonial and other interpretations, or Jacobean ideas of the 'wild man'. This is not prescriptive, nor exclusive: original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. Rubric infringement: mark all answers given and award the highest mark.
Question 10 · Essay: evaluate a quoted view of a character or characters
30 marks
Answer either (a) or (b).

(a) 'Richard is at his most compelling when he is alone with the audience, and his power declines once he has a crown.'
Discuss this view of the role of Richard in Richard III.

(b) 'The women of the play are not bystanders but the moral conscience of its world.'
Consider the extent to which this comment helps you to understand the role of the female characters in Richard III.

[30]
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Indicative approach for (a): Examine Richard's relationship with the audience: the opening soliloquy of self-declared villainy, asides and wit as he courts Lady Anne, and the charm of his dark humour. Trace the change after the coronation: fewer direct addresses, increasing isolation, impatience with Buckingham, nervous instructions, the troubled night before Bosworth, the ghosts' visions and the cry for a horse in the final battle. Consider whether the audience's complicity turns to distance. Analyse language (rhetorical control, irony, stichomythia, then fragmented and anxious speech), structure (rise and fall pattern) and staging (the Vice figure). Contexts: Tudor historiography and the Tudor myth; providential readings; the Vice tradition. Interpretations: Richard as theatrical charmer versus a figure whose downfall is moral justice; modern performances that preserve his appeal to the end.

Indicative approach for (b): Consider Queen Elizabeth, the Duchess of York, Queen Margaret and Lady Anne. Margaret's curses act as prophecy and frame the plot; the women's chorus of lament in the scene of mourning; the Duchess's rejection of her son; Elizabeth's stichomythic exchange with Richard over his proposal to her daughter, which may be read as resistance or as ambiguous compromise. Question the 'conscience' claim: Anne's capitulation shows vulnerability, and the women's power is verbal rather than political. Link to ritual, lament and curse as dramatic forms, Tudor patriarchal order, and feminist interpretations. Reach a judgement on how far these roles are moral and how far structural.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30, by levels of response, best fit (bottom, middle, top within a level); mark positively. Dominant AO2 (40% of the marks, i.e. 12 marks), then AO1 (30%), AO5 (15%) and AO3 (15%).

Level 6 (26-30): consistently perceptive analysis of Shakespeare's methods; confident, sustained argument with precise terminology and fluent expression; consistently well-integrated alternative interpretations; contexts used insightfully.
Level 5 (21-25): good, detailed analysis; well-structured argument; good use of interpretations and contexts.
Level 4 (16-20): competent analysis; competent argument and expression; competent awareness of interpretations and contexts.
Level 3 (11-15): some analysis, mostly descriptive; some argument; some awareness of interpretations and contexts.
Level 2 (6-10): limited analysis; limited, assertive argument; limited reference to interpretations and contexts.
Level 1 (0-5): very little analysis, argument or awareness; fragmentary expression.
0: no creditworthy response.

Guidance: AO2 is the dominant assessment objective; reward analysis of language, structure and dramatic form. For (a) many will discuss the opening soliloquy, the wooing of Anne and the audience's shifting relationship with Richard; some may explore the ghost scene and the final battle; others may consider Tudor myth and the Vice tradition. For (b) many will discuss Margaret's curses and the women's laments; some may challenge the claim by noting Anne's yielding or the limits of the women's power; others may bring in feminist or providential readings. The indicative content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive. Original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. Closed text: no penalty for paraphrase where quotation is not recalled exactly. If a candidate answers both questions, mark all answers and award the highest mark.

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Question 1 · Essay: evaluate a quoted view of the whole play
30 marks
'Pinter's play offers a household in which every kindness is really a transaction.'

To what extent is this a persuasive reading of The Homecoming? In your answer, consider Pinter's dramatic methods and the ways in which the play has been interpreted by different audiences. [30]
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Indicative approach (not a script). Opening: take a clear line, e.g. the claim captures the play's economy of power but over-simplifies, because Pinter withholds the motives that would let us label any gesture as purely transactional.

For the view: the all-male household trades in status, with insults, orders and mock-courtesy used to establish rank; the late business-like discussion of Ruth's future, with its terms, costs and living arrangements, reduces intimacy to contract; objects such as a chair, a glass or a cigar become tokens of dominance; Pinter's clipped, repetitive dialogue and the use of the pause expose calculation behind politeness; the family's treatment of women as commodities links to contemporary attitudes and to the memory of the absent mother, who is idealised and degraded in the same breath.

Against or qualifying: ambiguity of Ruth's position, who sets some of the terms herself and may gain power, so that the 'transaction' may be hers; Teddy's apparent passivity and the possibility that he is complicit or defeated; moments of sentiment or vulnerability, especially Joey and Lenny's differing behaviour and Max's final bid for attention, which can be read as need rather than trade; Pinter's own reluctance to supply explanations, and the comic grotesque tone, which invites audiences to doubt any single reading.

Interpretations over time: 1960s audiences and critics often saw menace and territorial struggle; later feminist readings debate whether Ruth is exploited or liberated; psychoanalytic readings stress family myth and the mother figure; stage productions vary in how far they play the final tableau as triumph, horror or farce.

Structure: argue across the whole play (opening, middle negotiation, ending) with embedded analysis of language, stagecraft, structure and form, and reach a supported conclusion.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30 by levels of response, placed by best fit (bottom, middle, top) and marked positively. AO1 30% weighting in this component (about 9 marks), AO3 (about 9 marks), AO2 (about 6 marks), AO5 (about 6 marks).

Level 6 (26-30): consistently perceptive, well-argued and sustained evaluation of the proposition; assured, detailed analysis of Pinter's language, dialogue, silence and stage effects; contexts consistently and judiciously integrated; confident, informed engagement with different interpretations; fluent, precise expression and terminology.
Level 5 (21-25): good, clear, well-developed response; good analysis of methods; good contextual understanding; good engagement with interpretations.
Level 4 (16-20): competent, relevant response; some sound analysis; competent contextual and interpretive comment, though uneven.
Level 3 (11-15): some relevant response with partial argument; some awareness of methods, context and interpretation, often asserted.
Level 2 (6-10): limited response, mostly narrative or generalised; limited reference to methods, context or interpretation.
Level 1 (0-5): very little relevant comment, fragmentary.
0: no creditworthy response.

Guidance: AO1 is the dominant objective in this section. Indicative content: many will agree that exchange and bargaining shape relationships, using the negotiation over Ruth and the power-play of language; some may argue that Ruth's agency or the play's ambiguity complicates the claim; others may introduce feminist, psychoanalytic or performance-based interpretations and the 1960s social context. The content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive; original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. Annotate AOs, analysis, effect, link and answering the question. No per-point marks and no error-carried-forward. Rubric infringement: mark all answers given and award the highest mark.
Question 2 · Essay: evaluate a quoted view of the whole play
30 marks
'Butterworth presents rebellion as a glorious performance, but the play never lets us forget its cost.'

In the light of this comment, discuss Jerusalem as a whole. In your answer, consider the dramatic methods Butterworth uses and the significance of the play's contexts. [30]
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Worked solution

Indicative approach (not a script). Opening: take a position, e.g. the claim is largely persuasive, but the play's comedy and mythmaking are so seductive that the cost is felt as dramatic irony rather than constant reminder, which is why audiences divide.

For 'glorious performance': Johnny's tall tales and larger-than-life speech present him as folk hero; the party atmosphere, the festival setting and the loyal followers build theatre inside the play; the staging of the woodland clearing as an alternative kingdom, with its ritual and invocation of myth, elevates resistance; comic energy and charisma invite audience sympathy.

For 'the cost': the pressure of the eviction notice and the council's authority; the effect on those around Johnny, including his dependence on the young and vulnerable and the neglected obligations to his child; the exposure of his lies and the limits of his power; the fading of magic as the structure moves toward the final stand, where the performance becomes isolation and possible defeat.

Qualification: whether Johnny is hero, trickster or destructive fantasist is deliberately left open; the cost may fall more on others than on him; the tone mixes comedy, elegy and tragedy.

Contexts and interpretations: rural marginality, class, the pull of English myth and landscape, and tensions between freedom and responsibility; readings include national allegory, tragic hero, critique of male self-mythologising; productions and audiences have varied in how far they side with Johnny.

Structure: move across the play's opening, middle and ending, embedding analysis of language, form and stagecraft, and conclude with a supported judgement.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30 by levels of response, placed by best fit (bottom, middle, top) and marked positively. AO1 about 9 marks, AO3 about 9 marks, AO2 about 6 marks, AO5 about 6 marks.

Level 6 (26-30): consistently perceptive, sustained and well-argued response to the proposition; assured, detailed analysis of Butterworth's methods (language, structure, staging, tone); contexts consistently and judiciously applied; confident, informed engagement with different interpretations; fluent, precise expression and terminology.
Level 5 (21-25): good, clear and developed argument; good analysis of methods; good contextual understanding; good engagement with interpretations.
Level 4 (16-20): competent, relevant response; some analysis; competent but uneven context and interpretation.
Level 3 (11-15): some relevant response with partial argument; some awareness of methods, context and interpretation, often asserted.
Level 2 (6-10): limited response, mostly narrative; limited reference to methods, context or interpretation.
Level 1 (0-5): very little relevant comment.
0: no creditworthy response.

Guidance: AO1 is the dominant objective in this section. Indicative content: many will agree that Johnny's performances and the carnival atmosphere glorify defiance while consequences emerge through eviction, harm to others and isolation; some may argue the play endorses the myth more than it questions it; others may debate Johnny as hero or fantasist and relate the play to ideas of Englishness, class and authority. The content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive; original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. Annotate AOs, analysis, effect, link and answering the question. No per-point marks and no error-carried-forward. Rubric infringement: mark all answers given and award the highest mark.
Question 3 · Essay: evaluate a quoted view of the whole play
30 marks
'Private Lives is a comedy that only pretends to take love seriously.'

In the light of this comment, discuss Coward's presentation of love and its consequences in the play. [30]
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Indicative approach: A strong answer takes a clear stance on the proposition, e.g. that the play's wit and stylised farce do keep love at a playful distance, but that beneath the comedy Coward shows real emotional volatility and an inability to live without the person who hurts you most.

Points that could be developed (AO1, AO3, AO2, AO5):
- Structure: two honeymoon couples on adjacent balconies, the reunion, the elopement, the Paris flat and the collapse into quarrel; the symmetry and repetition make love look like a pattern or game.
- Language: epigrammatic, brittle dialogue, banter, the agreed safe-word used to halt rows (which reveals both awareness of their destructiveness and a comic device); silence and the music motif as moments where feeling shows through.
- Stage action: the choreographed violence and slapstick of the quarrels, which can be played as farce or as genuine danger; the breakfast scene and the ending where the abandoned spouses quarrel and the first pair slip away, suggesting that attachment, not stability, is what is serious.
- Contrast of Sibyl and Victor with Amanda and Elyot: conventional, earnest devotion is mocked, yet it is also treated with some sympathy.
- Context: interwar upper-class sophistication, changing attitudes to marriage and divorce, Coward's wit as a mask for emotion and the censorship climate of the time.
- Interpretations: critics and audiences have read the play as a cynical comedy of manners, as a romantic celebration of passion, or as a darker study of mutual dependence; productions differ in how violent or tender they make the central pair.

A top response weighs the proposition ('only pretends') against these readings and reaches a supported judgement.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30 using levels of response, placed by best fit (bottom/middle/top of level) and marked positively. Assessment objectives: AO1 (informed, personal response, terminology, accurate expression), AO3 (contexts and their influence), AO2 (how meanings are shaped by language, structure and dramatic form), AO5 (different interpretations). Closed text: accept quotation from memory that is approximate.

Level 6 (26-30): consistently well-developed, perceptive and sustained argument about the proposition; confident, discriminating use of terminology; assured and integrated analysis of dramatic methods; contexts and interpretations (including over time) woven into the argument.
Level 5 (21-25): good, clear argument; good analysis of methods; good understanding of contexts; good engagement with alternative readings.
Level 4 (16-20): competent argument; competent analysis; some secure contextual and interpretive comment.
Level 3 (11-15): some relevant argument, partly descriptive; some attempt at analysis, context and interpretation.
Level 2 (6-10): limited relevance and argument; mostly narrative; limited analysis, context and interpretation.
Level 1 (1-5): very little relevant response or understanding.
0: no creditworthy response.

Indicative content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive. Original but focused answers, whether implicit or explicit, must be rewarded. There are no per-point marks. Rubric infringements: mark all answers given and award the highest mark.
Question 4 · Essay: evaluate a quoted view of the whole play
30 marks
'Jerusalem celebrates freedom, but it also shows that freedom has a price that someone has to pay.'

How far do you agree with this view of the play? [30]
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Indicative approach: A strong answer accepts that the play honours a rebellious, unregulated way of life while arguing that Butterworth consistently shows who bears the cost: those dependent on Rooster, the people around him, and ultimately Rooster himself.

Points that could be developed (AO1, AO3, AO2, AO5):
- Setting and staging: a single woodland clearing and caravan, the contrast between an old, unofficial England and the encroaching new housing estate and council authority; the eviction notice as a pressure that structures the plot.
- Rooster as storyteller: myths, tall tales and comic bravado create a charismatic figure of liberty; his audience of young followers and drifters enjoys that freedom but also depends on him, and the question of his responsibility to them (including the missing girl and the young people he supplies) complicates a purely celebratory reading.
- Language and tone: comic and lyrical registers set against threat and menace; the ritual, folkloric and mythic references; the drum and the final invocation as a moment that is both heroic and tragic.
- Characters who pay: Phaedra, Lee, Ginger, the Professor, Dawn and Rooster's son, and the ordinary residents and officials, each showing different costs of Rooster's way of living.
- Context: St George's Day setting, ideas of Englishness, rural versus modern England, the era of the 2010s and the economic crisis, the countryside and authority.
- Interpretations: audiences and critics have seen Rooster as a heroic outsider, as an irresponsible exploiter, or as a figure the play deliberately keeps ambiguous; productions and reception over time differ on this.

A top response evaluates 'celebrates' and 'price' separately, then reaches a supported judgement.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30 using levels of response, placed by best fit (bottom/middle/top of level) and marked positively. Assessment objectives: AO1 (informed, personal response, terminology, accurate expression), AO3 (contexts and their influence), AO2 (how meanings are shaped by language, structure and dramatic form), AO5 (different interpretations). Closed text: accept quotation from memory that is approximate.

Level 6 (26-30): consistently well-developed, perceptive and sustained argument about the proposition; confident, discriminating use of terminology; assured and integrated analysis of dramatic methods; contexts and interpretations (including over time) woven into the argument.
Level 5 (21-25): good, clear argument; good analysis of methods; good understanding of contexts; good engagement with alternative readings.
Level 4 (16-20): competent argument; competent analysis; some secure contextual and interpretive comment.
Level 3 (11-15): some relevant argument, partly descriptive; some attempt at analysis, context and interpretation.
Level 2 (6-10): limited relevance and argument; mostly narrative; limited analysis, context and interpretation.
Level 1 (1-5): very little relevant response or understanding.
0: no creditworthy response.

Indicative content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive. Original but focused answers, whether implicit or explicit, must be rewarded. There are no per-point marks. Rubric infringements: mark all answers given and award the highest mark.
Question 5 · Essay: evaluate a quoted view of the whole play
30 marks
'Beneath its glittering surface, Private Lives is a play about the dangers of passion rather than its pleasures.'

To what extent is this a convincing account of Coward's play? In your answer, consider the writer's use of language and dramatic effects, and the ways in which the play has been received by different audiences.
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Worked solution

Indicative approach for a Level 5-6 response (not a prescriptive plan).

Thesis: a strong answer will probably argue that the play is more ambiguous than the proposition allows: passion is shown as both exhilarating and destructive, and Coward's comic form lets the audience enjoy the danger.

Points for the claim: Elyot and Amanda's quarrels escalate into physical violence, and the comedy depends on the sense that their love and hostility are inseparable. The couple's earlier marriage collapsed for this reason, and the structure suggests they will repeat the pattern. Victor and Sibyl, the abandoned spouses, are left hurt and then drawn into their own quarrel in the final act, so the cost of passion is spread across the cast. The play's cyclical structure (a shared balcony, a shared flat, a final breakfast scene) implies that nothing is learned.

Points against: the dialogue is brisk, epigrammatic and delightfully inventive, and the lovers' most memorable moments are playful (nonsense code word to stop quarrels, shared nostalgia, the sophisticated mockery of convention). The tone is comic rather than tragic, and the violence is stylised and quickly forgiven. The audience is invited to admire the pair's vitality against the dull respectability of Victor and Sibyl. Contexts: interwar attitudes to marriage, divorce and class leisure; Coward's own persona and the play's early reputation as daring or frivolous; later productions may stress the darker, even abusive, dimension of the relationship, while others favour glamorous light comedy. Different critics have read it as an elegant entertainment or as a more serious study of modern relationships.

Best responses weigh these readings, analyse specific moments of language (rhythm, wit, stage directions, silences, the use of music) and dramatic effect (symmetrical set-up of the two couples, the shift from balcony to flat, the farcical final scene), and reach a sustained judgement.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30 using levels of response, placed by best fit (bottom, middle, top). Mark positively. Assessment objectives: AO1 (30% of the question weighting), AO3 (30%), AO2 (20%), AO5 (20%) as set out for Component 02 Section 1; AO1 is the lead strand.

Level 6 (26-30): consistently sustained, perceptive argument in response to the proposition; confident, precise use of terminology; excellent, well integrated understanding of contexts (interwar society, attitudes to marriage, comedy of manners, the play's reception); evaluative engagement with different interpretations; insightful analysis of Coward's language and dramatic methods.
Level 5 (21-25): good, well developed argument; secure terminology; good understanding of context and of other interpretations; good analysis of methods.
Level 4 (16-20): competent, structured argument; generally accurate terminology; competent contextual and interpretive awareness; competent analysis.
Level 3 (11-15): some relevant argument, with description at times; some terminology; some contextual and interpretive reference; some analysis.
Level 2 (6-10): limited argument; limited terminology and expression; limited context and interpretation; limited analysis, mostly narrative.
Level 1 (0-5): very little relevant argument, context, interpretation or analysis; weak expression.
0: no creditworthy response.

Indicative content: many will consider the violent quarrels and cyclical structure as evidence of danger; some may argue that the comic style, wit and glamour make passion attractive; others may question whether Victor and Sibyl's fate suggests the dangers fall on the conventional. Some may discuss the 1930s context or varied stagings and critical views. This content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive. Original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. No per-point marks; no error-carried-forward rule. Rubric infringements: mark all answers and award the highest mark.
Question 6 · Essay: evaluate a quoted view of the whole play
30 marks
'In Williams's play, the characters are less the authors of their downfall than the victims of the world they inhabit.'

Discuss this view of A Streetcar Named Desire. In your answer, explore Williams's dramatic methods and consider the significance of the play's social and cultural contexts.
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Indicative approach for a Level 5-6 response (not a prescriptive plan).

Thesis: a strong answer will weigh social determinism against individual agency, and probably conclude that Williams presents a tragedy in which flawed individuals and hostile social structures combine.

Points for the view: Blanche is shaped by the loss of the family estate, the expectations placed on a Southern woman of her generation, and the lack of any economic independence or secure place in society. Her dependence on men's approval and her vulnerability to the label of fallen woman reflect the gendered double standards of the 1940s. Stanley represents a new, post-war, working-class and ethnically mixed America that has no use for the old gentility; the apartment's lack of privacy (thin walls, curtain instead of door) emphasises how environment presses on the characters. Stella's choice to remain with Stanley can be read as the product of limited options and the social pressure to preserve the family and marriage. The closing sequence, in which institutional authority arrives to take Blanche away and the neighbours look on, may be read as society disposing of the inconvenient.

Points against: Blanche's lies, her evasion of the truth, her past conduct and her cruelty to Stanley and Stella's household contribute to the conflict; Stanley's violence, bullying and the rape are acts of personal responsibility not excused by context; Mitch's weakness and his choice to reject Blanche are personal failings. Stella's final decision is partly an act of will and self-protection. Interpretations: early audiences and critics tended to see Blanche as a tragic heroine; later feminist and queer readings emphasise social structures, while some stagings foreground Stanley's brutality or Blanche's self-delusion. Dramatic methods: symbolic lighting, the paper lantern, music (the polka tune and the blues), bathing motif, expressionistic sound, stage directions, contrast of dialects and registers.

Top responses consider these points through specific moments, link methods to meaning, and sustain a clear judgement.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30 using levels of response, placed by best fit (bottom, middle, top). Mark positively. Assessment objectives: AO1 (30% weighting), AO3 (30%), AO2 (20%), AO5 (20%) for Component 02 Section 1; AO1 is the lead strand.

Level 6 (26-30): consistently sustained and perceptive argument addressing the proposition; confident, precise terminology and fluent expression; excellent understanding of cultural and social contexts (post-war America, the declining South, gender and class); evaluative handling of different interpretations; insightful analysis of Williams's methods.
Level 5 (21-25): good, well developed argument; secure terminology; good contextual and interpretive understanding; good analysis.
Level 4 (16-20): competent argument; generally accurate terminology; competent contextual and interpretive reference; competent analysis.
Level 3 (11-15): some argument, with narrative at times; some terminology; some contextual and interpretive reference; some analysis.
Level 2 (6-10): limited argument and expression; limited context and interpretation; limited analysis.
Level 1 (0-5): very little relevant argument, context, interpretation or analysis; weak expression.
0: no creditworthy response.

Indicative content: many will discuss Blanche's relation to the lost Southern past and to Stanley's New Orleans; some may argue that the characters' own choices (deception, violence, Stella's decision, Mitch's rejection) are decisive; others may consider differing critical or theatrical interpretations over time. This content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive. Original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. No per-point marks; no error-carried-forward rule. Rubric infringements: mark all answers and award the highest mark.
Question 7 · Essay: discuss roles in light of a quoted comment
30 marks
'Stella is less a character than a hinge on which the play's power struggle turns.'

In the light of this comment, discuss the role of Stella in A Streetcar Named Desire by Tennessee Williams.
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Indicative approach (not a model script). Thesis: Stella is substantially a pivot, but the play also gives her a distinct perspective and a decision that shapes its ending. Possible paragraphs: (1) Structural role: sister to Blanche and wife to Stanley, she is the contested prize and the audience's measure of each; staging of her between the two in the apartment's two rooms, and the shared space that denies privacy. (2) Her sensual bond with Stanley: stage directions and the reconciliation after the violence suggest desire and dependence, giving her motive beyond being a hinge; the 'colour' of the music and the sounds of the neighbourhood heighten this. (3) Her loyalty and divided perspective on Blanche: her kindness, her reluctance to believe Blanche's account at the end, and the question of whether this is self-protection for the sake of the baby. (4) Context: late 1940s New Orleans, shifting class and gender expectations, the decline of the old South against a new immigrant working-class energy, and limited options for women without money or status. (5) Interpretations: feminist readings may see Stella as complicit in or trapped by patriarchy; others see a pragmatic survivor; some productions play the final scene as tragic resignation, others as chosen denial. (6) Language and form: her plain, domestic idiom contrasted with Blanche's ornate speech; the placing of her at the final tableau. Conclusion: judgement on how far 'hinge' is adequate.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30 by levels, best-fit within a level (bottom, middle, top); mark positively. AO1 (15%), AO3 (15%), AO2 (10%), AO5 (5%) for this component, with AO1 the dominant strand in the guidance.
Level 6 (26-30): consistently articulate, well-structured, personal and creative argument on Stella's role in response to the proposition; consistently insightful analysis of dramatic methods and language; confident, integrated understanding of contexts; evaluates different interpretations perceptively.
Level 5 (21-25): good, coherent argument; good analysis of methods; good, relevant use of context; good awareness of interpretations.
Level 4 (16-20): competent argument and terminology; competent analysis; competent contextual understanding; competent reference to interpretations.
Level 3 (11-15): some relevant argument and some accuracy; some analysis, may be descriptive; some context; some awareness of other views.
Level 2 (6-10): limited argument and expression; limited analysis; limited context; limited awareness of interpretations.
Level 1 (0-5): very little relevant response, analysis, context or interpretation. 0: no creditworthy response.
Indicative content: many will agree that Stella is positioned between Blanche and Stanley and is the object of their conflict; some may argue she is an agent whose desire, loyalty and final choice drive the outcome; others may consider interpretations by different audiences and productions over time, and how post-war attitudes to marriage, class and gender shape her role. Content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive: original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. Rubric infringements: mark all answers given and award the highest mark.
Question 8 · Essay: discuss roles in light of a quoted comment
30 marks
'The outsiders in Jerusalem are more honest about the world than the people who run it.'

In the light of this comment, discuss the roles of Johnny 'Rooster' Byron and Professor in Jez Butterworth's Jerusalem.
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Indicative approach (not a model script). Thesis: both figures speak with disruptive candour yet their honesty is tangled with myth-making and performance, so the claim holds only partly. Possible paragraphs: (1) Rooster as storyteller: his tall tales of giants and his claims about his past blend truth and fabrication; honesty about appetite, drink and disregard for rules versus unreliability. (2) The Professor: elderly, nostalgic, a figure of lost folk memory whose confusions and loyalty complicate his reliability; his role as witness and chorus. (3) Authority: the council officials and the notice of eviction, who speak in the impersonal language of procedure; consider whether they are dishonest or merely limited. (4) Setting and staging: the woodland clearing and caravan as a space outside regulation; the final summoning of the giants and the stage's sense of ritual. (5) Context: rural England in the early 2000s, tensions over development, class, Englishness and tradition. (6) Interpretations: some read Rooster as a hero of free spirit, others as a self-deluding, neglectful adult whose behaviour harms others; the tragicomic tone allows both. Conclusion: judgement on the comment's balance.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30 by levels, best-fit within a level (bottom, middle, top); mark positively. AO1 (15%), AO3 (15%), AO2 (10%), AO5 (5%) for this component, with AO1 the dominant strand in the guidance.
Level 6 (26-30): consistently articulate, well-structured, personal and creative argument on the roles of Rooster and the Professor in response to the proposition; consistently insightful analysis of dramatic methods and language; confident, integrated understanding of contexts; evaluates different interpretations perceptively.
Level 5 (21-25): good, coherent argument; good analysis of methods; good, relevant use of context; good awareness of interpretations.
Level 4 (16-20): competent argument and terminology; competent analysis; competent contextual understanding; competent reference to interpretations.
Level 3 (11-15): some relevant argument and some accuracy; some analysis, may be descriptive; some context; some awareness of other views.
Level 2 (6-10): limited argument and expression; limited analysis; limited context; limited awareness of interpretations.
Level 1 (0-5): very little relevant response, analysis, context or interpretation. 0: no creditworthy response.
Indicative content: many will discuss Rooster's storytelling and defiance of authority; some may question whether his honesty is undermined by exaggeration and denial; others may explore the Professor's role as keeper of memory and the contrast with the council's bureaucratic voice, and how audiences and productions have read the play's treatment of Englishness over time. Content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive: original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. Rubric infringements: mark all answers given and award the highest mark.
Question 9 · Essay: discuss roles in light of a quoted comment
30 marks
'Without Lee, the play would lose its link between the myth of old England and the harsh reality of the present.'

In the light of this comment, discuss the role of Lee in Jerusalem.

[30]
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Indicative approach (not prescriptive): Agreement: Lee acts as a foil and witness within the woodland world, arriving with plans to leave for Australia and listening to Johnny's tales, thereby giving the audience an outsider's view of both myth and mundane threat; his reactions help the audience gauge Johnny's credibility; his departure plans and ties to the Flintlock community link the fantastic to a specific rural present. Challenge: other characters (the council officials, Ginger, Professor, Phaedra, Davey) also carry the link between myth and reality; Lee's role may be thought subordinate to Johnny's, a supporting presence rather than the essential bridge; some will argue his function is symbolic of escape and of the unfulfilled dreams of young working-class men. Contexts (AO3): Englishness, the pastoral and rural decline, eviction and local authority power, St George's Day and the Morris tradition, the play's reception around the 2009 period and its revivals. Interpretations (AO5): critical readings as elegy or satire, as anti-establishment comedy, or as a political allegory; audiences may respond differently to Johnny's mythmaking. Language and dramatic effects (AO1/AO2): comic dialogue, shifts of register, the woodland set, the use of music and ritual, the contrast between storytelling and the threat of eviction. Top-level answers sustain a judgement on 'without Lee' and test the claim.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30 by levels of response, best fit (bottom/middle/top), marking positively. AO1 (informed personal response, terminology, expression), AO3 (contexts), AO2 (how meanings are shaped), AO5 (different interpretations).
Level 6 (26-30): consistently perceptive, sustained argument on the comment; excellent integrated analysis of dramatic methods; confident, discriminating use of contexts and interpretations.
Level 5 (21-25): good argument and structure; good analysis; good understanding of contexts and interpretations.
Level 4 (16-20): competent argument; competent analysis; some relevant context and interpretation.
Level 3 (11-15): some relevant response, partly developed; some awareness of methods and context.
Level 2 (6-10): limited response, mostly narrative or general.
Level 1 (0-5): very little relevant response. 0 = no creditworthy response.
The indicative content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive; original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. Rubric infringements: mark all answers and award the highest mark.
Question 10 · Essay: discuss roles in light of a quoted comment
30 marks
'Stanley Kowalski is less a villain than a force that the other characters fail to understand.'

In the light of this comment, discuss the role of Stanley in A Streetcar Named Desire by Tennessee Williams.
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Indicative approach: (1) Establish a line of argument, e.g. that Stanley is both antagonist and embodiment of a new post-war social order, so the comment is partly persuasive. (2) AO1/AO2: his introduction through the noise, raw meat and bowling, associated with vitality and physicality; his stage presence, the 'poker night' scenes, the stage directions linking him to animal imagery; his control of Stella through desire; the Napoleonic Code argument; his investigation of Blanche's past; the rape scene and its staging (the lighting, music and the 'blue piano', the fragmentary theatrical devices); his relative lack of remorse and his final dominance. (3) Counter-view: the play invites sympathy for Stanley's perspective at points (his anger at being deceived, his loyalty to friends, his claims about Stella's welfare), and Blanche's own snobbery and evasions provoke him; but the violence cannot be excused, so 'villain' retains force. (4) AO3: post-war America, shifting class and immigrant identity in New Orleans, the decline of the Old South, attitudes to gender and sexuality, the 1940s-50s audience. (5) AO5: different readings over time: early audiences who admired his vigour (and the influence of performance, e.g. stage and screen portrayals), later feminist and class-based readings that see him as a figure of predatory masculinity, and readings that see Williams as ambivalent. (6) Conclusion that weighs the comment with a justified personal judgement.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30 using levels of response, best-fit, marking positively. AO1 (15%), AO3 (15%), AO2 (10%), AO5 (5%) across the component, with AO1 and AO3 weighted heavily in this section.
Level 6 (26-30): consistently sustained, evaluative argument on the role of Stanley in the light of the comment; perceptive analysis of dramatic methods; confident and relevant use of contexts; consistently well-developed engagement with different interpretations; precise terminology and fluent expression.
Level 5 (21-25): good, well-structured response; good analysis of methods; good understanding of context and interpretations.
Level 4 (16-20): competent, clear response; competent analysis, context and interpretations.
Level 3 (11-15): some relevant response with some analysis, context and interpretation; uneven.
Level 2 (6-10): limited response, mostly narrative or assertion; limited use of terminology.
Level 1 (0-5): very little relevant response.
0: no creditworthy response.
Indicative content: many will consider Stanley's dominance, the symbolism of his surroundings and the violence of the final scenes; some may explore him as a representative of post-war change; others may challenge the idea that he is misunderstood by arguing Blanche and Stella understand him all too well, or may discuss different stage and screen interpretations. The content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive: original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. If a candidate answers more than one question, mark all answers given and award the highest mark.
Question 11 · Essay: discuss roles in light of a quoted comment
30 marks
'The women of the play hold power only when the men allow it.'

In the light of this comment, discuss the role of Ruth and the role of Jessie in The Homecoming by Harold Pinter. [30]
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Indicative approach. Thesis: the claim is only partly valid; Ruth's role shows power being seized and redefined within the men's own terms, while Jessie shows how absent women are controlled through memory and language.

1. Ruth: arrival at night after a journey from America with Teddy; silence and stillness; the leg-and-glass moment; her quiet challenge to Lenny; the negotiation over terms and conditions; the final tableau with Joey's head in her lap and Max's plea. Power is arguably taken rather than granted, though her options are shaped by the men's offer.
2. Jessie: never seen; recalled by Max with contradictory affection and contempt; a figure of idealised mother and of perceived betrayal; her absence shows how men narrate women, so her power is present only as the men choose to describe it.
3. Contrast and link: Ruth as a mother who leaves her family and enters another household as a role echoing Jessie; shared pattern of women defined by domestic and sexual function.
4. Methods (AO2): pauses and silences, menace in dialogue, territory and status games, the domestic set and its dominated space, ambiguity of the ending.
5. Contexts (AO3): 1960s attitudes to gender, working-class London masculinity, changing views of marriage and the family.
6. Interpretations (AO5): feminist readings of Ruth as victim or victor, psychoanalytic readings of family roles, differing stagings that make the ending triumphant or bleak.
A conclusion should judge 'only when the men allow it' directly.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30 by levels of response, best-fit within level (bottom, middle, top). Mark positively. Assessed AO1 (dominant, 30%), AO3 (30%), AO2 (20%), AO5 (20%) in the proportions set for Component 02 Section 1.

Level 6 (26-30): consistently sophisticated argument on both roles in light of the comment; precise, discriminating analysis of dramatic methods; contextual understanding fully integrated; confident use of different interpretations; fluent, accurate expression with apt terminology.
Level 5 (21-25): good, sustained argument; good analysis; good contextual understanding; good interpretations; controlled expression.
Level 4 (16-20): competent argument; competent analysis; some secure context; some awareness of interpretations; generally clear expression.
Level 3 (11-15): some argument, partly descriptive; some analysis; limited context and interpretation; some lapses in expression.
Level 2 (6-10): limited relevance, mainly narrative; very little analysis or context; weak expression.
Level 1 (0-5): very little relevant material; 0 for no creditworthy response.

Indicative content: many will explore Ruth's silence, her final terms and the closing tableau; some may consider Jessie's absent but dominant presence in the men's recollections; others may compare the two as differently constrained roles; some may weigh feminist and other interpretations or changing audience views. This content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive. Original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. No per-point marks and no error-carried-forward. Rubric infringement: mark all answers and award the highest mark.
Question 12 · Essay: discuss roles in light of a quoted comment
30 marks
'The younger characters in Jerusalem exist mainly to show what Johnny Byron's myth-making costs and gives.'

In the light of this comment, discuss the role(s) of the younger characters in Jerusalem. [30]
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Worked solution

Indicative approach (not prescriptive). A candidate might argue that the younger characters partly serve Johnny: they form his audience, receive his tall tales and gifts (drink, drugs, a place to gather), and show the pull of his stories about giants and Rooster's mythic past. Contrasts can be drawn between those who stay loyal (Ginger, Lee until his departure, Pea) and those who drift away or turn on him (Davey, Marky, Troy's circle, Phaedra's vulnerability). Equally, a good answer will challenge 'mainly': Lee's wish to leave for Australia gives a counter-view of escape; Phaedra's disappearance and the Fawcett-linked pressures expose the danger of Johnny's yard as a space for unprotected youth; the youngsters' banter and the May Day Morris/festival setting give comic energy and a sense of a fading rural tradition. Contexts (AO3): rural England, Flintock as a symbolic 'England', council and planning authority, tensions between the Establishment and the marginal, post-2000 nostalgia and disillusion. Interpretations (AO5): audiences may read Johnny as inspirational rebel, irresponsible adult, or both; the young characters' treatment shapes these readings. AO2: staging in the yard, the drum summons, stage directions, shifts between comedy and menace, dialect and ritual language. A top response sustains an evaluative argument across the whole play.

Marking scheme

Single holistic mark out of 30 by levels of response, placed by best fit (bottom, middle, top); mark positively.
Assessment objectives for this section: AO1 (articulate informed, personal responses; terminology; accurate written expression), AO3 (contexts), AO2 (how meanings are shaped), AO5 (different interpretations).
Level 6 (26-30): consistently perceptive, well-argued response to the proposition; confident, discriminating analysis of dramatic methods; assured use of context and of different interpretations; fluent, precise expression.
Level 5 (21-25): good, clear argument; good analysis of dramatic methods; good understanding of contexts and interpretations.
Level 4 (16-20): competent response; competent analysis and some contextual and interpretative awareness; generally clear expression.
Level 3 (11-15): some relevant response; some identification of methods; some context or interpretation; uneven expression.
Level 2 (6-10): limited response, mostly narrative; limited analysis, context and interpretation.
Level 1 (0-5): very little relevant response. 0: no creditworthy response.
Indicative content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive; original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. Rubric infringement: mark all answers and award the highest mark.

H072/02 Section 2: Prose post-1900

Answer one question from five set novels. Includes an unseen passage with a short context line, which must be compared with the set text. About 1 hour, including 15 minutes' reading. 30 marks.
2 Question · 60 marks
Question 1 · Thematic essay with comparison to an unseen passage
30 marks
Discuss ways in which Woolf explores the pressure of social expectation on individual lives in Mrs Dalloway. Select material from the whole text.

In your answer, make connections and comparisons with the following passage, which presents a woman making ready for an evening gathering in a provincial town in the 1950s.

Passage

By five o'clock Mrs Ainsley had laid out the good cloth twice, because the first attempt had not satisfied her. The Rector's wife would notice the iron-mark by the sugar bowl; she noticed such things as other people notice weather. Mrs Ainsley turned the cloth, set the bowl over the scorch, and stood back to look at what the room would say about her. It said, she thought, a great deal about effort and very little about ease, and ease was the quality the town prized.

From the window she could see the lane, and the grey slates of the Hallidays' roof,1 and she felt, as she did before every such evening, a small cold certainty that she was being measured. Nobody had ever said so. Her husband, who liked her to be happy, said only that she fussed. But she had learned the rules of the place as one learns a staircase in the dark, by the jolts, and she knew that a sandwich cut wrong or a laugh let go too long would be carried down the lane by morning.

She took off her apron, folded it into the drawer, and became, with a practised lift of the chin, the person who would open the door.

1 slates: roofing tiles

Source: original passage written for this paper.

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Indicative approach (not a script).

Thesis: In both texts social expectation is felt less as open coercion than as an internalised watchfulness that divides a private self from a public performance; Woolf, however, widens the focus from one hostess to a whole society and its institutions.

Points from Mrs Dalloway: (1) Clarissa's party as a performance and her sense of composing herself into a single self for others, set against private doubt; the divided self shaped by free indirect discourse and shifting focalisation. (2) The gendered expectations of the post-war upper-middle-class woman: Clarissa's role as political hostess, her choice of Richard over a less conventional life, and her sense of lost possibility. (3) Institutional authority: Sir William Bradshaw and Holmes, whose notions of 'proportion' and normality press upon Septimus, with tragic consequences; expectation here turns violent. (4) Peter Walsh, Sally Seton and Miss Kilman as figures who test, or are judged by, convention; class and religion. (5) Structural means: a single day, clock chimes, the interweaving of minds, which shows social time regulating private time. (6) AO3: post-First World War Britain, the treatment of shell shock, imperial and class confidence under strain. (7) AO5: readings that see Woolf as satirising establishment values versus those that see sympathy for Clarissa's skill in sustaining social life.

Comparison with the passage: Mrs Ainsley's rehearsal of the scene parallels Clarissa's preparation; both fear unspoken judgement (the Rector's wife who notices 'such things as other people notice weather'; the town carrying gossip by morning). Simile of learning rules 'by the jolts' like a staircase in the dark suggests expectation learned through anxiety. The closing image of becoming 'the person who would open the door' resembles Clarissa's composed public self. Contrasts: the passage is closed, domestic and small-town, with a single focus and a gently ironic third-person voice; Woolf's panorama of London connects private performance to public institutions, empire and mental illness, and gives some moments of exhilaration as well as constraint. The husband's 'fussed' may be compared with Richard's inability to say what he feels.

Credit any well-argued alternative.

Marking scheme

Mark holistically out of 30 using the OCR levels of response; AO1 and AO3 carry most weight in this section, followed by AO2 and AO4 (AO1 articulate informed responses with accurate terminology; AO3 contexts; AO2 analysis of how meanings are shaped; AO4 connections across texts).

Level 6 (26-30): consistently perceptive, well-structured argument; confident, discriminating use of terminology; sophisticated understanding of contexts; incisive analysis of language, form and structure; sustained, illuminating connections with the unseen passage.
Level 5 (21-25): good, well-developed argument; secure terminology; good contextual understanding; good analysis; good connections with the unseen passage.
Level 4 (16-20): competent, relevant argument; some use of terminology; competent contextual awareness; competent analysis; competent connections.
Level 3 (11-15): some relevant points, partly organised; some terminology and context; some analysis; some connection with the passage.
Level 2 (6-10): limited, largely narrative or descriptive; limited analysis, context and comparison.
Level 1 (0-5): very little relevant response; very little analysis, context or comparison.
0: no creditworthy response.

Place within a level by best fit (bottom, middle, top) and mark positively. No marks per point; no error carried forward. Indicative content (many will, some may, others): many will discuss Clarissa's party, divided self and Bradshaw's authority; some may draw on post-war contexts and alternative critical readings; others may compare the passage's domestic anxiety, simile and ironic narration with Woolf's free indirect style. The content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive: original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. Candidates must make use of the whole text and the unseen passage; if the rubric is infringed, mark all answers and award the highest mark.
Question 2 · Thematic essay with comparison to an unseen passage
30 marks
Explore the ways in which Orwell presents the manipulation of memory and record in Nineteen Eighty-Four. Select material from the whole text.

In your answer, make connections and comparisons with the passage below, which describes a clerk at work in the records office of an unnamed state.

Passage

The corrections arrived each morning in a grey envelope, and Teodor's task was to make the archive agree with them. Today a harbour official, dead eleven years, was to be found never to have held his post. Teodor drew a ruler's edge beneath the name in the ledger, struck it through, and entered the name of a man who had always, it now appeared, been in charge. The ink dried. Nothing in the room had changed, and yet something had been put out, like a lamp in another house.

He had once supposed that the work would trouble him. What troubled him instead was how little it did. At noon he ate bread at his desk and found that he could not call up the harbour official's face, only the fact that he had been removed, and that the removal felt older than the man. 'The record is the memory of the nation,' said the notice above the door;2 and Teodor, who kept it, thought that a nation might be a thing that forgot on instruction.

In the evening his daughter asked what he had done that day. 'Tidied,' he said, and she nodded, as children do at the word.

2 notice: a printed sign

Source: original passage written for this paper.

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Indicative approach (not a script).

Thesis: Orwell presents control of the record as the foundation of total power because it reaches inwards, altering what people are able to believe they remember; the passage shows the quieter, bureaucratic form of the same process.

Points from Nineteen Eighty-Four: (1) Winston's work at the Ministry of Truth, rectification of newspapers and the memory hole as routine, clerical and unremarkable; (2) the Party slogan about control of past and present, and doublethink as the mental mechanism that makes falsification self-sustaining; (3) Winston's fragmentary private memories, the diary, the paperweight and the shop as fragile resistance, and Julia's pragmatic indifference to the past; (4) Goldstein's book and O'Brien's claim that reality exists only in the mind of the Party; the torture scenes in the Ministry of Love and the two-plus-two episode; (5) Newspeak and the Appendix as a way of narrowing recorded thought; (6) form: close third-person focalisation, the shifting tenses and the uncertainty of Winston's recollections, which make the reader share his instability; (7) AO3: totalitarian propaganda and the revision of history in the 1930s and 1940s, Orwell's wartime work, post-war austerity; (8) AO5: readings as political warning versus psychological study; feminist critiques of Julia; Appendix as suggesting survival of a past.

Comparison: Teodor's routine, bureaucratic labour parallels Winston's; the matter-of-fact action of striking out a name echoes the memory hole. Simile of a lamp put out 'in another house' suggests erasure as distant yet consequential. The notice above the door ironically resembles Party slogans. Teodor's discovery that the removal 'felt older than the man' recalls how revision displaces actual memory. Contrasts: the passage is quiet and elegiac, and shows no overt coercion, whereas Orwell shows state violence, surveillance and ultimate capitulation; Teodor's evasion with his daughter ('Tidied') recalls the children's role in the novel, but Orwell makes the threat of denunciation explicit. Winston is conscious and rebellious; Teodor is numbed.

Credit any well-argued alternative.

Marking scheme

Mark holistically out of 30 using the OCR levels of response; AO1 and AO3 carry most weight in this section, followed by AO2 and AO4 (AO1 informed, accurate, terminologically secure response; AO3 contexts of production and reception; AO2 how meanings are shaped by language, form and structure; AO4 connections between the set text and the unseen passage).

Level 6 (26-30): consistently perceptive, well-structured argument; discriminating terminology; sophisticated contextual understanding; incisive analysis; sustained, illuminating comparison.
Level 5 (21-25): good, well-developed argument; secure terminology; good context; good analysis; good connections.
Level 4 (16-20): competent argument; some terminology; competent context; competent analysis; competent connections.
Level 3 (11-15): some relevant points; some terminology, context, analysis and comparison.
Level 2 (6-10): limited, mainly descriptive; limited analysis, context and comparison.
Level 1 (0-5): very little relevant material.
0: no creditworthy response.

Place within the level by best fit (bottom, middle, top); mark positively. No per-point marks and no error carried forward. Indicative content: many will discuss the Ministry of Truth, the memory hole, doublethink and Winston's private memories; some may consider totalitarian contexts and differing critical interpretations; others may compare the passage's imagery, tone and bureaucratic setting with Orwell's methods. The content is not prescriptive, nor exclusive: original but focused answers, implicit as well as explicit, must be rewarded. Candidates should use the whole text and the unseen passage; where the rubric is infringed, mark all answers and award the highest mark.

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