Question 1 · Essay
25 marksIn what ways does Boey strikingly convey feelings of anger and despair about the natural world in Report to Wordsworth?
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Worked solution
In 'Report to Wordsworth', Boey Kim Cheng uses a range of literary devices to convey feelings of anger and despair about the degradation of the environment:
1. The Subversion of Romantic Conventions: The poem is structured as a sonnet, a form traditionally used to celebrate love or the sublime beauty of nature (strongly associated with Wordsworth). By using this structure to catalogue ecological disaster, Boey emphasizes his despair, presenting a 'report' that serves as an obituary rather than an appreciation.
2. Allusions and the Death of Myth: The speaker declares that 'Great Pan is dead' and that 'Proteus rising from the sea' is no more. By referencing these classical deities of nature, Boey suggests that the spiritual, sacred connection between humanity and the earth has been permanently severed, evoking a deep sense of despair.
3. Violent and Grotesque Imagery: The anger is strikingly conveyed through verbs and adjectives of violence and disease. Nature is described as being on 'the operating table', while the 'wounded wilderness' screams. The 'insatiate appetite' of humanity is blamed for the 'dying of the seas', presenting human greed as a ravenous, destructive monster.
4. The Tone of Hopelessness: The poem concludes with a stark, devastating image of 'man' standing 'on a yellow strand', helplessly watching the sky 'congest' and 'blow out'. The finality of these words suggests that destruction is irreversible, reinforcing the speaker's despair.
1. The Subversion of Romantic Conventions: The poem is structured as a sonnet, a form traditionally used to celebrate love or the sublime beauty of nature (strongly associated with Wordsworth). By using this structure to catalogue ecological disaster, Boey emphasizes his despair, presenting a 'report' that serves as an obituary rather than an appreciation.
2. Allusions and the Death of Myth: The speaker declares that 'Great Pan is dead' and that 'Proteus rising from the sea' is no more. By referencing these classical deities of nature, Boey suggests that the spiritual, sacred connection between humanity and the earth has been permanently severed, evoking a deep sense of despair.
3. Violent and Grotesque Imagery: The anger is strikingly conveyed through verbs and adjectives of violence and disease. Nature is described as being on 'the operating table', while the 'wounded wilderness' screams. The 'insatiate appetite' of humanity is blamed for the 'dying of the seas', presenting human greed as a ravenous, destructive monster.
4. The Tone of Hopelessness: The poem concludes with a stark, devastating image of 'man' standing 'on a yellow strand', helplessly watching the sky 'congest' and 'blow out'. The finality of these words suggests that destruction is irreversible, reinforcing the speaker's despair.
Marking scheme
Assessment is based on the 0475 Literature in English generic marking grid:
- Level 8 (23–25 marks): Assured, highly integrated, and critical response. Candidates will analyze with flair how Boey uses the sonnet form and apocalyptic imagery to express despair. There will be close, sensitive evaluation of specific word choices (e.g., 'wounded wilderness', 'insatiate appetite') and how they evoke anger.
- Level 7 (20–22 marks): Perceptive, sustained personal response. Explores the subversion of Wordsworthian romanticism and evaluates the emotional weight of classical references with clear critical understanding.
- Level 6 (17–19 marks): Developed and well-supported response. Clearly identifies themes of ecological destruction and understands the feelings of anger and despair, supported by good textual reference.
- Level 5 (14–16 marks): Reasonably developed response, showing some understanding of the poem's surface and deeper meanings. Makes some relevant comments on language and imagery.
- Levels 1–4 (1–13 marks): Descending levels of familiarity with the text, ranging from basic comprehension of the environmental theme to limited, unsubstantiated assertions.
- Level 8 (23–25 marks): Assured, highly integrated, and critical response. Candidates will analyze with flair how Boey uses the sonnet form and apocalyptic imagery to express despair. There will be close, sensitive evaluation of specific word choices (e.g., 'wounded wilderness', 'insatiate appetite') and how they evoke anger.
- Level 7 (20–22 marks): Perceptive, sustained personal response. Explores the subversion of Wordsworthian romanticism and evaluates the emotional weight of classical references with clear critical understanding.
- Level 6 (17–19 marks): Developed and well-supported response. Clearly identifies themes of ecological destruction and understands the feelings of anger and despair, supported by good textual reference.
- Level 5 (14–16 marks): Reasonably developed response, showing some understanding of the poem's surface and deeper meanings. Makes some relevant comments on language and imagery.
- Levels 1–4 (1–13 marks): Descending levels of familiarity with the text, ranging from basic comprehension of the environmental theme to limited, unsubstantiated assertions.