Question 1 · essay
25 marksHow does Wright vividly convey the onlookers' mixture of fear and fascination in *Hunting Snake*?
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Worked solution
To construct a successful response, candidates should explore:
- The initial peaceful setting: 'Sun-warmed in the late season's grace', which is suddenly disrupted by the snake's arrival, establishing a contrast that heightens tension.
- The physical description of the snake: 'reeling by on fierce intent', 'black, shining, clad in cold splinters of the sun', which presents the snake as both dangerous ('cold splinters') and breathtakingly beautiful ('shining').
- The physical reaction of the onlookers: 'We stood lost in breath', 'our eyes went with him', 'our breath, scarce-held, we drew', demonstrating a physical paralysis born out of fear, yet an inability to look away (fascination).
- The structural shift and word choice: The transition from the active, menacing verbs associated with the snake ('flickered', 'quested', 'slid') to the silent immobility of the humans, highlighting the primal dominance of nature.
- The conclusion: 'took a deeper breath of day, / and went on', showcasing the lingering impact of the experience on the speakers after the snake disappears.
- The initial peaceful setting: 'Sun-warmed in the late season's grace', which is suddenly disrupted by the snake's arrival, establishing a contrast that heightens tension.
- The physical description of the snake: 'reeling by on fierce intent', 'black, shining, clad in cold splinters of the sun', which presents the snake as both dangerous ('cold splinters') and breathtakingly beautiful ('shining').
- The physical reaction of the onlookers: 'We stood lost in breath', 'our eyes went with him', 'our breath, scarce-held, we drew', demonstrating a physical paralysis born out of fear, yet an inability to look away (fascination).
- The structural shift and word choice: The transition from the active, menacing verbs associated with the snake ('flickered', 'quested', 'slid') to the silent immobility of the humans, highlighting the primal dominance of nature.
- The conclusion: 'took a deeper breath of day, / and went on', showcasing the lingering impact of the experience on the speakers after the snake disappears.
Marking scheme
Band descriptors are used to mark IGCSE Literature in English essays out of 25 marks.
- **Band 8 (23-25 marks):** Demonstrates deep, sensitive, and critical understanding of the poem. Explores the poetic devices (alliteration, imagery, structure) with flair and individuality. Supports arguments with exceptionally well-selected textual evidence.
- **Band 7 (20-22 marks):** Shows clear critical understanding of the poem and its deeper implications. Responds sensitively and in detail to how Wright uses language to convey fear and fascination.
- **Band 6 (17-19 marks):** Developed response showing clear understanding of the text. Identifies key imagery and explains its effect on the reader, with a well-developed personal response.
- **Band 5 (14-16 marks):** Shows a reasonable understanding of the poem. Identifies key moments of fear and fascination and makes some attempt to analyse the language/devices used.
- **Band 4 (11-13 marks):** Offers some understanding of the literal meaning of the poem with limited reference to poetic language. Begins to develop a personal response.
- **Band 1-3 (1-10 marks):** Simple or narrative responses with limited/scant reference to the poem's deeper literary qualities or language choices.
- **Band 8 (23-25 marks):** Demonstrates deep, sensitive, and critical understanding of the poem. Explores the poetic devices (alliteration, imagery, structure) with flair and individuality. Supports arguments with exceptionally well-selected textual evidence.
- **Band 7 (20-22 marks):** Shows clear critical understanding of the poem and its deeper implications. Responds sensitively and in detail to how Wright uses language to convey fear and fascination.
- **Band 6 (17-19 marks):** Developed response showing clear understanding of the text. Identifies key imagery and explains its effect on the reader, with a well-developed personal response.
- **Band 5 (14-16 marks):** Shows a reasonable understanding of the poem. Identifies key moments of fear and fascination and makes some attempt to analyse the language/devices used.
- **Band 4 (11-13 marks):** Offers some understanding of the literal meaning of the poem with limited reference to poetic language. Begins to develop a personal response.
- **Band 1-3 (1-10 marks):** Simple or narrative responses with limited/scant reference to the poem's deeper literary qualities or language choices.