Question 1 · essay
25 marksIn what ways does Elizabeth Daryush powerfully convey her critical view of the lives of the rich in ‘Children of Wealth’?
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Worked solution
To achieve high marks, candidates should address the following points:
1. The central metaphor: The 'comfort' of the 'softly-curtained' room and 'warm grate' as symbols of extreme privilege and willful insulation from the wider world's pain.
2. The contrast: The contrast between the child's small, artificial 'griefs' and the real, destructive 'tempest' raging outside.
3. The imagery of the glass: The 'thick glass' represents the barrier that prevents the wealthy from truly understanding or experiencing the hardships of the poor.
4. Tone and structure: The shifting tone from descriptive luxury to a chilling, warning tone in the final lines, suggesting that this protected state is fragile and ultimately vulnerable to the 'unseen wind' of reality or social change.
1. The central metaphor: The 'comfort' of the 'softly-curtained' room and 'warm grate' as symbols of extreme privilege and willful insulation from the wider world's pain.
2. The contrast: The contrast between the child's small, artificial 'griefs' and the real, destructive 'tempest' raging outside.
3. The imagery of the glass: The 'thick glass' represents the barrier that prevents the wealthy from truly understanding or experiencing the hardships of the poor.
4. Tone and structure: The shifting tone from descriptive luxury to a chilling, warning tone in the final lines, suggesting that this protected state is fragile and ultimately vulnerable to the 'unseen wind' of reality or social change.
Marking scheme
Answers are graded out of 25 based on the Cambridge IGCSE Literature in English criteria:
- Band 8 (20-25 marks): Shows a highly perceptive, deeply analytical, and convincing personal response. Excellent, integrated close-reference to the text and sensitive appreciation of Daryush's poetic craft (imagery, metaphor, and tone).
- Band 7 (17-19 marks): Offers a thorough and thoughtful response, showing a clear, sustained understanding of the poem with sound textual support and analysis of poetic devices.
- Band 6 (14-16 marks): Shows a clear understanding of the poem's themes and some critical engagement with the language used.
- Band 5 (11-13 marks): Demonstrates a satisfactory, straight-forward knowledge of the poem but may rely on paraphrase or broader explanation rather than close analysis.
- Bands 1-4 (0-10 marks): Shows limited to basic understanding, lacking specific textual evidence or focused analysis of the writer's craft.
- Band 8 (20-25 marks): Shows a highly perceptive, deeply analytical, and convincing personal response. Excellent, integrated close-reference to the text and sensitive appreciation of Daryush's poetic craft (imagery, metaphor, and tone).
- Band 7 (17-19 marks): Offers a thorough and thoughtful response, showing a clear, sustained understanding of the poem with sound textual support and analysis of poetic devices.
- Band 6 (14-16 marks): Shows a clear understanding of the poem's themes and some critical engagement with the language used.
- Band 5 (11-13 marks): Demonstrates a satisfactory, straight-forward knowledge of the poem but may rely on paraphrase or broader explanation rather than close analysis.
- Bands 1-4 (0-10 marks): Shows limited to basic understanding, lacking specific textual evidence or focused analysis of the writer's craft.