題目 1 · essay
25 分Explore the ways in which Wright vividly conveys the dramatic impact of the encounter with the snake in Hunting Snake.
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To structure a high-level response, candidates should discuss several key aspects of Wright's poetic craftsmanship:
1. The Sudden Shift in Pacing and Setting:
- The poem begins with a calm, gentle description of a walk through 'sunwarm' and 'late-autumn' surroundings.
- This tranquil atmosphere is instantly shattered in the second line by the sudden, physical response of the walkers: 'We froze, half-through a pace.' The caesura and monosyllabic words emphasize the sudden arrest of human movement.
2. The Description of the Snake's Power and Beauty:
- Wright emphasizes the snake's physical presence and color contrast: 'Great black snake'.
- The motion is depicted through smooth, active verbs such as 'glid', 'curved', and 'reeling'. These words create a sense of effortless, flowing vitality.
- Images of royalty and danger are combined: the 'diamond-scale' and 'splendid curves' suggest awe and beauty, while the 'questing tongue' and 'cold' nature highlight the inherent danger.
3. The Observers' Internal and External Reactions:
- The humans are completely paralyzed and silenced by the encounter: 'We scarcely breathed', 'our eyes went with him as he went'. Their usual dominance over nature is temporarily suspended.
- The intense shock is registered physically: 'our breath-warm/white on the air'. This contrasted with the snake's 'cold' skin, underscoring the divide between humanity and wild nature.
4. The Aftermath of the Encounter:
- After the snake departs into the 'grass that hid his prey', the speakers do not celebrate or scream; instead, they take 'a deeper breath of day' and look at each other before walking on. This indicates a profound, quiet shift in their awareness, recognizing the sublime power of the natural world.
1. The Sudden Shift in Pacing and Setting:
- The poem begins with a calm, gentle description of a walk through 'sunwarm' and 'late-autumn' surroundings.
- This tranquil atmosphere is instantly shattered in the second line by the sudden, physical response of the walkers: 'We froze, half-through a pace.' The caesura and monosyllabic words emphasize the sudden arrest of human movement.
2. The Description of the Snake's Power and Beauty:
- Wright emphasizes the snake's physical presence and color contrast: 'Great black snake'.
- The motion is depicted through smooth, active verbs such as 'glid', 'curved', and 'reeling'. These words create a sense of effortless, flowing vitality.
- Images of royalty and danger are combined: the 'diamond-scale' and 'splendid curves' suggest awe and beauty, while the 'questing tongue' and 'cold' nature highlight the inherent danger.
3. The Observers' Internal and External Reactions:
- The humans are completely paralyzed and silenced by the encounter: 'We scarcely breathed', 'our eyes went with him as he went'. Their usual dominance over nature is temporarily suspended.
- The intense shock is registered physically: 'our breath-warm/white on the air'. This contrasted with the snake's 'cold' skin, underscoring the divide between humanity and wild nature.
4. The Aftermath of the Encounter:
- After the snake departs into the 'grass that hid his prey', the speakers do not celebrate or scream; instead, they take 'a deeper breath of day' and look at each other before walking on. This indicates a profound, quiet shift in their awareness, recognizing the sublime power of the natural world.
評分準則
Band descriptors apply (Marks out of 25).
Indicative Content:
- AO1 (Knowledge): Focus on the core narrative - a sudden encounter with a black snake during a walk in late autumn, and the frozen, mesmerized reaction of the walkers.
- AO2 (Deeper Meaning): Analysis of the theme of humanity's insignificance and vulnerability when faced with the fierce, independent beauty of nature. The mixture of fear and absolute fascination (the sublime).
- AO3 (Language, Structure, and Form):
- The contrast between human stillness ('froze', 'scarcely breathed') and the snake's flowing movement ('glid', 'reeling', 'flickered').
- The use of heavy alliteration and harsh consonants to punctuate the tension.
- The sensory descriptions of coldness vs. warmth (the human breath vs. the cold, dark body of the snake).
- The structure of the regular quatrains, reflecting a controlled tense heartbeat.
- AO4 (Personal Response): A sustained, cohesive argument reflecting on how the poem successfully evokes a mixture of terror and awe in the reader.
Indicative Content:
- AO1 (Knowledge): Focus on the core narrative - a sudden encounter with a black snake during a walk in late autumn, and the frozen, mesmerized reaction of the walkers.
- AO2 (Deeper Meaning): Analysis of the theme of humanity's insignificance and vulnerability when faced with the fierce, independent beauty of nature. The mixture of fear and absolute fascination (the sublime).
- AO3 (Language, Structure, and Form):
- The contrast between human stillness ('froze', 'scarcely breathed') and the snake's flowing movement ('glid', 'reeling', 'flickered').
- The use of heavy alliteration and harsh consonants to punctuate the tension.
- The sensory descriptions of coldness vs. warmth (the human breath vs. the cold, dark body of the snake).
- The structure of the regular quatrains, reflecting a controlled tense heartbeat.
- AO4 (Personal Response): A sustained, cohesive argument reflecting on how the poem successfully evokes a mixture of terror and awe in the reader.