題目 1 · Extract-Based Essay
25 分Read the poem 'Follower' by Seamus Heaney below:
My father worked with a horse-plough,
His shoulders globed like a full sail strung
Between the shafts and the furrow.
The horses strained at his clicking tongue.
An expert. He would set the wing
And fit the bright steel-pointed sock.
The sod rolled over without breaking.
At the headrig, with a single pluck
Of reins, the sweating team turned round
And back into the land. His eye
Narrowed and angled at the ground,
Mapping the furrow exactly.
I stumbled in his hob-nailed wake,
Fell sometimes on the polished sod;
Sometimes he rode me on his back
Dipping and rising to his plod.
I wanted to grow up and plough,
To close one eye, stiffen my arm.
All I ever did was follow
In his broad shadow round the farm.
I was a nuisance, tripping, falling,
Yapping always. But today
It is my father who keeps stumbling
Behind me, and will not go away.
How does Heaney powerfully convey his changing feelings towards his father in this poem?
Support your ideas with specific details and quotations from the poem.
My father worked with a horse-plough,
His shoulders globed like a full sail strung
Between the shafts and the furrow.
The horses strained at his clicking tongue.
An expert. He would set the wing
And fit the bright steel-pointed sock.
The sod rolled over without breaking.
At the headrig, with a single pluck
Of reins, the sweating team turned round
And back into the land. His eye
Narrowed and angled at the ground,
Mapping the furrow exactly.
I stumbled in his hob-nailed wake,
Fell sometimes on the polished sod;
Sometimes he rode me on his back
Dipping and rising to his plod.
I wanted to grow up and plough,
To close one eye, stiffen my arm.
All I ever did was follow
In his broad shadow round the farm.
I was a nuisance, tripping, falling,
Yapping always. But today
It is my father who keeps stumbling
Behind me, and will not go away.
How does Heaney powerfully convey his changing feelings towards his father in this poem?
Support your ideas with specific details and quotations from the poem.
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解題
To achieve a high mark in this extract-based essay, candidates should address the following key aspects of Seamus Heaney's 'Follower':
1. **Awe and Admiration (Stanzas 1–3):**
- Heaney establishes his father as a figure of monumental strength and skill. The simile 'His shoulders globed like a full sail strung' evokes nautical power and grandeur, casting the father as a force of nature.
- The short, declarative sentence 'An expert.' acts as an absolute endorsement of the father's mastery. Heaney uses precise agrarian terminology ('wing', 'steel-pointed sock', 'headrig', 'furrow') to demonstrate the meticulous care and professionalism of his father's craft.
- The ease of the father's control is captured through effortless imagery ('with a single pluck / Of reins') and the sensory detail of the horses responding instantly to his 'clicking tongue'.
2. **Childhood Inadequacy and Clumsiness (Stanzas 4–5):**
- A sharp contrast is drawn between the father's physical precision and the young speaker's clumsy attempts to follow. Verbs like 'stumbled', 'fell', and 'tripping' characterize the boy's childhood experience.
- Despite the speaker's self-deprecating description of himself as 'a nuisance, tripping, falling, / Yapping always', a deep warmth is conveyed in the tactile memory of the father riding the boy on his back, 'Dipping and rising to his plod'. This highlights a nurturing relationship beneath the stern agrarian labor.
- The line 'All I ever did was follow / In his broad shadow' highlights the psychological weight of the father's legacy, representing both safety and an inescapable limitation of the speaker's own identity.
3. **The Final Twist and Role-Reversal (Stanza 6):**
- The temporal shift introduced by 'But today' completely upends the power dynamic. The father is now the one 'stumbling' in the son's wake, mirroring the son's childhood clumsiness.
- The final phrase 'and will not go away' is rich with ambiguity. It can be interpreted as a poignant reflection on the physical decline and dependency of aging parents, or as a metaphor for the haunting influence of paternal memory and heritage that continues to shadow the poet's mature life as a writer rather than a farmer.
1. **Awe and Admiration (Stanzas 1–3):**
- Heaney establishes his father as a figure of monumental strength and skill. The simile 'His shoulders globed like a full sail strung' evokes nautical power and grandeur, casting the father as a force of nature.
- The short, declarative sentence 'An expert.' acts as an absolute endorsement of the father's mastery. Heaney uses precise agrarian terminology ('wing', 'steel-pointed sock', 'headrig', 'furrow') to demonstrate the meticulous care and professionalism of his father's craft.
- The ease of the father's control is captured through effortless imagery ('with a single pluck / Of reins') and the sensory detail of the horses responding instantly to his 'clicking tongue'.
2. **Childhood Inadequacy and Clumsiness (Stanzas 4–5):**
- A sharp contrast is drawn between the father's physical precision and the young speaker's clumsy attempts to follow. Verbs like 'stumbled', 'fell', and 'tripping' characterize the boy's childhood experience.
- Despite the speaker's self-deprecating description of himself as 'a nuisance, tripping, falling, / Yapping always', a deep warmth is conveyed in the tactile memory of the father riding the boy on his back, 'Dipping and rising to his plod'. This highlights a nurturing relationship beneath the stern agrarian labor.
- The line 'All I ever did was follow / In his broad shadow' highlights the psychological weight of the father's legacy, representing both safety and an inescapable limitation of the speaker's own identity.
3. **The Final Twist and Role-Reversal (Stanza 6):**
- The temporal shift introduced by 'But today' completely upends the power dynamic. The father is now the one 'stumbling' in the son's wake, mirroring the son's childhood clumsiness.
- The final phrase 'and will not go away' is rich with ambiguity. It can be interpreted as a poignant reflection on the physical decline and dependency of aging parents, or as a metaphor for the haunting influence of paternal memory and heritage that continues to shadow the poet's mature life as a writer rather than a farmer.
評分準則
Assessment is based on the following holistic grading levels (25 marks total):
- **Level 5 (21–25 marks):**
- Shows a highly sensitive, perceptive, and analytical response to Heaney's poetry.
- Offers sophisticated analysis of language and imagery (e.g., the nautical simile, technical vocabulary, and structural shifts).
- Effectively integrates well-chosen quotations to support an elegant, cohesive argument addressing the changing relationship.
- **Level 4 (16–20 marks):**
- Demonstrates a clear understanding of the poem's themes and shifts in perspective.
- Analyzes several literary features (such as contrast, sound patterns, and structural division between past and present) with sound understanding.
- Uses relevant textual evidence to support key arguments.
- **Level 3 (11–15 marks):**
- Offers a competent, straightforward explanation of the father-son dynamic.
- Shows awareness of the shift from admiration to role-reversal but may focus more on plot/narrative paraphrase than literary analysis.
- Provides some supporting evidence from the text.
- **Level 2 (6–10 marks):**
- Shows limited or superficial understanding of the poem.
- May rely heavily on narrative summary of the stanzas with little to no focus on the poet's techniques or changing feelings.
- Offers minimal or poorly chosen quotations.
- **Level 1 (1–5 marks):**
- Shows very little understanding of the poem or the question.
- Extremely brief or irrelevant response.
- **Level 5 (21–25 marks):**
- Shows a highly sensitive, perceptive, and analytical response to Heaney's poetry.
- Offers sophisticated analysis of language and imagery (e.g., the nautical simile, technical vocabulary, and structural shifts).
- Effectively integrates well-chosen quotations to support an elegant, cohesive argument addressing the changing relationship.
- **Level 4 (16–20 marks):**
- Demonstrates a clear understanding of the poem's themes and shifts in perspective.
- Analyzes several literary features (such as contrast, sound patterns, and structural division between past and present) with sound understanding.
- Uses relevant textual evidence to support key arguments.
- **Level 3 (11–15 marks):**
- Offers a competent, straightforward explanation of the father-son dynamic.
- Shows awareness of the shift from admiration to role-reversal but may focus more on plot/narrative paraphrase than literary analysis.
- Provides some supporting evidence from the text.
- **Level 2 (6–10 marks):**
- Shows limited or superficial understanding of the poem.
- May rely heavily on narrative summary of the stanzas with little to no focus on the poet's techniques or changing feelings.
- Offers minimal or poorly chosen quotations.
- **Level 1 (1–5 marks):**
- Shows very little understanding of the poem or the question.
- Extremely brief or irrelevant response.