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Unit 1 甲部: Writing for Purpose and Audience

Spend 55 minutes writing an extended transactional text (speech, article, or essay) matching form, purpose, and audience with accurate syntax, spelling, and punctuation.
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题目 1 · Transactional Writing (Content & Organisation: 57 marks; Technical Accuracy: 30 marks)
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Your school's Sixth Form Council is debating the following statement, which will be put to a vote at the next Student Council meeting:

'School uniform should be abolished for all Sixth Form students.'

Write a speech to be delivered at a Sixth Form assembly, giving your own point of view on this statement. You should try to persuade your audience to agree with you.

(Content, Organisation and Purpose/Audience: 57 marks. Technical Accuracy — sentence structure, punctuation, grammar and spelling: 30 marks, assessed on this same speech.)

15 minutes thinking and planning. 30 minutes writing. 10 minutes checking.
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Good morning. I want to start with a question. How many of you got dressed this morning and, at some point, felt a flicker of dread about a shirt that doesn't quite fit, or a jumper that makes you feel about twelve years old? Now — how many of you are in Year 8?

Exactly. None of you. And yet every one of us in this hall is still required to wear the same uniform as someone half our age, with none of our responsibilities and none of our freedoms. I think it's time that changed.

Let me be clear about what I'm not proposing. I am not suggesting Sixth Formers turn up in pyjamas, or that 'business casual' becomes a euphemism for whatever was on the bedroom floor that morning. What I am proposing is a smart dress code — the kind every one of us will be expected to manage the moment we start a job, an internship, or a university placement — instead of a uniform designed, quite reasonably, for children twelve years younger than us.

Think about what the Sixth Form is meant to be preparing us for. We are given free periods and trusted to plan our own study time. We are trusted to represent this school on work placements, at open evenings, in university interviews. And yet, apparently, we cannot be trusted to choose a shirt. That is not consistency. That is a school that has updated our timetables for adulthood but forgotten to update our wardrobes.

Some of you are already thinking about the counter-argument, and it's a fair one: won't a dress code just become a new source of stress and competition, a chance for uniform snobbery to turn into fashion snobbery? I understand the worry. But look at the schools that have already made this change. A simple, published dress code — smart, plain, appropriate for a professional environment — does exactly the opposite. It removes the daily uniform inspection at the school gate and replaces it with one clear standard that any of us can meet without needing an expensive blazer replaced every September because we've grown two inches again.

There is also, I'll admit, a financial argument, and it matters more than we sometimes say out loud in a room like this. A single specialist Sixth Form blazer can cost more than an entire smart-casual wardrobe assembled from things a family already owns. For some of us, that difference is significant. Abolishing the uniform requirement doesn't create a financial burden — it removes one.

So here is what I am asking you to vote for: not chaos, not pyjamas, not a return to Year 8 arguments about skirt length — but a dress code that treats us the way the rest of this Sixth Form experience already claims to treat us. As nearly-adults. Trusted to make one small, sensible decision each morning, so that we can get on with proving ourselves ready for every larger decision waiting for us after this hall empties for the last time. Thank you.

评分标准

Two strands assessed on the same speech. STRAND 1 — Content, Organisation and Purpose/Audience (57 marks), marked using Competence Levels (CL1–CL5): CL1 (1–11): a basic, undeveloped viewpoint with little persuasive technique; register not adapted to a spoken/audience context. CL2 (12–22): a viewpoint given with some supporting reasons in a recognisable speech form; limited organisation or persuasive technique; direct address used inconsistently. CL3 (23–34): a clear, sustained viewpoint supported by relevant, developed reasons; appropriately organised into a spoken structure (greeting, argument, conclusion); some effective persuasive techniques (e.g. rhetorical question, direct address, rule of three) with a register broadly suited to a school-assembly audience. CL4 (35–46): a well-developed, convincing argument that engages with at least one opposing view before countering it; assured structure with clear signposting between points; a good range of persuasive techniques used purposefully; register confidently adapted to a mixed student/staff audience. CL5 (47–57): a sophisticated, tightly organised speech (e.g. rhetorical question opening, concession-then-rebuttal structure, callback to the opening in the conclusion) that anticipates and directly answers listener concerns; a wide range of persuasive techniques integrated fluently; assured, consistent control of a spoken register; a genuinely memorable closing appeal. Max 57. STRAND 2 — Technical Accuracy (30 marks), marked using Competence Levels (CL1–CL5) across sentence structure and punctuation/grammar and spelling: CL1 (1–6): frequent basic errors that impede meaning; little sentence variety. CL2 (7–12): mostly simple/compound sentences; punctuation limited to full stops and commas; regular spelling errors, including common words. CL3 (13–18): a mix of simple, compound and some complex sentences; generally accurate punctuation (commas, question marks, apostrophes) with occasional lapses; spelling generally accurate. CL4 (19–24): a wide, deliberate range of sentence structures (e.g. short sentences for emphasis, such as 'Exactly. None of you.'; a semicolon joining related clauses) used for effect; consistently accurate punctuation and grammar; spelling accurate, including ambitious vocabulary. CL5 (25–30): sophisticated, purposeful control of a wide range of sentence forms integrated fluently into the spoken register; punctuation and grammar accurate throughout with no lapses; spelling accurate throughout, including subject-specific and ambitious vocabulary. Max 30. Combined maximum: 87.

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Unit 1 乙部: Reading Non-fiction and Media Texts

Spend 50 minutes completing four reading tasks based on one non-fiction text and one media text.
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题目 1 · Non-fiction Language Analysis (Competence Level Matrix)
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Task 1: Spend 15 minutes on this task. Total 21 marks.

Read the text below, in which the writer explores the growing popularity of allotment gardening among young people.

The Return of the Allotment

[Paragraph 1] Somewhere between the reality television gardening makeover and the polytunnel at the bottom of your grandmother's garden lies the allotment, and for years it seemed destined to be forgotten. Waiting lists that once stretched for a decade shrank to almost nothing by the early 2000s, and local councils quietly sold off unused plots for housing. Then, improbably, the allotment came back. Councils across the country now report waiting lists three, four, even ten times longer than they were fifteen years ago, and the average age of the new applicant has fallen by almost twenty years.

[Paragraph 2] Ask any of the twenty-somethings now queuing for a half-plot why they want one, and the answers rarely mention nostalgia. They talk instead about the cost of vegetables in the supermarket, about wanting to know exactly what has (and has not) been sprayed on their food, and about craving a few hours each week that involve soil rather than a screen. 'I spend my entire working day answering emails,' says one plot-holder, twenty-six, who has grown courgettes and dahlias in Manchester for the past year. 'Digging a trench doesn't ping. Nothing about it needs a reply by five o'clock.'

[Paragraph 3] The trend is not without its critics. Some longstanding allotment-holders worry that newcomers arrive with enthusiasm but without the patience that vegetable growing demands, and abandon their plots to weeds within eighteen months. Others point out that renting a plot, buying tools and building raised beds is not, in the short term, actually a cheap way to eat courgettes. But councils are responding to demand rather than debating its wisdom: three London boroughs have created new allotment sites for the first time in over forty years, and a national charity is now piloting a mentorship scheme that pairs first-year growers with allotment-holders who have decades of soil under their fingernails.

Source: Adapted from a feature in a national newspaper's Saturday magazine.

Explain how the writer has used language to interest and engage the reader. Support your comments with close reference to the text.
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The writer engages the reader from the opening sentence with a witty, image-rich contrast, placing the allotment 'between the reality television gardening makeover and the polytunnel at the bottom of your grandmother's garden' — a construction that signals a light, knowing tone while immediately establishing the allotment's slightly unfashionable reputation, which the rest of the text will overturn. The short, blunt sentence 'Then, improbably, the allotment came back' creates a deliberate structural turn, using the adverb 'improbably' to prime the reader for a surprising reversal of expectations. The writer supports this with precise, escalating statistical detail — waiting lists now 'three, four, even ten times longer' than fifteen years ago — which builds credibility and a sense of scale without becoming a dry list of figures, because it follows directly from the personal, informal opening. In paragraph two, the writer shifts from general claim to individual testimony, using direct quotation to humanise the trend: the plot-holder's remark that 'Digging a trench doesn't ping. Nothing about it needs a reply by five o'clock' uses the deliberately modern verb 'ping' and short, declarative sentences to create a vivid, relatable voice that readers of a similar age are likely to recognise in themselves. Finally, the writer sustains interest by resisting a simple, one-sided conclusion: paragraph three introduces critical voices ('newcomers arrive with enthusiasm but without the patience') and a note of realism about cost, before closing on concrete, verifiable evidence of continued demand (new allotment sites, a mentorship scheme), which gives the piece a sense of balanced, credible journalism rather than a straightforward celebration of the trend.

评分标准

Marked using a Competence Level Matrix (CL1–CL5) assessing identification of language/structural features AND explanation of their effect on the reader, supported by textual evidence. CL1 (1–4): simple identification of isolated words/phrases with little or no explanation of effect. CL2 (5–8): some relevant features identified (e.g. the quotation, a statistic) with basic, general comment on effect ('it makes it interesting'). CL3 (9–13): a range of relevant features identified (opening image, structural turn, quotation, balanced close) with clear, textually supported explanation of how each interests or engages the reader. CL4 (14–17): a wide range of features analysed with precise, well-selected evidence and clear understanding of writer's craft (e.g. commenting on the effect of 'improbably', or the shift from statistic to individual voice). CL5 (18–21): a sophisticated, closely evidenced analysis exploring subtlety of language choice and structure (e.g. how the balanced close builds credibility, or how 'ping' signals a generational voice), sustained across the whole text with assured critical vocabulary. Max 21 marks; credit any valid feature with textual support, not only those listed here.
题目 2 · Structured Comprehension & Retrieval (Own Words + Textual Evidence)
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Task 2: Spend 10 minutes on this task. Total 12 marks.

Re-read the text above about allotment gardening.

In your own words, write down: (i) one reason, from paragraph 2, why young people are taking up allotment gardening; and (ii) one reason, from paragraph 3, why councils are responding positively to the trend. For each reason, present two pieces of supporting evidence from the text.

(a) First reason — why young people are taking up allotment gardening (in your own words): [2]
(b) Two pieces of supporting evidence for the first reason: [4]
(c) Second reason — why councils are responding positively (in your own words): [2]
(d) Two pieces of supporting evidence for the second reason: [4]
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(a) One reason from paragraph 2: young people take up allotment gardening because they want to know what chemicals have been used on their food and to spend less on vegetables than they would in a supermarket. (b) Supporting evidence, in the writer's own words rephrased from direct quotation: the text states this relates to 'the cost of vegetables in the supermarket' and 'wanting to know exactly what has (and has not) been sprayed on their food' — accept close paraphrase of either point as one mark each, up to two marks. (c) A second reason, drawn from paragraph 3: local councils are actively encouraging the trend rather than resisting it, by creating space and support for new growers. (d) Supporting evidence: the text notes that 'three London boroughs have created new allotment sites for the first time in over forty years' and that a national charity is 'piloting a mentorship scheme that pairs first-year growers with allotment-holders who have decades of soil under their fingernails' — accept close paraphrase of either point as one mark each, up to two marks.
Final answer: reasons accepted are (a) cost/control over food chemicals, each with two pieces of evidence, and (c) active council/charity support for new growers, each with two pieces of evidence, totalling 12 marks.

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(a) 1 mark for identifying either 'cost of vegetables' or 'wanting to know what has been sprayed on food' in own words; 1 further mark if both ideas are captured or the single idea is well developed = up to 2. Reject lifted quotation without any rephrasing for full marks. (b) 1 mark per valid piece of supporting evidence linked to the reason given in (a), up to 4 marks (2 pieces × 2 marks, or up to 4 separate valid points at 1 mark each — apply best-fit). Unacceptable evidence: generic statements not tied to cost/food-safety (e.g. 'people like gardening'). (c) 1 mark for identifying council/charity support for new growers in own words; 1 further mark for a well-developed or double-stranded point = up to 2. (d) 1 mark per valid piece of evidence (new allotment sites; mentorship scheme), up to 4 marks. Unacceptable evidence: vague reference to 'councils helping' without a specific detail from the text. Max 12 marks total; credit any reasonable own-words paraphrase that preserves the meaning of the source text.
题目 3 · Media Text Language Analysis (Competence Level Matrix)
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Task 3: Spend 15 minutes on this task. Total 20 marks.

Read the media text below, a promotional webpage for a meal-kit subscription service aimed at university students living away from home for the first time.

[MASTHEAD, large bold display font across the top of the page]: PocketChef
[Sub-heading directly beneath, italic]: Proper dinners, no supermarket queue, no washing-up mountain

[HEADLINE, huge bold sans-serif]: Cook Like You Actually Know What You're Doing

[Body copy, first paragraph]: You don't need a food processor, a spice rack, or three years of a professional apprenticeship. You need forty minutes, one pan, and a box that arrives at your door with everything already measured out.

[Shaded pull-quote box, large italic text, set apart from body copy]: 'I burned water in first year. Now my flatmates think I'm the one who "just gets" cooking. I promise you I don't.' — Conor, second-year student, Belfast

[Sub-heading, bold, all capitals]: WHAT'S INCLUDED
[Bulleted list, each bullet marked with a tick icon]:
• Pre-measured ingredients for every recipe — nothing wasted, nothing left rotting in the fridge
• A recipe card with photographs for every single step
• A new menu every week, chosen by you from six options
• Student discount: 40% off your first four boxes

[Call-to-action button, large, centred, brightly coloured]: GET MY FIRST BOX — FREE DELIVERY

[Footer, small print]: Cancel any time. No commitment, no contract, no awkward phone call required.

Explain how the writer has used language to appeal to the intended audience. Support your comments with evidence from the text.
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The writer appeals directly to the intended audience — students cooking independently for the first time — through sustained second-person address that feels personal and reassuring rather than instructional: 'You don't need a food processor, a spice rack, or three years of a professional apprenticeship' uses a rule-of-three list of intimidating things to dismiss them, before the balancing sentence 'You need forty minutes, one pan, and a box' replaces anxiety with something achievable, mirroring the rejected list's structure for persuasive contrast. The pull-quote testimonial from 'Conor, second-year student, Belfast' is deliberately self-deprecating and humorous ('I burned water in first year'), which builds trust through relatable admission of incompetence rather than an implausible claim of expertise, and its informal, spoken register ('I promise you I don't') mimics exactly how a student's friend might reassure them, closing the social distance between advertiser and reader. The headline itself, 'Cook Like You Actually Know What You're Doing', uses the informal intensifier 'actually' and second-person imperative to sound like encouragement from a peer rather than a corporate slogan. Finally, the writer's word choices in the bulleted list and footer are calculated to remove specific, realistic student anxieties: 'nothing wasted, nothing left rotting in the fridge' addresses food-waste guilt and cost, and the footer's blunt, informal triple negative — 'No commitment, no contract, no awkward phone call required' — directly names and dismisses the exact fear (an awkward cancellation call) that a financially cautious student reader is likely to have, showing precise audience awareness throughout.

评分标准

Marked using a Competence Level Matrix (CL1–CL5) assessing identification of language features AND explanation of their effect on the specific target audience, supported by evidence. CL1 (1–4): isolated feature identification with little/no link to audience. CL2 (5–8): some relevant features identified (e.g. the testimonial, the discount) with general comment on appeal. CL3 (9–12): a range of features identified (second-person address, informal register, testimonial, rule of three) with clear explanation of appeal to a student audience specifically. CL4 (13–16): wide-ranging, precise analysis with well-selected evidence, showing clear understanding of how language targets student concerns (cost, competence, commitment). CL5 (17–20): sophisticated, closely evidenced analysis of subtle language choices (e.g. the mirrored rule-of-three structure, the footer's triple negative directly answering an unstated objection) sustained across the whole text with assured critical vocabulary. Max 20 marks; credit any valid feature with textual support.
题目 4 · Media Presentational Features & Intended Effects Analysis
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Task 4: Spend 10 minutes on this task. Total 10 marks.

Re-read the webpage above.

Select two examples of presentational features used in this webpage to make it appealing to the audience. Explain the intended effect of each of the two presentational features you have chosen.

(a) First presentational feature: [1]
(b) Intended effect of the first presentational feature: [4]
(c) Second presentational feature: [1]
(d) Intended effect of the second presentational feature: [4]
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(a) The shaded pull-quote box (Conor's testimonial), set apart from the surrounding body copy in large italic text. (b) The intended effect is to draw the reader's eye immediately to authentic, persuasive social proof, separated visually from the main sales copy so that it reads as a genuine aside from a real student rather than advertising language; the shading and italics signal 'this is a real voice speaking directly to you', which builds trust and makes the product's claims feel credible rather than simply asserted by the company itself. (c) The bulleted list under the bold, capitalised subheading 'WHAT'S INCLUDED', with each point marked by a tick icon. (d) Tick icons are conventionally associated with completed checklists, correctness and approval, so their intended effect is to let a reader scan the page quickly — as many web users do — and register each bullet point as a confirmed benefit rather than a claim to be evaluated; this presentational choice reduces the cognitive effort needed to absorb the offer and reinforces a sense that the company has already thought of, and solved, the reader's likely objections (waste, unclear instructions, lack of choice, cost).
Final answer: pull-quote box (builds trust via authentic social proof) and bulleted tick-list (enables fast scanning and signals resolved objections).

评分标准

(a) 1 mark for correctly naming a genuine presentational feature (e.g. pull-quote box, masthead, headline font, CTA button, bulleted/ticked list, footer small print). (b) Up to 4 marks for explanation of intended effect: 1 mark for a basic, general effect ('it stands out'); up to 4 marks for a developed, audience-specific explanation linking the feature's visual properties to its persuasive purpose (e.g. building trust, signalling ease/completion). (c) 1 mark for a second, different, correctly named feature. (d) Up to 4 marks awarded on the same basis as (b) for the second feature. Unacceptable answers: features not present in the text; explanations that merely restate the feature ('it is a list, so it lists things') without addressing intended effect on the reader. Max 10 marks.

Unit 4 甲部: Personal or Creative Writing

Spend 55 minutes answering either Option (a) Personal writing essay or Option (b) Creative writing narrative based on a visual prompt.
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题目 1 · Personal / Creative Writing (Content & Organisation: 58 marks; Technical Accuracy: 30 marks)
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(a) Personal writing: Write a personal essay for the examiner about a time when you had to make a difficult decision.
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(b) Creative writing: Write a story for entry in a national short-story competition for young writers. The audience is readers of your own age. The scene described below is to be the basis for your creative writing. You may provide your own title.

Scene: A lighthouse stands alone on a headland at dusk, its light sweeping over a sea that has just begun to turn rough. Someone is walking towards it along the shore, carrying something they do not want anyone else to see.

(Content, Organisation and Purpose/Audience: 58 marks. Technical Accuracy — sentence structure, punctuation, grammar and spelling: 30 marks, assessed on this same piece of writing.)

15 minutes thinking and planning. 30 minutes writing. 10 minutes checking.
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What the Tide Brings In

The light swept over her every eleven seconds. Rhoda had counted, the way you count a heartbeat when you are trying not to think about anything else, and eleven seconds was exactly long enough to take four more steps before the beam found her again and threw her shadow, huge and black, across the wet sand.

She had wrapped the box in her father's old oilskin, the one that still smelled of diesel and cigarettes even four years after he'd stopped smoking on the doctor's orders, and she held it against her chest the way you hold something that might, at any moment, decide it wants to be dropped. The sea had turned in the last twenty minutes — she could hear it before she could properly see it, a low, dragging growl under the wind — and she understood, in the practical part of her mind that was still somehow functioning, that she had perhaps forty minutes before the causeway to the headland disappeared entirely.

She had told her mother she was going for a walk. Her mother, three days into the kind of grief that makes even ordinary sentences require effort, had simply nodded and gone back to folding, and refolding, a jumper that did not need folding at all.

The lighthouse door was where it had always been, though the paint had gone the colour of a bruise healing wrong, greenish and pale. She did not have a key — she had never needed one, not for this — but she knew, the way you know the particular give of a floorboard in a house you grew up in, exactly where the loose stone was, third up from the base, and exactly how her father's fingers had always found it without looking.

Inside, the stairwell smelled of salt and rust and something else, something that might have been memory or might simply have been the sea working its way, slowly, into everything. She climbed with the box held against her, past the second landing where a gull's nest, long abandoned, still sat wedged in the broken window frame, until she reached the lamp room, empty of its lamp for thirty years, and open on every side to a sky the exact colour of the oilskin in her arms.

She knelt, and unwrapped it, and for a long moment simply looked at what her father had asked her to do with what remained of him, and understood, finally, why he had never once explained the choice of place, only made her promise it.

The light swept past her again, eleven seconds exactly, and out past the glass the sea kept climbing, patient, the way it had climbed for longer than either of them had existed, and would keep climbing for longer than she would either — which was, she thought, opening her hands at last, rather the point of the whole thing.

评分标准

Two strands assessed on the same piece of writing (either option). STRAND 1 — Content, Organisation and Purpose/Audience (58 marks), marked using Competence Levels (CL1–CL5): CL1 (1–11): a basic, undeveloped response with little sense of narrative/reflective shape; limited awareness of audience/purpose. CL2 (12–23): a recognisable story or personal account with some relevant detail, but limited development, description or structural control. CL3 (24–35): a clear, coherently organised narrative or essay with relevant, developed detail and a discernible structure (build-up, turning point, resolution/reflection); some effective descriptive or reflective technique; register suited to the stated audience. CL4 (36–47): a well-developed, engaging response using sensory detail, controlled pacing and a purposeful structure (e.g. the countdown motif of the eleven-second light sweep); assured handling of tension or reflection; register and technique clearly suited to a young-adult competition audience or an examiner reader as appropriate. CL5 (48–58): a sophisticated, tightly controlled response demonstrating skilful withholding and release of information (or, for personal writing, genuinely mature reflection), original and precisely chosen imagery/detail (e.g. the recurring oilskin, the lighthouse as a site of inherited ritual), and a resonant ending that reframes the opening rather than merely closing the plot. Max 58. STRAND 2 — Technical Accuracy (30 marks), marked using Competence Levels (CL1–CL5): CL1 (1–6): frequent basic errors that impede meaning; little sentence variety. CL2 (7–12): mostly simple/compound sentences; limited, inconsistent punctuation; regular spelling errors. CL3 (13–18): a mix of sentence types with generally accurate punctuation and grammar; spelling generally accurate. CL4 (19–24): a wide, deliberate range of sentence structures (e.g. the long, cumulative sentence describing the climb up the stairwell; short sentences for emphasis such as 'She knelt.') used for effect; consistently accurate punctuation, including correct use of dashes and semicolons; spelling accurate, including ambitious vocabulary. CL5 (25–30): sophisticated, purposeful control of a wide range of sentence forms integrated fluently into the narrative/reflective voice; punctuation and grammar accurate throughout; spelling accurate throughout. Max 30. Combined maximum: 88.

Unit 4 乙部: Reading Literary and Non-fiction Texts

Spend 50 minutes completing three reading tasks: one comparative literary task (using an insert) and two non-fiction analytical tasks.
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题目 1 · Comparative Literary Reading Analysis (Two Extracts)
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Task 1: Spend 20 minutes on this task. Total 32 marks.

Read the two extracts below, printed on the separate insert. Text A is from a novel about a woman returning to her late mother's house. Text B is from a novel about a man returning to his childhood street after forty years abroad.

Text A

The key still turned the same way it always had — two clicks, not one, because the lock had never quite sat straight in its frame. Inside, the hallway smelled of dust and, faintly, of her mother's perfume, though the bottle itself had been packed into a box marked CHARITY three weeks ago. Mairead stood in the doorway for a long moment before she made herself step over the threshold. The wallpaper in the hall — small yellow flowers, chosen in 1987 and never once discussed since — had not been touched. Neither, it seemed, had anything else. Her school photographs still marched up the staircase in their cheap gilt frames, growing more gap-toothed and then less so with each year, stopping abruptly at seventeen, the year she had left for university and never quite come back. She had expected the house to feel smaller, the way people always said childhood houses did. Instead it felt exactly the size it had always been, and it was she who no longer fit inside it.

Text B

Forty years, Solomon thought, and the mango tree was still there, though it leaned now like an old man learning to accept a stick. He had pictured this street a hundred times from the other side of the world — grey, cold, filed away in a drawer marked before — and none of his pictures had prepared him for how loud it would be: goats, a radio somewhere playing something with too much bass, two boys arguing over a bicycle with only one working brake. The house itself had been repainted a blue his mother would never have chosen, and a stranger's washing hung where his mother's had once hung, moving in exactly the same wind. He had told his daughter, on the flight over, that he was not sentimental about this place, that he was only coming for the funeral and would be gone again within the week. Standing now at the gate, his hand resting on iron he remembered as being taller, he understood that he had been lying to her, and, worse, that he had known it at the time.

Compare and contrast how the writers have created a sense of return and changed perspective in both extracts. Present supporting evidence from both texts.
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Both writers create a powerful sense of return by focusing on small, concrete physical details rather than direct statements of feeling, trusting the reader to infer the emotional weight beneath them. In Text A, the writer emphasises stasis and preservation: the lock that 'still turned the same way it always had', the wallpaper 'chosen in 1987 and never once discussed since', and the school photographs that 'march up the staircase' but stop abruptly 'at seventeen' all suggest a house held deliberately still at the exact moment Mairead left it, as though time continued everywhere except within these walls. This is reinforced by the precise, almost forensic noticing of detail ('two clicks, not one'), which conveys a character who knows this house intimately, in her body, even after years away. Text B, in contrast, builds its sense of return around change and disruption: 'the mango tree was still there, though it leaned now like an old man learning to accept a stick' personifies decline through simile, while the sensory overload of 'goats, a radio somewhere playing something with too much bass, two boys arguing' overwhelms Solomon's static, decades-old memory ('filed away in a drawer marked before') with noisy, uncontrollable present reality. Both writers use a similarly understated final structural move: rather than stating the character's emotion directly, each extract closes on a quiet, precise moment of self-realisation. Text A closes with the paradoxical observation that the house 'felt exactly the size it had always been, and it was she who no longer fit inside it' — locating the change in the character rather than the place. Text B closes even more directly on self-deception, as Solomon 'understood that he had been lying to' his daughter about his indifference, 'and, worse, that he had known it at the time' — the adverb 'worse' signalling a moment of uncomfortable self-knowledge that mirrors Mairead's realisation in Text A. The key difference between the extracts lies in what has changed: in Text A, the house is unnervingly unchanged and it is the narrator's relationship to it that has shifted; in Text B, the physical world has changed dramatically (colour, noise, ownership) while it is Solomon's suppressed emotional attachment that turns out, in fact, not to have changed at all.

评分标准

Marked using a Competence Level Matrix (CL1–CL5) assessing comparison of content/ideas AND comparison of language/structural technique across both texts, with supporting evidence. CL1 (1–6): simple, largely unlinked comments on each text separately with minimal comparison. CL2 (7–13): some valid points of comparison/contrast identified (e.g. 'both are about going home') with limited textual support. CL3 (14–20): clear, structured comparison covering both similarity and difference, supported by relevant quotation from both texts, with some comment on language choices (e.g. simile in Text B, listing in Text A). CL4 (21–27): well-developed comparison exploring both writers' methods in some depth (e.g. structural parallels between the two endings), precise and well-integrated evidence from both texts. CL5 (28–32): sophisticated, closely evidenced comparison exploring subtle similarities and differences in theme, structure and language (e.g. the shared 'quiet realisation' ending structure despite opposite surface content — stillness versus change), sustained across the whole response with assured critical vocabulary and confident synthesis rather than sequential single-text treatment. Max 32 marks; credit any valid comparative point with evidence from both texts.
题目 2 · Non-fiction Text Language & Engagement Analysis (Extract Part 1)
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Task 2: Spend 15 minutes on this task. Total 15 marks.

Read the non-fiction text below.

Is the Independent Bookshop Really Dying?

[Paragraph 1] Walk down most British high streets today and you will notice the same gaps: the shoe-repair shop that closed in 2019, the travel agent that became a vape shop, and, more often than either, the bookshop that simply is not there anymore. Industry figures suggest that the number of independent bookshops has fallen by nearly a third since the turn of the century, and it would be easy to write the obituary now and move on. Except that, oddly, in the last five years, something has started to reverse.

[Paragraph 2] New independent bookshops are opening at a rate not seen since the 1990s, and not only in wealthy university towns where you might expect them to survive. A shop in a former butcher's premises in a mid-sized market town reports queues on Saturday mornings. Its owner, who left a career in logistics to open it, says the shop's real product is not the book itself — 'you can get any book cheaper online in about four clicks' — but the twenty minutes a customer spends being recommended one by a person who has actually read it.

[Paragraph 3] Not everyone is convinced this represents a genuine recovery rather than a handful of well-publicised exceptions. Rent remains the single biggest threat to any small shop, and several openings in the past two years have already been followed by closures once an initial burst of curiosity faded. Online retailers, meanwhile, continue to sell the overwhelming majority of books bought in this country, discounted in ways a small shop can never match. Whether the independent bookshop is undergoing a genuine revival or merely a slower, more photogenic decline may depend less on nostalgia than on whether enough customers are willing to pay slightly more for the twenty minutes of conversation that comes with it.

Source: Adapted from a newspaper's business and culture section.

Explain how the writer engages the reader's interest in the opening paragraph. Support your comments with evidence from the text.
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解题

The writer engages the reader's interest from the very first sentence by using a concrete, escalating list of familiar high-street closures: 'the shoe-repair shop that closed in 2019, the travel agent that became a vape shop, and, more often than either, the bookshop that simply is not there anymore'. The list device builds towards the bookshop as its climactic final item, signalled by the comparative phrase 'more often than either', which immediately establishes the article's specific focus while inviting the reader to picture their own local high street. The writer then adds authority and scale through a precise, alarming statistic — the number of independent bookshops has 'fallen by nearly a third since the turn of the century' — which is stated plainly, without exaggeration, lending the piece credibility before its argument develops. Interest is sharpened further by the writer's admission of the obvious, expected response ('it would be easy to write the obituary now and move on'), only to undercut it immediately with the short, structurally isolated sentence 'Except that, oddly, in the last five years, something has started to reverse.' The adverb 'oddly' and the deliberately vague, teasing phrase 'something has started to reverse' withhold the specific detail of what has changed, creating a hook that compels the reader into paragraph two to find out exactly what this reversal looks like.

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Marked using Competence Levels (CL1–CL5) assessing identification of engaging features AND explanation of their effect, with textual evidence. CL1 (1–3): simple identification with little explanation. CL2 (4–6): some relevant features identified (e.g. the statistic) with general comment on interest/engagement. CL3 (7–9): a range of features identified (list structure, statistic, structural turn) with clear, evidenced explanation of how each engages the reader. CL4 (10–12): well-developed analysis with precise evidence and clear understanding of how the writer builds and then subverts expectation. CL5 (13–15): sophisticated, closely evidenced analysis of subtle choices (e.g. the climactic positioning of the bookshop in the list, the withholding effect of 'something has started to reverse') with assured critical vocabulary. Max 15 marks.
题目 3 · Non-fiction Text Perspective & Language Analysis (Extract Part 2)
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Task 3: Spend 15 minutes on this task. Total 15 marks.

Re-read the text above about independent bookshops.

Explain how the writer presents a balanced range of viewpoints in the final two paragraphs of the text. Support your comments with evidence from the text.
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The writer presents a balanced range of viewpoints across the final two paragraphs by giving comparable weight and specificity to both the optimistic and sceptical positions, rather than allowing one to dominate. Paragraph two supports the positive view with concrete, credible detail: a named type of premises ('a former butcher's premises'), a specific detail about footfall ('reports queues on Saturday mornings'), and a direct quotation from the shop's owner that articulates the argument in the owner's own persuasive terms ('you can get any book cheaper online in about four clicks... but the twenty minutes a customer spends being recommended one'). Paragraph three then introduces counter-evidence with equal specificity and confidence, opening with the direct, unhedged statement 'Not everyone is convinced', before listing concrete risks: rent as 'the single biggest threat', recent 'closures once an initial burst of curiosity faded', and the continuing dominance of 'online retailers' who sell 'the overwhelming majority of books'. Crucially, the writer does not simply present two lists and stop; the article closes by explicitly framing the question as unresolved, using tentative, hedged language — 'may depend less on nostalgia than on whether enough customers are willing to pay' — rather than a confident final verdict. This deliberate use of modal, non-committal phrasing ('may depend') at the structurally significant final sentence signals to the reader that the writer's purpose is balanced exploration rather than persuasion towards either the optimistic or pessimistic reading of the bookshop's prospects.

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Marked using Competence Levels (CL1–CL5) assessing identification of balance/perspective AND explanation of how language achieves it, with evidence. CL1 (1–3): simple, general statement that 'both sides' are given, with little evidence. CL2 (4–6): some relevant evidence identified for each viewpoint with basic comment. CL3 (7–9): clear identification of evidence for both the positive and sceptical viewpoints, with some comment on how balance is achieved (e.g. equal space, hedged language). CL4 (10–12): well-developed explanation of how specific language choices (direct quotation, statistics, hedged modal phrasing) construct balance, with precise evidence from both paragraphs. CL5 (13–15): sophisticated analysis of the writer's structural and linguistic control of balance (e.g. matching specificity of detail on both sides, the significance of ending on a conditional rather than a verdict), sustained with assured critical vocabulary. Max 15 marks.

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