题目 1 · essay
25 分Read this poem, and then answer the question that follows it:
**Report to Wordsworth**
You should be here, Nature has need of you.
She has been laid waste. Smothered by the smog,
the flowers are dying, the trees are gassed,
the monsters of our progress have diseased her womb.
Lions and pandas, down to the last sky-lark,
walk the planks of the air, climb the stairs of extinction.
Forget the sheep, the flutes, the quiet lakes.
The poetry of earth is slowly dying,
and we are silent hours. O Robin, our world
is dying; the Great Pan is dead indeed,
and Neptune lies helpless as a stranded whale,
while Triton’s groans are choked by petrol,
and the sea-wind smells of diesel. We are
busy on the highway, with our engines,
speeding towards the final grand collision.
How does Boey Kim Cheng strikingly convey a sense of urgency and despair about the destruction of nature in this poem?
**Report to Wordsworth**
You should be here, Nature has need of you.
She has been laid waste. Smothered by the smog,
the flowers are dying, the trees are gassed,
the monsters of our progress have diseased her womb.
Lions and pandas, down to the last sky-lark,
walk the planks of the air, climb the stairs of extinction.
Forget the sheep, the flutes, the quiet lakes.
The poetry of earth is slowly dying,
and we are silent hours. O Robin, our world
is dying; the Great Pan is dead indeed,
and Neptune lies helpless as a stranded whale,
while Triton’s groans are choked by petrol,
and the sea-wind smells of diesel. We are
busy on the highway, with our engines,
speeding towards the final grand collision.
How does Boey Kim Cheng strikingly convey a sense of urgency and despair about the destruction of nature in this poem?
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解题
In 'Report to Wordsworth', Boey Kim Cheng powerfully expresses his urgent grief and anger at humanity's destruction of the environment through several key poetic techniques:
1. **Apostrophe and the Romantic Legacy**: The poem opens with a direct appeal, \"You should be here, Nature has need of you,\" evoking the spirit of William Wordsworth. By addressing the quintessential Romantic poet, Cheng emphasizes the absence of a powerful voice to advocate for the natural world. This immediately establishes a tone of profound distress and urgency, signaling that the ecological crisis has surpassed anything Wordsworth could have imagined.
2. **Violent and Pathological Imagery**: Cheng uses stark, clinical, and violent vocabulary to shock the reader. Nature is personified as a mother whose \"womb\" has been \"diseased\" by the \"monsters of our progress.\" The use of words like \"smog,\" \"gassed,\" \"petrol,\" and \"diesel\" creates a suffocating sensory atmosphere that contrasts sharply with Romantic ideals of fresh air and pristine landscapes.
3. **The Grim Reality of Extinction**: The poet depicts a forced, tragic march toward oblivion for all living creatures. Animals like \"Lions and pandas, down to the last sky-lark\" do not merely die; they \"walk the planks of the air, climb the stairs of extinction.\" This metaphor portrays extinction as a desperate, inescapable execution sentence imposed by human activity.
4. **Subversion of Classical Mythology**: Pastoral and mythological symbols of nature's power are shown as utterly defeated. Great Pan is \"dead indeed,\" Neptune (god of the sea) is reduced to a helpless \"stranded whale,\" and Triton’s voice is literally \"choked by petrol.\" By rendering these ancient deities powerless, Cheng conveys a terrifying level of despair—not even the gods of nature can survive modern industrial pollution.
5. **The Final Grand Collision**: The poem concludes with a chilling indictment of human apathy. While the biosphere collapses, humanity remains distracted, \"busy on the highway, with our engines.\" The final image of \"speeding towards the final grand collision\" delivers a powerful, apocalyptic warning, conveying a desperate urgency that time is running out.
1. **Apostrophe and the Romantic Legacy**: The poem opens with a direct appeal, \"You should be here, Nature has need of you,\" evoking the spirit of William Wordsworth. By addressing the quintessential Romantic poet, Cheng emphasizes the absence of a powerful voice to advocate for the natural world. This immediately establishes a tone of profound distress and urgency, signaling that the ecological crisis has surpassed anything Wordsworth could have imagined.
2. **Violent and Pathological Imagery**: Cheng uses stark, clinical, and violent vocabulary to shock the reader. Nature is personified as a mother whose \"womb\" has been \"diseased\" by the \"monsters of our progress.\" The use of words like \"smog,\" \"gassed,\" \"petrol,\" and \"diesel\" creates a suffocating sensory atmosphere that contrasts sharply with Romantic ideals of fresh air and pristine landscapes.
3. **The Grim Reality of Extinction**: The poet depicts a forced, tragic march toward oblivion for all living creatures. Animals like \"Lions and pandas, down to the last sky-lark\" do not merely die; they \"walk the planks of the air, climb the stairs of extinction.\" This metaphor portrays extinction as a desperate, inescapable execution sentence imposed by human activity.
4. **Subversion of Classical Mythology**: Pastoral and mythological symbols of nature's power are shown as utterly defeated. Great Pan is \"dead indeed,\" Neptune (god of the sea) is reduced to a helpless \"stranded whale,\" and Triton’s voice is literally \"choked by petrol.\" By rendering these ancient deities powerless, Cheng conveys a terrifying level of despair—not even the gods of nature can survive modern industrial pollution.
5. **The Final Grand Collision**: The poem concludes with a chilling indictment of human apathy. While the biosphere collapses, humanity remains distracted, \"busy on the highway, with our engines.\" The final image of \"speeding towards the final grand collision\" delivers a powerful, apocalyptic warning, conveying a desperate urgency that time is running out.
评分标准
Candidates should be evaluated using the Cambridge IGCSE 0475 Band Descriptors (Levels 1 to 8). Marks are awarded out of 25 based on the following Assessment Objectives:
* **AO1 (Knowledge/Textual Reference)**: Candidates must demonstrate detailed knowledge of the poem by incorporating well-selected references. Credit should be given for citing specific words and phrases (e.g., \"diseased her womb\", \"stranded whale\", \"choked by petrol\") to support arguments.
* **AO2 (Deeper Understanding)**: Excellent responses will explore the core tension of the poem—the contrast between Romantic/mythological ideals and the bleak reality of industrialization, and how Cheng highlights human complicity and indifference.
* **AO3 (Analysis of Language, Structure, and Form)**: Higher-tier responses must analyze how the writer achieves his effects. This includes exploring:
- The structure of the sonnet and how its traditional associations with love/harmony are subverted to depict chaos.
- The sensory impact of the olfactory and auditory imagery (the smell of \"diesel\", Triton's choked \"groans\").
- The metaphorical language of execution (\"walk the planks\").
* **AO4 (Informed Personal Response)**: Candidates must communicate a sensitive and evaluative personal engagement with the speaker's urgent and despairing tone.
**Indicative Content Bands**:
- **Level 8 (23-25 marks)**: Sustains a perceptive, highly critical understanding of the text, showing individuality and insight. Responds with close sensitivity to the linguistic effects of the pathological and mythological subversion.
- **Level 6 (17-19 marks)**: Shows a clear understanding of the poem's deeper implications with a developed response to how the writer uses language and imagery to evoke despair.
- **Level 4 (11-13 marks)**: Offers a straightforward personal response, demonstrating basic understanding of the poem's theme (pollution/destruction) with some supporting textual details.
* **AO1 (Knowledge/Textual Reference)**: Candidates must demonstrate detailed knowledge of the poem by incorporating well-selected references. Credit should be given for citing specific words and phrases (e.g., \"diseased her womb\", \"stranded whale\", \"choked by petrol\") to support arguments.
* **AO2 (Deeper Understanding)**: Excellent responses will explore the core tension of the poem—the contrast between Romantic/mythological ideals and the bleak reality of industrialization, and how Cheng highlights human complicity and indifference.
* **AO3 (Analysis of Language, Structure, and Form)**: Higher-tier responses must analyze how the writer achieves his effects. This includes exploring:
- The structure of the sonnet and how its traditional associations with love/harmony are subverted to depict chaos.
- The sensory impact of the olfactory and auditory imagery (the smell of \"diesel\", Triton's choked \"groans\").
- The metaphorical language of execution (\"walk the planks\").
* **AO4 (Informed Personal Response)**: Candidates must communicate a sensitive and evaluative personal engagement with the speaker's urgent and despairing tone.
**Indicative Content Bands**:
- **Level 8 (23-25 marks)**: Sustains a perceptive, highly critical understanding of the text, showing individuality and insight. Responds with close sensitivity to the linguistic effects of the pathological and mythological subversion.
- **Level 6 (17-19 marks)**: Shows a clear understanding of the poem's deeper implications with a developed response to how the writer uses language and imagery to evoke despair.
- **Level 4 (11-13 marks)**: Offers a straightforward personal response, demonstrating basic understanding of the poem's theme (pollution/destruction) with some supporting textual details.