题目 1 · essay
25 分Explore the ways in which Halligan memorably conveys the speaker's changing attitude towards the cockroach in *The Cockroach*.
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An outstanding essay will focus on:
- The initial physical description: The speaker watches the cockroach with a degree of objective curiosity, noting its 'restless' and 'eccentric' journey. This reflects a detached, spectator-like attitude.
- The transition to personification: The cockroach is described with human qualities ('grew bold', 'seemed to pay', 'has a medium's trust'), which indicates the speaker's growing involvement and empathy.
- The imagery of struggle and confusion: The cockroach climbing 'the sheer white wall' and ending up in 'the wreckage of a jar' creates a sense of futility, foreshadowing the speaker's own feelings.
- The final resolution: The sudden shift in the last line ('I recognized myself') represents a profound moment of identification, where the speaker's curiosity turns inward, realizing that human endeavors are just as circular, erratic, and ultimately limited as the cockroach's struggle.
- The initial physical description: The speaker watches the cockroach with a degree of objective curiosity, noting its 'restless' and 'eccentric' journey. This reflects a detached, spectator-like attitude.
- The transition to personification: The cockroach is described with human qualities ('grew bold', 'seemed to pay', 'has a medium's trust'), which indicates the speaker's growing involvement and empathy.
- The imagery of struggle and confusion: The cockroach climbing 'the sheer white wall' and ending up in 'the wreckage of a jar' creates a sense of futility, foreshadowing the speaker's own feelings.
- The final resolution: The sudden shift in the last line ('I recognized myself') represents a profound moment of identification, where the speaker's curiosity turns inward, realizing that human endeavors are just as circular, erratic, and ultimately limited as the cockroach's struggle.
评分标准
Band 8 (23–25 marks): Sustains a perceptive, highly critical, and personal understanding of the poem. Explores in detail the linguistic and structural methods used by Halligan to develop the speaker's shifting feelings. Supports arguments with exceptionally well-chosen textual evidence.
Band 7 (20–22 marks): Demonstrates a clear critical understanding of the poem, showing sensitive awareness of Halligan's techniques and the shift from objective observation to personal reflection.
Band 6 (17–19 marks): Shows a clear understanding of the poem's theme and the speaker's changing thoughts. Makes a developed response with careful reference to the text.
Band 5 (14–16 marks): Shows a good general understanding of the cockroach's symbolic journey and makes a reasonably developed response to the poem's concluding lines.
Band 7 (20–22 marks): Demonstrates a clear critical understanding of the poem, showing sensitive awareness of Halligan's techniques and the shift from objective observation to personal reflection.
Band 6 (17–19 marks): Shows a clear understanding of the poem's theme and the speaker's changing thoughts. Makes a developed response with careful reference to the text.
Band 5 (14–16 marks): Shows a good general understanding of the cockroach's symbolic journey and makes a reasonably developed response to the poem's concluding lines.