题目 1 · essay
25 分Read this poem, and then answer the question that follows it:
Hunting Snake
Sun-warmed in the late season’s grace,
Under the autumn’s gentlest sky
We walked, and froze half-through a pace.
The great black snake went gleaming by.
Head-down, tongue-flickering on the trail
He quested, black, metallic-bright,
Cold, dark and splendid as he slid
Down the deep grass that hid his prey.
We breathed again, our breath released,
We watched him as he went;
Our eyes went with him as he passed.
Cold on our track the shadow fell.
Still for a moment, then we sighed,
And took each other’s hand,
And walked on in the sun.
(Judith Wright)
How does Wright strikingly convey the impact of the snake's sudden appearance in this poem?
Hunting Snake
Sun-warmed in the late season’s grace,
Under the autumn’s gentlest sky
We walked, and froze half-through a pace.
The great black snake went gleaming by.
Head-down, tongue-flickering on the trail
He quested, black, metallic-bright,
Cold, dark and splendid as he slid
Down the deep grass that hid his prey.
We breathed again, our breath released,
We watched him as he went;
Our eyes went with him as he passed.
Cold on our track the shadow fell.
Still for a moment, then we sighed,
And took each other’s hand,
And walked on in the sun.
(Judith Wright)
How does Wright strikingly convey the impact of the snake's sudden appearance in this poem?
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解题
To achieve a high mark, candidates should explore:
- Contrast and Suspense: The opening lines establish a tranquil, harmonious setting ('late season's grace', 'autumn's gentlest sky') which is abruptly shattered by the word 'froze'. The physical interruption of walking mid-stride ('froze half-through a pace') mirrors the sudden psychological shock of the encounter.
- Aesthetics and Danger: Wright presents the snake not merely as a threat but as a magnificent force of nature. Descriptors like 'gleaming', 'metallic-bright', and 'splendid' suggest a majestic, almost mechanical precision and otherworldly beauty. The description of its movement ('slid', 'quested') and feeding instinct ('deep grass that hid his prey') emphasizes its predatory efficiency.
- The Onlookers' Somatic Response: The physical holding of breath ('breathed again, our breath released') reveals how deeply affected the humans are. The phrase 'Cold on our track the shadow fell' introduces a chilling sense of mortality and vulnerability.
- Structure and Shift in Tone: The final stanza shows a slow recovery of human agency. The sigh, the holding of hands, and the return to walking 'in the sun' show the transition from shock to relief, leaving the readers with a profound sense of awe at nature's power.
- Contrast and Suspense: The opening lines establish a tranquil, harmonious setting ('late season's grace', 'autumn's gentlest sky') which is abruptly shattered by the word 'froze'. The physical interruption of walking mid-stride ('froze half-through a pace') mirrors the sudden psychological shock of the encounter.
- Aesthetics and Danger: Wright presents the snake not merely as a threat but as a magnificent force of nature. Descriptors like 'gleaming', 'metallic-bright', and 'splendid' suggest a majestic, almost mechanical precision and otherworldly beauty. The description of its movement ('slid', 'quested') and feeding instinct ('deep grass that hid his prey') emphasizes its predatory efficiency.
- The Onlookers' Somatic Response: The physical holding of breath ('breathed again, our breath released') reveals how deeply affected the humans are. The phrase 'Cold on our track the shadow fell' introduces a chilling sense of mortality and vulnerability.
- Structure and Shift in Tone: The final stanza shows a slow recovery of human agency. The sigh, the holding of hands, and the return to walking 'in the sun' show the transition from shock to relief, leaving the readers with a profound sense of awe at nature's power.
评分标准
Level descriptors should be used to assess the quality of the response.
Band 8 (23-25 marks):
- Demonstrates detailed, sensitive knowledge of the poem with superb textual support.
- Sustains a highly critical, insightful, and individual understanding of how Wright uses language and form to present the snake.
- Responds with excellent precision to the effects of language, including sound effects, structural shifts, and the contrast between the peaceful setting and the tense atmosphere.
- Sustains personal and evaluative engagement throughout.
Band 7 (20-22 marks):
- Integrates much well-selected reference to the text.
- Shows clear critical understanding of the deeper implications of the poem.
- Responds sensitively and in detail to the way the writer achieves effects (e.g., contrasting the tranquil starting setting with the sudden frozen posture).
Band 6 (17-19 marks):
- Shows a clear understanding of the poem and its themes.
- Makes a developed response to the language used to describe the snake ('metallic-bright', 'splendid').
- Supports points with careful and relevant textual references.
Band 5 (14-16 marks):
- Shows understanding of the surface meaning of the poem with some awareness of deeper implications.
- Makes some response to the writer's use of language and imagery.
- Uses supporting evidence from the text.
Band 4 (11-13 marks):
- Shows some understanding of the literal meaning of the poem.
- Offers basic personal response with some reference to the text.
Band 8 (23-25 marks):
- Demonstrates detailed, sensitive knowledge of the poem with superb textual support.
- Sustains a highly critical, insightful, and individual understanding of how Wright uses language and form to present the snake.
- Responds with excellent precision to the effects of language, including sound effects, structural shifts, and the contrast between the peaceful setting and the tense atmosphere.
- Sustains personal and evaluative engagement throughout.
Band 7 (20-22 marks):
- Integrates much well-selected reference to the text.
- Shows clear critical understanding of the deeper implications of the poem.
- Responds sensitively and in detail to the way the writer achieves effects (e.g., contrasting the tranquil starting setting with the sudden frozen posture).
Band 6 (17-19 marks):
- Shows a clear understanding of the poem and its themes.
- Makes a developed response to the language used to describe the snake ('metallic-bright', 'splendid').
- Supports points with careful and relevant textual references.
Band 5 (14-16 marks):
- Shows understanding of the surface meaning of the poem with some awareness of deeper implications.
- Makes some response to the writer's use of language and imagery.
- Uses supporting evidence from the text.
Band 4 (11-13 marks):
- Shows some understanding of the literal meaning of the poem.
- Offers basic personal response with some reference to the text.